江西浮梁縣2024高考英語短文改錯【二輪】演練（4）

　　短文改錯

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞。

　　2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

　　When we had our class, our psychology teacher would take any liquid medicine from a tiny bottle. This touched the whole classes. We thought that he should ask for

　　leave and stayed at home for a rest, so he came to each class on time. Therefore, all of us studied psychology hard than we did any other subject. In the end of that term, we told him that how much we appreciated him. We were so worrying about her health that we asked him what disease he got and what medicine he took. With satisfied smile, he said, “I’m quite all right and it’s a bottle of tea.

　　【參考答案】4.

　　When we had our class, our psychology teacher would take any liquid

　　some

　　medicine from a tiny bottle. This touched the whole classes. We thought that he

　　class

　　should ask for a leave and stayed at home for a rest, so he came to each class on

　　stay

　　but

　　time. Therefore, all of us studied psychology hard than we did any other subject.

　　harder

　　In the end of that term, we told that how much we appreciated him. We were so

　　At

　　worrying about her health that we asked him what disease he got and what

　　worried

　　his

　　medicine he took. With ∧ satisfied smile, he said, “I’m quite all right and it’s a

　　a

　　bottle of tea.”

　　下面是一段文章，請你對其進行修改。文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　　2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

　　Su Daoquan,aged 65, was a retired man in Hechuan of Chongqing.

　　He got a lot of attention to local people earlier this month during

　　the first public appearance of his specially invention — a water bike.

　　The opening performance of his pedal boatgiven on nearby Fujiang

　　River in front of a crowd of more than 100 onlookers.The pedal boat is

　　2.6 meters long and 1.4 meters wider. It has empty metal containers on

　　both sides. The pedals are used to turn to a pedal wheel. The driver can

　　ride it in the center or there is room for two other adult. He said

　　that invented it brought him a lot of joy and that our creation is not

　　harming the environment and is suitable for tourism.　

　　【參考答案】4.

　　Su Daoquan,aged 65, a retired man in Hechuan of Chongqing.

　　He got a lot of attention

　　local people earlier this month during

　　the first public appearance of his

　　invention — a water bike.

　　The opening performance of his pedal boat

　　given on nearby Fujiang

　　River in front of a crowd of more than 100 onlookers.The pedal boat is

　　2.6 meters long and 1.4 meters

　　. It has empty metal containers on

　　both sides.The pedals are used to turn

　　a pedal wheel. The driver can

　　ride it in the center

　　there is room for two other

　　. He said

　　That

　　it brought him a lot of joy and that

　　creation is not

　　harming the environment and is suitable for tourism.

　　短文改錯（共10小題；滿分10分；改動第11處不計分）

　　In the past, teachers always kept on to explaining the points in class. Our students just listened and take notes. But now we often discuss and try to solve the problems raising by the teachers or ourselves. After class, we enjoy different kind of activities instead of doing endless homework. For example, we can read that we are interested in. We can go to the library and surf the Internet for variously kinds of information. In my opinion, exploring study does not help us learn much, but also make us to enjoy study and become masters of study.

　　【參考答案】5.

　　1 kept on to – kept on

　　2 our students – we students

　　3 take notes – took notes

　　4 raising – raised

　　5 kind of activities – kinds of activities

　　6 read that – read what

　　7 and surf – or surf

　　8 variously – various

　　9 not help – not only help

　　10 to enjoy – enjoy

　　短文改錯。

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文， 請你修改你同桌的作文。文中共有10處錯誤， 每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加，刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號∧，并在其下面寫出該加的詞

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線﹨劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下面劃一橫線， 并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

　　Do you read reviews after you see a movie? I used to do that, but I usually wished I didn’t. I read so much about a movie on advance that I often ended up not go to see it at all. The writers point everything out that is wrong with the film, but seldom mentions anything good about one. They also tell the important things and even the ending of the movie. Lately I have changed way I choose movies to watch. I read reviews afterwards, if necessary. It is very important to me is that I don’t watch the talk shows in that people discuss movies. And I don’t ask other people how they like of it. Now, I enjoy myself even more.

　　【參考答案】6.

　　1. after-before

　　2. didn’t – hadn’t

　　3. on – in

　　4. go – going

　　5. mentions– mention

　　6. one – it

　　7.

　　way前加the

　　8. It – What

　　9. that – which

　　10. of去掉

　　【2024模擬題】第一節(jié)：短文改錯(共10小題；每題1分，滿分10分)

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的一下作文。文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加，刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用()劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

　　(2024·江西省八所重點中學高三聯(lián)考)

　　It is reported that thirty cellphones taken away by teachers during the examination and were smashed (銷毀) in front of students and parents at a high school. As to this, we hold a heated discussion. There are two different viewpoints about them.

