2024屆高考英語一輪復習全方位配套訓練人教版必修一Unit 4 Earthquakes短文改錯1

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

　　Passage 1

　　Dear Jerry，

　　I’m glad to receive your letter ask me what I’d like to be in the future.To be honest，I had dreamed of becoming a doctor since I was nine.I hurt one of my leg one day，that made me feel that I would not be able to walk any more.Unluckily，I was able to leave my bed a month later thanks to a doctor，who was very friendly and carefully.He gave me the courage I needed it to recover.Beside，while in hospital，I see many sick people.Since then I’ve decided to be a doctor so that I can work for people who are sick and in deed my help.I am believe my dream will be-come true one day if I study hard now.

　　答案：

　　Dear Jerry，

　　I’m glad to receive your letter me what I’d like to be in the

　　future.To be honest，I dreamed of becoming a doctor since I was

　　nine.I hurt one of my one day， made me feel that I would not

　　be able to walk any more.， I was able to leave my bed a

　　month later thanks to a doctor，who was very friendly and.He gave me the courage I needed it to recover.，while in hospital，I many sick people.Since then I’ve decided to be a doctor so that I can work for people who are sick and in deedmy

　　help.I am believe my dream will become true one day if I study hard now.

　　Passage 2

　　During the weekend I travelled by the air for the first time in my life.I usual travel by train or bus.It抯 both cheaper and safe.But to fly in the sky was something new to me.At the end I felt a little nervous.But very soon I became exciting when I found eme high up in the sky among the clouds.I also found that mountains，fields，river and so on were interestingly small.I enjoy the frightening and comfortable journey very much.After all，it is more interesting take a plane than to take a car.

　　答案：

　　During the weekend I travelled by the air for the first time in my life.I

　　travel by train or bus.It’s both cheaper and .But to fly in the sky was something new to me.At the

　　I felt a little nervous.But very soon I became

　　when I found

　　high up in the sky among the clouds.I also found that mountains，fields， and so on were interestingly small.I

　　the frightening

　　comfortable journey very much.After all，it is more interesting

　　take a plane than to take a car.

　　Passage 3

　　The other day my brother and me went to the cinema by bike.My brother is riding with me sitting on the seat behind.As we came the crossroads，a young man and a girl came up and stop us.“We’ve found you at last，” they said.Or we didn’t know them.Pointed to a policeman not far away，a young man explained，“He stopped us about half an hour before and made us to catch the next offender.So come on! Stand here.Hope you won’t have to wait as soon as we did.Good luck.”

　　答案：

　　The other day my brother and

　　went to the cinema by bike.My brother

　　riding with me sitting on the seat behind.As we came

　　the crossroads，a young man and a girl came up and

　　us.“We’ve found you at last，” they said.we didn’t know them. to a policeman not far away， young man explained，“He stopped us about half an hour

　　and made us to

　　catch the next offender.So come on! Stand here.Hope you won’t have to wait as

　　as we did.Good luck.”

　　2024屆高考英語一輪復習全方位配套訓練人教版必修一Unit 4 Earthquakes短文改錯1

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

　　Passage 1

　　Dear Jerry，

　　I’m glad to receive your letter ask me what I’d like to be in the future.To be honest，I had dreamed of becoming a doctor since I was nine.I hurt one of my leg one day，that made me feel that I would not be able to walk any more.Unluckily，I was able to leave my bed a month later thanks to a doctor，who was very friendly and carefully.He gave me the courage I needed it to recover.Beside，while in hospital，I see many sick people.Since then I’ve decided to be a doctor so that I can work for people who are sick and in deed my help.I am believe my dream will be-come true one day if I study hard now.

　　答案：

　　Dear Jerry，

　　I’m glad to receive your letter me what I’d like to be in the

　　future.To be honest，I dreamed of becoming a doctor since I was

　　nine.I hurt one of my one day， made me feel that I would not

　　be able to walk any more.， I was able to leave my bed a

　　month later thanks to a doctor，who was very friendly and.He gave me the courage I needed it to recover.，while in hospital，I many sick people.Since then I’ve decided to be a doctor so that I can work for people who are sick and in deedmy

　　help.I am believe my dream will become true one day if I study hard now.

　　Passage 2

　　During the weekend I travelled by the air for the first time in my life.I usual travel by train or bus.It抯 both cheaper and safe.But to fly in the sky was something new to me.At the end I felt a little nervous.But very soon I became exciting when I found eme high up in the sky among the clouds.I also found that mountains，fields，river and so on were interestingly small.I enjoy the frightening and comfortable journey very much.After all，it is more interesting take a plane than to take a car.

　　答案：

　　During the weekend I travelled by the air for the first time in my life.I

　　travel by train or bus.It’s both cheaper and .But to fly in the sky was something new to me.At the

　　I felt a little nervous.But very soon I became

　　when I found

　　high up in the sky among the clouds.I also found that mountains，fields， and so on were interestingly small.I

　　the frightening

　　comfortable journey very much.After all，it is more interesting

　　take a plane than to take a car.

　　Passage 3

　　The other day my brother and me went to the cinema by bike.My brother is riding with me sitting on the seat behind.As we came the crossroads，a young man and a girl came up and stop us.“We’ve found you at last，” they said.Or we didn’t know them.Pointed to a policeman not far away，a young man explained，“He stopped us about half an hour before and made us to catch the next offender.So come on! Stand here.Hope you won’t have to wait as soon as we did.Good luck.”

　　答案：

　　The other day my brother and

　　went to the cinema by bike.My brother

　　riding with me sitting on the seat behind.As we came

　　the crossroads，a young man and a girl came up and

　　us.“We’ve found you at last，” they said.we didn’t know them. to a policeman not far away， young man explained，“He stopped us about half an hour

　　and made us to

　　catch the next offender.So come on! Stand here.Hope you won’t have to wait as

　　as we did.Good luck.”