浙江臨安市2024高考英語（二輪）短文改錯(cuò)練習(xí)（3）及答案

　　短文改錯(cuò)

　　注意事項(xiàng)：

　　1．請直接用0.5毫米黑色墨水簽字筆在答題卡上各題的答題區(qū)域內(nèi)作答。

　　2．答卷前將密封線內(nèi)的項(xiàng)目填寫清楚，在試題卷上作答無效。

　　第四部分：寫作（共兩節(jié)，滿分35分）

　　第一節(jié)

　　短文改錯(cuò)（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

　　此題要求改正所給短文中的錯(cuò)誤.對標(biāo)題號的每一行做出判斷：如無錯(cuò)誤，在該行右邊的橫線上劃（√）；如有錯(cuò)誤（每行只有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤），則按下列情況改正：

　　此行多一個(gè)詞：把多余的詞用斜線劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。

　　此行缺一個(gè)詞：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（^），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。

　　此行錯(cuò)一個(gè)詞：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。

　　注意：原行沒有錯(cuò)的不要改。

　　I’d love to tell you something about my vacation. I’ve been

　　76．

　　looking forward to visit the East Lake for a long time, 77．

　　Yesterday, with my friends, I paid a visit it. We set off at 78．

　　7:00 am by bus. It is 8 kilometers far away from our city, and 79．

　　when we got there, it was 7:20 am. There we have a wonderful 80．

　　time. We spent the whole morning boating sand fished on the lake. 81．

　　Then we had a picnic by the lake. On the afternoon, we climbed 82．

　　the Snake Island, picking the beautiful flowers and took a lot of pictures. 83．

　　Time passed very quick. Before we knew it, it was already 16:00, 84．

　　but we had to go back. How about your vacation? Please write to 85．

　　me as soon as possible.

　　【參考答案】4、

　　短文改錯(cuò):（滿分10分）

　　文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加： 在缺詞處加上一個(gè)漏詞符號（∧），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除： 把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

　　修改： 在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意： 1．每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞；

　　2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

　　Yesterday, I saw the old lady fall down when I was hurrying to school. I was about to

　　help her up while suddenly a passer-by stop me, saying that I might be accused of knocking

　　her down. Heard his words, I began to hesitate and slow down my steps. At the same time,

　　another student, that saw everything, went up to help. The old lady said nothing but lots

　　of thank to the good boy. I felt ashamed.

　　As is known to all, help others is forever a good virtue. Even though some old people are

　　becoming immorally, we can’t let it to disappear. I have made my mind that I will reach out

　　my hand without hesitation next time.

　　【參考答案】6.

　　Yesterday, I saw the old lady fall down when I was hurrying to school. I was about to

　　an

　　help her up while suddenly a passer-by stop me, saying that I might be accused of knocking

　　when

　　stopped

　　her down. Heard his words, I began to hesitate and slow down my steps. At the same time,

　　Hearing

　　another student, that saw everything, went up to help. The old lady said nothing but lots

　　who

　　of thank to the good boy. I felt ashamed.

　　thanks

　　As is known to all, help others is forever a good virtue. Even though some old people are

　　helping

　　becoming immorally, we can’t let it to disappear. I have made ∧my mind that I will reach out

　　immoral

　　去掉to

　　up

　　my hand without hesitation next time.

　　短文改錯(cuò)(共10小題;每小題1分,滿分10分）

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文 中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。

　　修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞

　　注意：

　　1每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分

　　Last Saturday, our school had organized an activity to visit the children at a local orphanage (孤兒院）.As one of the volunteer, I took part in it. We took many books as well many kinds of school supplies and toys for the children. 1Hiey were delighted to receive the gifts. In the morning, we played some games with them when we used to play in our childhood. Then we cooked and had a lunch there. In the afternoon, we gave them some performances. Before leaving the orphanage，we had photos take with them and gave them our contact details so that they could keep in touch with one another. Each of us had a happily time. We gave the children our care and help，but in return，they gave us their smiles and love.

　　【參考答案】5.

