1月SAT作文實(shí)例講解
2010年1月作文話題
Do people make the greatest discoveries by exploring what is unfamiliar to them or by paying close attention to what seems familiar?
關(guān)于審題,這是一個(gè)難題。同學(xué)們在考場上需要從腦海里面把準(zhǔn)備的例子迅速想一遍,看看哪個(gè)更適合此題目。由于限定了discovery, 筆者班上的同學(xué)們應(yīng)該能快速想到伽利略或者哥白尼。前者做出了偉大的發(fā)現(xiàn),比如兩球下降的正確理論;后者發(fā)現(xiàn)了日心說。
以前者為例,他發(fā)現(xiàn)的理論很明顯是符合題干中的后者的,因?yàn)閮汕蛳陆抵熬陀羞^相關(guān)理論,他對此熟悉的理論做了分析研究,最終有了正確的偉大的發(fā)現(xiàn)。
還是給大家找一篇文章作為素材的參考,寫作者是Lily 同學(xué),去年6月考試作為是滿分,習(xí)作的題目是is it necessary to question the authority?
Another story of Galileo is also a very typical one to explain the importance of challenging the authority. It is known to us all that Aristotle is a great philosopher in ancient Greece and is widely regarded as the most erudite mind so far. His theories, as a result, are firmly believed by almost everyone in the Middle Age.
However, Galileo, a talented physicist at that time, found one of Aristotles theories that the velocities of two falling weights are proportional to their weights incorrect through his thousands of experiments. (為什么挑戰(zhàn))
He finally decided to show his research results by doing an experiment on the Leaning Tower of Pisa in front of the public, which later turned out to be a blockbuster in the field of physics.
Galileo dropped two iron balls of different weights to the ground and everybody present witnessed the historic moment that the two balls reached the ground at exactly the same time. (怎么挑戰(zhàn))
Galileos experiments and discoveries violently challenged that of Aristotle and started a revolutionary debate among scientists. More importantly, he corrected thousands of peoples wrong beliefs and contributed a lot to the modern physics. (挑戰(zhàn)的結(jié)果)
實(shí)戰(zhàn)運(yùn)用:題目 Do people make the greatest discoveries by exploring what is unfamiliar to them or by paying close attention to what seems familiar?
我們先確認(rèn)觀點(diǎn):應(yīng)該研究看上去熟悉的。關(guān)鍵字:研究看上去熟悉的重大發(fā)現(xiàn)。接下來寫出例子的基本思路:
背景(亞里士多德是權(quán)威)---提出了兩球下降理論(速度和質(zhì)量成正比)伽利略(Pisa大學(xué)畢業(yè)后,開始大量閱讀書籍)研究公眾十分熟悉,并且基本公認(rèn)的理論兩球下降理論認(rèn)為沒有經(jīng)過試驗(yàn)檢測,不可靠比薩斜塔實(shí)驗(yàn)結(jié)果,兩球同時(shí)落地偉大的發(fā)現(xiàn)(正確的理論速度和質(zhì)量部成正比)科學(xué)界的突破,打破對于權(quán)威的盲目相信,實(shí)驗(yàn)科學(xué)的創(chuàng)始人。
修改版:
Another story of Galileo is also a very typical one to explain the importance of exploring what is familiar to us. It is known to us all that Aristotle is a great philosopher in ancient Greece and is widely regarded as the most erudite mind so far. His theories, as a result, are firmly believed by almost everyone in the Middle Age. Among all these theories, one theory that the velocities of two falling weights are proportional to their weights enjoyed widespread familiarity among the public. (熟悉的東西是什么)
At that time, Galileo, an unknown scientist, was absorbed in books of Aristotle. However, instead of totally copying the thoughts of him, Galileo developed his own way of thinking and gave priority to the effect of experimentation on science, doubting the feasibility of the widely known theory about the speed of falling objects. (伽利略研究熟悉的東西)
He finally decided to find out the truth by doing an experiment on the Leaning Tower of Pisa in front of the public. During the experiment, Galileo dropped two iron balls of different weights to the ground and everybody present witnessed the historic moment that the two balls reached the ground at exactly the same time. (伽利略挑戰(zhàn)熟悉的理論)
That experiment witnessed the birth of one of the greatest discoveries in the field of science, namely, the theory that the velocities of two falling objects are not related to their weights. More important is the fact that this finding weakens the blind trust of the public toward the authority and paved the way for the widespread use of experimentation in testing the practicability of a theory.