　　Some think it necessarily. Firstly, with cellphones, students would have focused their attention on studying instead of wasting their precious time reading junk message. Secondly, the examination will be fair if no one cheats using cellphones. However, the others think it otherwise. For one thing, at the age of information, cellphones have become a necessity. For another, students can use cellphones for study.

　　Personally spoken, even if some students use cellphones for no good reason, we should educate them more than destroy cellphones in such an extreme way.

　　答案：

　　It is reported that thirty cellphones

　　taken away by teachers during the examination and were smashed (銷毀) in front of students and parents at a high school. As to this, we

　　a heated discussion. There are two different viewpoints about .

　　Some think it . Firstly,

　　cellphones, students would have focused their attention on studying instead of wasting their precious time reading junk . Secondly, the examination will be fair if no one cheats using cellphones. However, the others think it otherwise. For one thing,

　　the age of information, cellphones have become a necessity. For another, students can use cellphones for study.

　　Personally ， even if some students use cellphones for no good reason, we should educate them

　　than destroy cellphones in such an extreme way.

　　1．taken前加were　cellphones是take的動作承受者，應(yīng)用被動語態(tài)。故taken前加were。

　　2．hold→held　根據(jù)語境應(yīng)用過去時，故hold改為held。

　　3．them→it　此處代詞是代替前文的discussion。故them改為it。

　　4．necessarily→necessary　think 后跟形容詞作賓補，故necessarily應(yīng)改為necessary。

　　5．with→without　根據(jù)句意，應(yīng)是“沒有手機，學生將能集中注意力上課”。故with改為without。

　　6．message→messages　message是可數(shù)名詞，前沒有限定詞，應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式，故message改為messages。

　　7．the others前的the去掉　與前文的some對應(yīng)，用others，故去掉the。

　　8．a(chǎn)t→in　in the age of information“在信息時代”，故應(yīng)將at改為in。

　　9．spoken→speaking　personally speaking“在我看來”。故spoken改為speaking。

　　10．more→rather　rather than而不是。

　　江西浮梁縣2024高考英語短文改錯【二輪】演練（4）

　　短文改錯

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞。

　　2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

　　When we had our class, our psychology teacher would take any liquid medicine from a tiny bottle. This touched the whole classes. We thought that he should ask for

　　leave and stayed at home for a rest, so he came to each class on time. Therefore, all of us studied psychology hard than we did any other subject. In the end of that term, we told him that how much we appreciated him. We were so worrying about her health that we asked him what disease he got and what medicine he took. With satisfied smile, he said, “I’m quite all right and it’s a bottle of tea.

　　【參考答案】4.

　　When we had our class, our psychology teacher would take any liquid

　　some

　　medicine from a tiny bottle. This touched the whole classes. We thought that he

　　class

　　should ask for a leave and stayed at home for a rest, so he came to each class on

　　stay

　　but

　　time. Therefore, all of us studied psychology hard than we did any other subject.

　　harder

　　In the end of that term, we told that how much we appreciated him. We were so

　　At

　　worrying about her health that we asked him what disease he got and what

　　worried

　　his

　　medicine he took. With ∧ satisfied smile, he said, “I’m quite all right and it’s a

　　a

　　bottle of tea.”

　　下面是一段文章，請你對其進行修改。文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　　2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

　　Su Daoquan,aged 65, was a retired man in Hechuan of Chongqing.

　　He got a lot of attention to local people earlier this month during

　　the first public appearance of his specially invention — a water bike.

　　The opening performance of his pedal boatgiven on nearby Fujiang

　　River in front of a crowd of more than 100 onlookers.The pedal boat is

　　2.6 meters long and 1.4 meters wider. It has empty metal containers on

　　both sides. The pedals are used to turn to a pedal wheel. The driver can

　　ride it in the center or there is room for two other adult. He said

　　that invented it brought him a lot of joy and that our creation is not

　　harming the environment and is suitable for tourism.　

　　【參考答案】4.

　　Su Daoquan,aged 65, a retired man in Hechuan of Chongqing.

　　He got a lot of attention

　　local people earlier this month during

　　the first public appearance of his

　　invention — a water bike.