　　Last Saturday, our school had organized an activity to visit the children at a local orphanage

　　(孤兒院). As one of the volunteer, I took part in it. We took many books as well ∧ many kinds

　　volunteers

　　as

　　of school supplies and toys for the children. They were delighted to receive the gifts. In the

　　to

　　morning, we played some games with them when we used to play in our childhood. Then we

　　that / which（或when）

　　cooked and had a lunch there. In the afternoon, we gave them some performances. Before leaving

　　the orphanage, we had photos take with them and gave them our contact details so that they could

　　taken

　　we

　　keep in touch with one another. Each of us had a happily time. We gave the children our care and

　　happy

　　help, but in return, they gave us their smiles and love.

　　and

　　短文改錯(cuò) (共10小題每小題1分，10分)

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（/），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第十一處起）不計(jì)分。, I paid a visit a mountain village in a suburb of Handan. No sooner had I got off the bus when I was greatly surprising to see all the changes. It was far better than I had been expected. Now every family can drink cleanly running water. The villagers needn’t carry water himself any more. Firewood is no longer used for cooking. Marsh gas, a new cheap clean energy, make it very convenient to cook and light. As all the families have color TV set, they can enjoy plays at home. It impressed me most was that the best building in a village was the school. I hope the mountain village will become better and better.

　　【參考答案】6.

　　In the winter vacation, I paid a visit∧a mountain village in a suburb of Handan. No sooner

　　to

　　had I got off the bus when I was greatly surprising to see all the changes. It was far better than I

　　than

　　surprised

　　had been expected. Now every family can drink cleanly running water. The villagers needn’t carry

　　clean

　　water himself any more. Firewood is no longer used for cooking. Marsh gas, a new cheap clean

　　themselves

　　energy, make it very convenient to cook and light. As all the families have color TV set, they can

　　makes

　　sets

　　enjoy plays at home. It impressed me most was that the best building in a village was the school. I

　　what

　　the

　　hope the mountain village will become better and better.

　　短文改錯(cuò)(共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分)

　　文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(∧)，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線( )劃掉。

　　修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞 2.只允許修改10處，多者(從11處起)不計(jì)分

　　My mother is a teacher work in a key high school. She is too busy that she often has to get up early and stay up late. In addition to this, she hardly has any times to take exercise. She has been on poor health for some time. My father and I are worried that she may fall ill if she works too hard. These days I’m thinking why to develop my mother’s interest in playing sports. Considered that today is Mother’s Day, I decided buy a pair of jogging shoes for her. I secret put them on the desk in her study. When my mother entered into her study this evening, she looked surprised, but she immediately realized my intention. She promises that she would go jogging every evening.

　　【參考答案】

　　5.work改成working

　　too改成so

　　times改成time

　　on改成in

　　why改成how

　　considered改成considering

　　decided后面加to

　　secret改成secretly

　　entered后面去掉into

　　promises改成promised

　　浙江臨安市2024高考英語（二輪）短文改錯(cuò)練習(xí)（3）及答案

　　短文改錯(cuò)

　　注意事項(xiàng)：

　　1．請直接用0.5毫米黑色墨水簽字筆在答題卡上各題的答題區(qū)域內(nèi)作答。

　　2．答卷前將密封線內(nèi)的項(xiàng)目填寫清楚，在試題卷上作答無效。

　　第四部分：寫作（共兩節(jié)，滿分35分）

　　第一節(jié)

　　短文改錯(cuò)（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

　　此題要求改正所給短文中的錯(cuò)誤.對標(biāo)題號的每一行做出判斷：如無錯(cuò)誤，在該行右邊的橫線上劃（√）；如有錯(cuò)誤（每行只有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤），則按下列情況改正：

　　此行多一個(gè)詞：把多余的詞用斜線劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。

　　此行缺一個(gè)詞：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（^），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。

　　此行錯(cuò)一個(gè)詞：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。

　　注意：原行沒有錯(cuò)的不要改。

　　I’d love to tell you something about my vacation. I’ve been

　　76．

　　looking forward to visit the East Lake for a long time, 77．

　　Yesterday, with my friends, I paid a visit it. We set off at 78．

　　7:00 am by bus. It is 8 kilometers far away from our city, and 79．

　　when we got there, it was 7:20 am. There we have a wonderful 80．

　　time. We spent the whole morning boating sand fished on the lake. 81．

　　Then we had a picnic by the lake. On the afternoon, we climbed 82．

　　the Snake Island, picking the beautiful flowers and took a lot of pictures. 83．

　　Time passed very quick. Before we knew it, it was already 16:00, 84．

　　but we had to go back. How about your vacation? Please write to 85．

　　me as soon as possible.

　　【參考答案】4、

　　短文改錯(cuò):（滿分10分）

　　文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加： 在缺詞處加上一個(gè)漏詞符號（∧），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除： 把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

　　修改： 在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意： 1．每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞；

　　2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

　　Yesterday, I saw the old lady fall down when I was hurrying to school. I was about to

　　help her up while suddenly a passer-by stop me, saying that I might be accused of knocking

　　her down. Heard his words, I began to hesitate and slow down my steps. At the same time,

　　another student, that saw everything, went up to help. The old lady said nothing but lots

　　of thank to the good boy. I felt ashamed.

