考研英語(yǔ)待批改作文：

　　5-7分

　　第二篇：

　　Dear Bob,

　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your warm reception in this travel abroad. If it had not been for your assistance in this traveling that you are as a guide for me, I fear that I would have been lost so that I cannot find the way coming back.

　　Everyone agrees that it was you who patiently guide me to every tourist attractions and explain some of peculiar stories about sceneries. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語(yǔ)作文批改點(diǎn)評(píng)如下：

　　Dear Bob,

　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your warm reception in this travel (改為in the journey)abroad. If it had not been for your assistance in this traveling that you are as a guide for me, I fear that I would have been lost so that I cannot find the way coming back.

　　Every one agrees that it was you who patiently guide(改為guided) me to every tourist attractions and explain some of peculiar stories about sceneries. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　6分

　　同學(xué)你好，作文寫的還不錯(cuò)，但應(yīng)保持時(shí)態(tài)的前后一致以及固定搭配。

　　考研英語(yǔ)待批改作文：

　　5-7分

　　第二篇：

　　Dear Bob,

　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your warm reception in this travel abroad. If it had not been for your assistance in this traveling that you are as a guide for me, I fear that I would have been lost so that I cannot find the way coming back.

　　Everyone agrees that it was you who patiently guide me to every tourist attractions and explain some of peculiar stories about sceneries. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語(yǔ)作文批改點(diǎn)評(píng)如下：

　　Dear Bob,

　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your warm reception in this travel (改為in the journey)abroad. If it had not been for your assistance in this traveling that you are as a guide for me, I fear that I would have been lost so that I cannot find the way coming back.

　　Every one agrees that it was you who patiently guide(改為guided) me to every tourist attractions and explain some of peculiar stories about sceneries. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　6分

　　同學(xué)你好，作文寫的還不錯(cuò)，但應(yīng)保持時(shí)態(tài)的前后一致以及固定搭配。