2024年高考總復習優化英語課件（四川專用）寫作教程：Module3
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寫作教程 Module 3 Notes, Messages and Memos 選修
寫作教程 小資料 便條、留言是一種簡短的書面表達的形式，常用于朋友、同事或家庭成員之間，內容包括：提供信息，安排活動，表示感謝、道歉,提出要求或咨詢等。邀請發言、請假條也屬便條之列。此類文體行文用詞簡潔明了，目的明確。留言也可以通過手機來發送。相對來講，備忘錄比便條和留言要正式一些，常用于工作中，提醒對方應該注意的事項。 WRITING CONVENTIONS·寫作模式
假定你是李華,于11月12日到達紐約,然后去找你的美國朋友Tom, 但他不在家.請按以下內容給Tom 留張便條. 1．火車晚點15分鐘,與接你的Tom錯過; 2．在火車上認識的定居美國的華人夫婦Taylor 把你帶到Tom 家,Tom 不在; 3．現在去Taylor 夫婦家; 例 4．今晚務必打電話給你:6461128. 注意:1.詞數 100左右; 2．不要逐字翻譯,可適當增加細節以使行文連貫; 3．開頭已給出. ?寫作模板 Nov.12 Tom, I’m in New York！________________________________________ ________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【參考范文】 Nov.12 Tom, I’m in New York！It’s really a pity that I didn’t find you at the railway station.You may have left when my train arrived, a quarter behind the schedule. Luckily, on the train I came across Mr.Taylor and his wife, who are Chinese and have been living in the US for several years.Seeing that there was no one to meet me at the station, they offered to drive me to your house. As you happen to be out, I’ve decided to accept the Taylors’ offer to stay at their house for the night. I’ve decided to put up here for the night.They are friendly to me, so don’t worry about me.I’ll be all right.It cannot be better if you can call me at my phone number 6461128 this evening. Looking forward to meeting you soon. Yours, Li Hua ?名師指津 1.常用詞匯: luckily, behind the schedule, come across, offer to do sth., put up, drive sb.home, worry about... 2.句型歸納: It’s really a pity that... As you happen to be out,... It cannot be better if... ?文體講解 1.便條、留言和備忘錄的格式與書信類似,分三個方面:時間、稱呼、內容和簽名.但是稱呼只寫對方的名字,不必加客套詞dear之類,除非對長輩.結尾只簽自己的名字,不需要結束語yours 之類,除非對對方非常尊敬. 2.便條內容簡單明了.不寫與要轉達的口信無關的內容,不用客套話.如:I would appreciate it if you could...; It’s my great honor to.... 3.留言條的日期可以寫上年、月、日,也可以寫上星期幾或星期幾上、下午,或者只寫幾 日、幾點鐘.日期多寫在正文右上角,便條多用于熟人之間,因此,便條上的寫條人地址、結束語等都可省略. LANGUAGE FUNCTION·語言功能 1.不注重文字的推敲及句子的順序,也不拘泥于寫作形式. 2.經常用簡單句.常省去主語、賓語和助動詞等.如: Thank you for the repair. Back at 8∶00 p．m.. No milk today. Called around to see if you could come out tonight, but no one in. 3.根據情況許可,為節省時間和空間可以用縮略語或口語.如:用e.g.代替for example; 用a.m./p.m.代替上、下午; 用CU代替See you.用2nite 代替tonight等等.語言多變,通俗易懂. MODULE TASKS·模塊任務 寫一則請假條 假如你是李華,因昨天雨中踢足球患了感冒.今天早上你覺得頭疼,你媽媽給你量了體溫,發現你發燒,便帶你去看醫生.醫生說你需要臥床休息兩天.你寫一張假條特向陳老師請假.時間是10 月28 日. ________________________________________ One possible version: October 28 Dear Mr.Chen, I’m sorry to tell you that I can’t go to school today.I’ve got a cold because I played football in the rain yesterday. This morning, I had a headache.After taking my temperature,
my mother found that I had a high fever.She took me to see a doctor.The doctor advised me to stay in bed for two days. Now I’m writing to you to ask for two days’ sick leave. Yours respectfully, Li Hua
