考研英語待批改作文：

　　5-7分

　　第二篇

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　I just read an advertisement in yesterdays China Daily about the recruitment of your corporation. I would like to apply for a position as a business manager.

　　I understand that you are longing for highly-qualified individuals who process excellent skills, teamwork spirit and rich experience and I feel that I am competent to meet your requirement. My professional skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suit to your expectation. I am a recent graduate of Sun Yet-sen University with a bachorlors degree in Business Administration. In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as a staff assistant at the China telecom, where my practical skills were rapidly cultivated and quickly developed.

　　I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語作文批改點(diǎn)評如下：

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　I just read an advertisement in yesterdays China Daily about the recruitment of your corporation. I would like to apply for a position as a business manager.

　　I understand that you are longing for highly-qualified(改為high-qualified) individuals who process excellent skills, teamwork spirit and rich experience and I feel that I am competent to meet your requirement. My professional skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suit to your expectation. I am a recent graduate of Sun Yet-sen University with a bachorlors degree in Business Administration. In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as a staff assistant at the China telecom, where my practical skills were rapidly cultivated and quickly developed.

　　I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　7分

　　同學(xué)你好，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號與后面的單詞空一格。要注意控制字?jǐn)?shù)，考研的時候超過20個詞扣0.5分,超過50詞只給1分辛苦分。作文基本沒有什么問題。

　考研英語待批改作文：

　　5-7分

　　第二篇

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　I just read an advertisement in yesterdays China Daily about the recruitment of your corporation. I would like to apply for a position as a business manager.

　　I understand that you are longing for highly-qualified individuals who process excellent skills, teamwork spirit and rich experience and I feel that I am competent to meet your requirement. My professional skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suit to your expectation. I am a recent graduate of Sun Yet-sen University with a bachorlors degree in Business Administration. In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as a staff assistant at the China telecom, where my practical skills were rapidly cultivated and quickly developed.

　　I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語作文批改點(diǎn)評如下：

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　I just read an advertisement in yesterdays China Daily about the recruitment of your corporation. I would like to apply for a position as a business manager.

　　I understand that you are longing for highly-qualified(改為high-qualified) individuals who process excellent skills, teamwork spirit and rich experience and I feel that I am competent to meet your requirement. My professional skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suit to your expectation. I am a recent graduate of Sun Yet-sen University with a bachorlors degree in Business Administration. In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as a staff assistant at the China telecom, where my practical skills were rapidly cultivated and quickly developed.

　　I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　7分

　　同學(xué)你好，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號與后面的單詞空一格。要注意控制字?jǐn)?shù)，考研的時候超過20個詞扣0.5分,超過50詞只給1分辛苦分。作文基本沒有什么問題。