　　The opening performance of his pedal boat

　　given on nearby Fujiang

　　River in front of a crowd of more than 100 onlookers.The pedal boat is

　　2.6 meters long and 1.4 meters

　　. It has empty metal containers on

　　both sides.The pedals are used to turn

　　a pedal wheel. The driver can

　　ride it in the center

　　there is room for two other

　　. He said

　　That

　　it brought him a lot of joy and that

　　creation is not

　　harming the environment and is suitable for tourism.

　　短文改錯（共10小題；滿分10分；改動第11處不計分）

　　In the past, teachers always kept on to explaining the points in class. Our students just listened and take notes. But now we often discuss and try to solve the problems raising by the teachers or ourselves. After class, we enjoy different kind of activities instead of doing endless homework. For example, we can read that we are interested in. We can go to the library and surf the Internet for variously kinds of information. In my opinion, exploring study does not help us learn much, but also make us to enjoy study and become masters of study.

　　【參考答案】5.

　　1 kept on to – kept on

　　2 our students – we students

　　3 take notes – took notes

　　4 raising – raised

　　5 kind of activities – kinds of activities

　　6 read that – read what

　　7 and surf – or surf

　　8 variously – various

　　9 not help – not only help

　　10 to enjoy – enjoy

　　短文改錯。

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文， 請你修改你同桌的作文。文中共有10處錯誤， 每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加，刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號∧，并在其下面寫出該加的詞

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線﹨劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下面劃一橫線， 并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

　　Do you read reviews after you see a movie? I used to do that, but I usually wished I didn’t. I read so much about a movie on advance that I often ended up not go to see it at all. The writers point everything out that is wrong with the film, but seldom mentions anything good about one. They also tell the important things and even the ending of the movie. Lately I have changed way I choose movies to watch. I read reviews afterwards, if necessary. It is very important to me is that I don’t watch the talk shows in that people discuss movies. And I don’t ask other people how they like of it. Now, I enjoy myself even more.

　　【參考答案】6.

　　1. after-before

　　2. didn’t – hadn’t

　　3. on – in

　　4. go – going

　　5. mentions– mention

　　6. one – it

　　7.

　　way前加the

　　8. It – What

　　9. that – which

　　10. of去掉

　　【2024模擬題】第一節(jié)：短文改錯(共10小題；每題1分，滿分10分)

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的一下作文。文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加，刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用()劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

　　(2024·江西省八所重點中學高三聯(lián)考)

　　It is reported that thirty cellphones taken away by teachers during the examination and were smashed (銷毀) in front of students and parents at a high school. As to this, we hold a heated discussion. There are two different viewpoints about them.

　　Some think it necessarily. Firstly, with cellphones, students would have focused their attention on studying instead of wasting their precious time reading junk message. Secondly, the examination will be fair if no one cheats using cellphones. However, the others think it otherwise. For one thing, at the age of information, cellphones have become a necessity. For another, students can use cellphones for study.

　　Personally spoken, even if some students use cellphones for no good reason, we should educate them more than destroy cellphones in such an extreme way.

　　答案：

　　It is reported that thirty cellphones

　　taken away by teachers during the examination and were smashed (銷毀) in front of students and parents at a high school. As to this, we

　　a heated discussion. There are two different viewpoints about .

　　Some think it . Firstly,

　　cellphones, students would have focused their attention on studying instead of wasting their precious time reading junk . Secondly, the examination will be fair if no one cheats using cellphones. However, the others think it otherwise. For one thing,

　　the age of information, cellphones have become a necessity. For another, students can use cellphones for study.

　　Personally ， even if some students use cellphones for no good reason, we should educate them

　　than destroy cellphones in such an extreme way.

　　1．taken前加were　cellphones是take的動作承受者，應(yīng)用被動語態(tài)。故taken前加were。

　　2．hold→held　根據(jù)語境應(yīng)用過去時，故hold改為held。

　　3．them→it　此處代詞是代替前文的discussion。故them改為it。

　　4．necessarily→necessary　think 后跟形容詞作賓補，故necessarily應(yīng)改為necessary。

　　5．with→without　根據(jù)句意，應(yīng)是“沒有手機，學生將能集中注意力上課”。故with改為without。

　　6．message→messages　message是可數(shù)名詞，前沒有限定詞，應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式，故message改為messages。

　　7．the others前的the去掉　與前文的some對應(yīng)，用others，故去掉the。

　　8．a(chǎn)t→in　in the age of information“在信息時代”，故應(yīng)將at改為in。

　　9．spoken→speaking　personally speaking“在我看來”。故spoken改為speaking。

　　10．more→rather　rather than而不是。