In the current society, with the rapid development of the Internet, shopping on the internet has been a fashion especially among the youngsters.

在當(dāng)今社會(huì)，隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的飛速發(fā)展，網(wǎng)上購物已經(jīng)成為一種時(shí)尚，尤其是青少年。

Online shopping has made our daily life become more convenient and feel comfortable. In the first place, shopping on the Internet can save much time so they would be able to concentrate more time and energy on their academic study. In the second place, the Internet has provided kinds of goods to consumers, and we can save much money through online shopping.

網(wǎng)上購物讓我們的生活變得更加方便和舒適。首先，在網(wǎng)上購物可以節(jié)省大量的時(shí)間，這樣他們就有更多的精力和時(shí)間花在學(xué)習(xí)上了。第二，互聯(lián)網(wǎng)為消費(fèi)者提供了各種各樣的商品，而且我們還可以節(jié)省很多錢。

However, every coin has two sides, online shopping also has shortcomings. We maybe buy some fake products online because of lacking of the face to face communication with sellers. What’s more, the delivery will increase the risk of items’ damage.

然而，每個(gè)硬幣都有兩面，網(wǎng)上購物也有其缺點(diǎn)。在網(wǎng)上我們可能會(huì)買到一些假的產(chǎn)品因?yàn)闊o法面對(duì)面與賣家溝通。更重要的是，物流也會(huì)增加商品損壞的風(fēng)險(xiǎn)。

Weighing up these two arguments, I prefer the former, because shopping on the internet has become more and more important to us in our daily life. We should follow the footsteps of the times.

權(quán)衡這兩種觀點(diǎn)，我更傾向于前者因?yàn)榫W(wǎng)上購物在我們?nèi)粘Ｉ钪性絹碓街匾恕Ｎ覀儜?yīng)該要跟上時(shí)代的腳步。

In the current society, with the rapid development of the Internet, shopping on the internet has been a fashion especially among the youngsters.

在當(dāng)今社會(huì)，隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的飛速發(fā)展，網(wǎng)上購物已經(jīng)成為一種時(shí)尚，尤其是青少年。

Online shopping has made our daily life become more convenient and feel comfortable. In the first place, shopping on the Internet can save much time so they would be able to concentrate more time and energy on their academic study. In the second place, the Internet has provided kinds of goods to consumers, and we can save much money through online shopping.

網(wǎng)上購物讓我們的生活變得更加方便和舒適。首先，在網(wǎng)上購物可以節(jié)省大量的時(shí)間，這樣他們就有更多的精力和時(shí)間花在學(xué)習(xí)上了。第二，互聯(lián)網(wǎng)為消費(fèi)者提供了各種各樣的商品，而且我們還可以節(jié)省很多錢。

However, every coin has two sides, online shopping also has shortcomings. We maybe buy some fake products online because of lacking of the face to face communication with sellers. What’s more, the delivery will increase the risk of items’ damage.

然而，每個(gè)硬幣都有兩面，網(wǎng)上購物也有其缺點(diǎn)。在網(wǎng)上我們可能會(huì)買到一些假的產(chǎn)品因?yàn)闊o法面對(duì)面與賣家溝通。更重要的是，物流也會(huì)增加商品損壞的風(fēng)險(xiǎn)。

Weighing up these two arguments, I prefer the former, because shopping on the internet has become more and more important to us in our daily life. We should follow the footsteps of the times.

權(quán)衡這兩種觀點(diǎn)，我更傾向于前者因?yàn)榫W(wǎng)上購物在我們?nèi)粘Ｉ钪性絹碓街匾恕Ｎ覀儜?yīng)該要跟上時(shí)代的腳步。