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寫作教程 Module 3 Notes, Messages and Memos 選修
寫作教程 小資料 便條、留言是一種簡短的書面表達的形式，常用于朋友、同事或家庭成員之間，內容包括：提供信息，安排活動，表示感謝、道歉,提出要求或咨詢等。邀請發言、請假條也屬便條之列。此類文體行文用詞簡潔明了，目的明確。留言也可以通過手機來發送。相對來講，備忘錄比便條和留言要正式一些，常用于工作中，提醒對方應該注意的事項。 WRITING CONVENTIONS·寫作模式
假定你是李華,于11月12日到達紐約,然后去找你的美國朋友Tom, 但他不在家.請按以下內容給Tom 留張便條. 1．火車晚點15分鐘,與接你的Tom錯過; 2．在火車上認識的定居美國的華人夫婦Taylor 把你帶到Tom 家,Tom 不在; 3．現在去Taylor 夫婦家; 例 4．今晚務必打電話給你:6461128. 注意:1.詞數 100左右; 2．不要逐字翻譯,可適當增加細節以使行文連貫; 3．開頭已給出. ?寫作模板 Nov.12 Tom, I’m in New York！________________________________________ ________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【參考范文】 Nov.12 Tom, I’m in New York！It’s really a pity that I didn’t find you at the railway station.You may have left when my train arrived, a quarter behind the schedule. Luckily, on the train I came across Mr.Taylor and his wife, who are Chinese and have been living in the US for several years.Seeing that there was no one to meet me at the station, they offered to drive me to your house. As you happen to be out, I’ve decided to accept the Taylors’ offer to stay at their house for the night. I’ve decided to put up here for the night.They are friendly to me, so don’t worry about me.I’ll be all right.It cannot be better if you can call me at my phone number 6461128 this evening. Looking forward to meeting you soon. Yours, Li Hua ?名師指津 1.常用詞匯: luckily, behind the schedule, come across, offer to do sth., put up, drive sb.home, worry about... 2.句型歸納: It’s really a pity that... As you happen to be out,... It cannot be better if... ?文體講解 1.便條、留言和備忘錄的格式與書信類似,分三個方面:時間、稱呼、內容和簽名.但是稱呼只寫對方的名字,不必加客套詞dear之類,除非對長輩.結尾只簽自己的名字,不需要結束語yours 之類,除非對對方非常尊敬. 2.便條內容簡單明了.不寫與要轉達的口信無關的內容,不用客套話.如:I would appreciate it if you could...; It’s my great honor to.... 3.留言條的日期可以寫上年、月、日,也可以寫上星期幾或星期幾上、下午,或者只寫幾 日、幾點鐘.日期多寫在正文右上角,便條多用于熟人之間,因此,便條上的寫條人地址、結束語等都可省略. LANGUAGE FUNCTION·語言功能 1.不注重文字的推敲及句子的順序,也不拘泥于寫作形式. 2.經常用簡單句.常省去主語、賓語和助動詞等.如: Thank you for the repair. Back at 8∶00 p．m.. No milk today. Called around to see if you could come out tonight, but no one in. 3.根據情況許可,為節省時間和空間可以用縮略語或口語.如:用e.g.代替for example; 用a.m./p.m.代替上、下午; 用CU代替See you.用2nite 代替tonight等等.語言多變,通俗易懂. MODULE TASKS·模塊任務 寫一則請假條 假如你是李華,因昨天雨中踢足球患了感冒.今天早上你覺得頭疼,你媽媽給你量了體溫,發現你發燒,便帶你去看醫生.醫生說你需要臥床休息兩天.你寫一張假條特向陳老師請假.時間是10 月28 日. ________________________________________ One possible version: October 28 Dear Mr.Chen, I’m sorry to tell you that I can’t go to school today.I’ve got a cold because I played football in the rain yesterday. This morning, I had a headache.After taking my temperature,
my mother found that I had a high fever.She took me to see a doctor.The doctor advised me to stay in bed for two days. Now I’m writing to you to ask for two days’ sick leave. Yours respectfully, Li Hua
