思路點撥

　　此圖片描述的是一幅交通堵塞的場景。圖片中，車一輛接著一輛地堵在街上，各種抱怨聲不斷。毫無疑問，這幅圖反映的是城市交通的壓力問題。同時，汽車過多就意味著尾氣排放過多，所以這幅圖同時又反映了環(huán)保和低碳問題。

　　第一段：描述圖畫;第二段：分析交通堵塞給人和環(huán)境帶來的影響;第三段：建議措施。

　　思維拓展

　　建議措施部分，還可以從如下角度提出：

　　呼吁政府：投資完善基礎設施、繼續(xù)堅持限行的制度。

　　倡導低碳出行：步行、騎自行車。

　　倡導理智選擇城市：人全部擁擠在大城市帶來的負面影響。

　　高分范文

　　How horrible the traffic is! The picture depicts a scenario of a terrible traffic jam in the street. In fact, the traffic jam is so heavy that it is more of a parking lot than a crowded street①. Anxious passengers cannot take buses because there are few buses. Instead, the street is filled with too many private cars。

　　Exaggerated as it is, the phenomenon is not uncommon nowadays. With the number of private cars increasing②, traffic jams in metropolitans are bound to happen. Heavy transportation pressure in large cities may bring much inconvenience to people and exert negative impacts on the environment. On the one hand, when traffic jam happens, short distance in the past now seems to become terribly long, and drivers could do nothing but to wait. Therefore, a lot of precious time has been wasted on the road. On the other hand, exhausted gas emitted by cars③ has increased the burden of environment and caused carbon emission, which has diverted from the concept of living a low carbon life。

　　Therefore, effective measures should be taken to alleviate the traffic jam. Firstly, taxes levied on the sales of private cars④ should be raised so as to restrict private car ownership rate. Secondly, public transportation such as buses and subways, which are low-carbon transportation means, should be encouraged and promoted so that we can have a smooth transportation。

　　思路點撥

　　此圖片描述的是一幅交通堵塞的場景。圖片中，車一輛接著一輛地堵在街上，各種抱怨聲不斷。毫無疑問，這幅圖反映的是城市交通的壓力問題。同時，汽車過多就意味著尾氣排放過多，所以這幅圖同時又反映了環(huán)保和低碳問題。

　　第一段：描述圖畫;第二段：分析交通堵塞給人和環(huán)境帶來的影響;第三段：建議措施。

　　思維拓展

　　建議措施部分，還可以從如下角度提出：

　　呼吁政府：投資完善基礎設施、繼續(xù)堅持限行的制度。

　　倡導低碳出行：步行、騎自行車。

　　倡導理智選擇城市：人全部擁擠在大城市帶來的負面影響。

　　高分范文

　　How horrible the traffic is! The picture depicts a scenario of a terrible traffic jam in the street. In fact, the traffic jam is so heavy that it is more of a parking lot than a crowded street①. Anxious passengers cannot take buses because there are few buses. Instead, the street is filled with too many private cars。

　　Exaggerated as it is, the phenomenon is not uncommon nowadays. With the number of private cars increasing②, traffic jams in metropolitans are bound to happen. Heavy transportation pressure in large cities may bring much inconvenience to people and exert negative impacts on the environment. On the one hand, when traffic jam happens, short distance in the past now seems to become terribly long, and drivers could do nothing but to wait. Therefore, a lot of precious time has been wasted on the road. On the other hand, exhausted gas emitted by cars③ has increased the burden of environment and caused carbon emission, which has diverted from the concept of living a low carbon life。

　　Therefore, effective measures should be taken to alleviate the traffic jam. Firstly, taxes levied on the sales of private cars④ should be raised so as to restrict private car ownership rate. Secondly, public transportation such as buses and subways, which are low-carbon transportation means, should be encouraged and promoted so that we can have a smooth transportation。