2010年1月作文話題
Do people make the greatest discoveries by exploring what is unfamiliar to them or by paying close attention to what seems familiar?
關(guān)于審題,這是一個(gè)難題。同學(xué)們在考場上需要從腦海里面把準(zhǔn)備的例子迅速想一遍,看看哪個(gè)更適合此題目。由于限定了discovery, 筆者班上的同學(xué)們應(yīng)該能快速想到伽利略或者哥白尼。前者做出了偉大的發(fā)現(xiàn),比如兩球下降的正確理論;后者發(fā)現(xiàn)了日心說。
以前者為例,他發(fā)現(xiàn)的理論很明顯是符合題干中的后者的,因?yàn)閮汕蛳陆抵熬陀羞^相關(guān)理論,他對此熟悉的理論做了分析研究,最終有了正確的偉大的發(fā)現(xiàn)。
還是給大家找一篇文章作為素材的參考,寫作者是Lily 同學(xué),去年6月考試作為是滿分,習(xí)作的題目是is it necessary to question the authority?
Another story of Galileo is also a very typical one to explain the importance of challenging the authority. It is known to us all that Aristotle is a great philosopher in ancient Greece and is widely regarded as the most erudite mind so far. His theories, as a result, are firmly believed by almost everyone in the Middle Age.
However, Galileo, a talented physicist at that time, found one of Aristotles theories that the velocities of two falling weights are proportional to their weights incorrect through his thousands of experiments. (為什么挑戰(zhàn))
He finally decided to show his research results by doing an experiment on the Leaning Tower of Pisa in front of the public, which later turned out to be a blockbuster in the field of physics.
Galileo dropped two iron balls of different weights to the ground and everybody present witnessed the historic moment that the two balls reached the ground at exactly the same time. (怎么挑戰(zhàn))
Galileos experiments and discoveries violently challenged that of Aristotle and started a revolutionary debate among scientists. More importantly, he corrected thousands of peoples wrong beliefs and contributed a lot to the modern physics. (挑戰(zhàn)的結(jié)果)
實(shí)戰(zhàn)運(yùn)用:題目 Do people make the greatest discoveries by exploring what is unfamiliar to them or by paying close attention to what seems familiar?
我們先確認(rèn)觀點(diǎn):應(yīng)該研究看上去熟悉的。關(guān)鍵字:研究看上去熟悉的重大發(fā)現(xiàn)。接下來寫出例子的基本思路:
背景(亞里士多德是權(quán)威)---提出了兩球下降理論(速度和質(zhì)量成正比)伽利略(Pisa大學(xué)畢業(yè)后,開始大量閱讀書籍)研究公眾十分熟悉,并且基本公認(rèn)的理論兩球下降理論認(rèn)為沒有經(jīng)過試驗(yàn)檢測,不可靠比薩斜塔實(shí)驗(yàn)結(jié)果,兩球同時(shí)落地偉大的發(fā)現(xiàn)(正確的理論速度和質(zhì)量部成正比)科學(xué)界的突破,打破對于權(quán)威的盲目相信,實(shí)驗(yàn)科學(xué)的創(chuàng)始人。
修改版:
Another story of Galileo is also a very typical one to explain the importance of exploring what is familiar to us. It is known to us all that Aristotle is a great philosopher in ancient Greece and is widely regarded as the most erudite mind so far. His theories, as a result, are firmly believed by almost everyone in the Middle Age. Among all these theories, one theory that the velocities of two falling weights are proportional to their weights enjoyed widespread familiarity among the public. (熟悉的東西是什么)
At that time, Galileo, an unknown scientist, was absorbed in books of Aristotle. However, instead of totally copying the thoughts of him, Galileo developed his own way of thinking and gave priority to the effect of experimentation on science, doubting the feasibility of the widely known theory about the speed of falling objects. (伽利略研究熟悉的東西)
He finally decided to find out the truth by doing an experiment on the Leaning Tower of Pisa in front of the public. During the experiment, Galileo dropped two iron balls of different weights to the ground and everybody present witnessed the historic moment that the two balls reached the ground at exactly the same time. (伽利略挑戰(zhàn)熟悉的理論)
That experiment witnessed the birth of one of the greatest discoveries in the field of science, namely, the theory that the velocities of two falling objects are not related to their weights. More important is the fact that this finding weakens the blind trust of the public toward the authority and paved the way for the widespread use of experimentation in testing the practicability of a theory.