　　As is known to all, help others is forever a good virtue. Even though some old people are

　　becoming immorally, we can’t let it to disappear. I have made my mind that I will reach out

　　my hand without hesitation next time.

　　【參考答案】6.

　　Yesterday, I saw the old lady fall down when I was hurrying to school. I was about to

　　an

　　help her up while suddenly a passer-by stop me, saying that I might be accused of knocking

　　when

　　stopped

　　her down. Heard his words, I began to hesitate and slow down my steps. At the same time,

　　Hearing

　　another student, that saw everything, went up to help. The old lady said nothing but lots

　　who

　　of thank to the good boy. I felt ashamed.

　　thanks

　　As is known to all, help others is forever a good virtue. Even though some old people are

　　helping

　　becoming immorally, we can’t let it to disappear. I have made ∧my mind that I will reach out

　　immoral

　　去掉to

　　up

　　my hand without hesitation next time.

　　短文改錯(cuò)(共10小題;每小題1分,滿分10分）

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文 中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。

　　修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞

　　注意：

　　1每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分

　　Last Saturday, our school had organized an activity to visit the children at a local orphanage (孤兒院）.As one of the volunteer, I took part in it. We took many books as well many kinds of school supplies and toys for the children. 1Hiey were delighted to receive the gifts. In the morning, we played some games with them when we used to play in our childhood. Then we cooked and had a lunch there. In the afternoon, we gave them some performances. Before leaving the orphanage，we had photos take with them and gave them our contact details so that they could keep in touch with one another. Each of us had a happily time. We gave the children our care and help，but in return，they gave us their smiles and love.

　　【參考答案】5.

　　Last Saturday, our school had organized an activity to visit the children at a local orphanage

　　(孤兒院). As one of the volunteer, I took part in it. We took many books as well ∧ many kinds

　　volunteers

　　as

　　of school supplies and toys for the children. They were delighted to receive the gifts. In the

　　to

　　morning, we played some games with them when we used to play in our childhood. Then we

　　that / which（或when）

　　cooked and had a lunch there. In the afternoon, we gave them some performances. Before leaving

　　the orphanage, we had photos take with them and gave them our contact details so that they could

　　taken

　　we

　　keep in touch with one another. Each of us had a happily time. We gave the children our care and

　　happy

　　help, but in return, they gave us their smiles and love.

　　and

　　短文改錯(cuò) (共10小題每小題1分，10分)

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（/），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第十一處起）不計(jì)分。, I paid a visit a mountain village in a suburb of Handan. No sooner had I got off the bus when I was greatly surprising to see all the changes. It was far better than I had been expected. Now every family can drink cleanly running water. The villagers needn’t carry water himself any more. Firewood is no longer used for cooking. Marsh gas, a new cheap clean energy, make it very convenient to cook and light. As all the families have color TV set, they can enjoy plays at home. It impressed me most was that the best building in a village was the school. I hope the mountain village will become better and better.

　　【參考答案】6.

　　In the winter vacation, I paid a visit∧a mountain village in a suburb of Handan. No sooner

　　to

　　had I got off the bus when I was greatly surprising to see all the changes. It was far better than I

　　than

　　surprised

　　had been expected. Now every family can drink cleanly running water. The villagers needn’t carry

　　clean

　　water himself any more. Firewood is no longer used for cooking. Marsh gas, a new cheap clean

　　themselves

　　energy, make it very convenient to cook and light. As all the families have color TV set, they can

　　makes

　　sets

　　enjoy plays at home. It impressed me most was that the best building in a village was the school. I

　　what

　　the

　　hope the mountain village will become better and better.

　　短文改錯(cuò)(共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分)

　　文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(∧)，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線( )劃掉。

　　修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞 2.只允許修改10處，多者(從11處起)不計(jì)分

　　My mother is a teacher work in a key high school. She is too busy that she often has to get up early and stay up late. In addition to this, she hardly has any times to take exercise. She has been on poor health for some time. My father and I are worried that she may fall ill if she works too hard. These days I’m thinking why to develop my mother’s interest in playing sports. Considered that today is Mother’s Day, I decided buy a pair of jogging shoes for her. I secret put them on the desk in her study. When my mother entered into her study this evening, she looked surprised, but she immediately realized my intention. She promises that she would go jogging every evening.

　　【參考答案】

　　5.work改成working

　　too改成so

　　times改成time

　　on改成in

　　why改成how

　　considered改成considering

　　decided后面加to

　　secret改成secretly

　　entered后面去掉into

　　promises改成promised