2024廣西柳江縣高考英語(二輪)短文改錯實效訓(xùn)練（5）

　　短文改錯

　　Dear Jim,

　　I was pleased to hear from you and I am written to tell you something about the changes in my school.

　　You are right. Great changes have been taken place in my school. It is not longer what it used to be three years ago, when there were only one teaching building and a playground. I am happy to tell you two new buildings had been built and are on use. One of them is a new classroom building, in it there are rooms for music, arts and computer teaching. The other is a library, where there are all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines. However, my school is good equipped with sports facilities and musical instruments. The number of students has also grown from 1,500 to 2,500. What's more, we had planted a lot of trees and flowers in and around the school.

　　I believe my school become better and better, and I hope you will visit my school again.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　【參考答案】1.

　　Dear Jim,

　　I was pleased to hear from you and I am written to tell you something about the changes in my writing

　　school.

　　You are right. Great changes have been taken place in my school. It is not longer what it used

　　no

　　to be three years ago, when there were only one teaching building and a playground. I am happy to

　　was

　　tell you two new buildings had been built and are on use. One of them is a new classroom building,

　　in

　　in it there are rooms for music, arts and computer teaching. The other is a library, where there are

　　which

　　all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines. However, my school is good equipped with sports

　　Besides

　　well

　　facilities and musical instruments. The number of students has also grown from 1,500 to 2,500. What's more, we had planted a lot of trees and flowers in and around the school.

　　have

　　I believe my school∧ become better and better, and I hope you will visit my school again.

　　will

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　短文改錯。此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤。對標有題號的每一行做出判斷：如無錯誤，在該行右邊橫線上畫一個勾(√)；如有錯誤(每行只有一個錯誤)，則按下列情況改正：

　　此行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線(＼)劃掉。

　　此行缺一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。

　　此行錯一個詞：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。

　　注意：原行沒有錯的不要進行修改，請打（√）表示。

　　Today was like some other day in my life. In the morning,

　　76.

　　the weather was awful, which made me to feel unhappy.

　　77.

　　And I had to go to the bookstore to buy some books. When

　　I come into the bookstore, the shop assistant told me that

　　78.

　　they didn’t have the books. So I had to go to others

　　79.

　　bookstores, so they didn’t have the books, either. I spent

　　80.

　　the whole morning look for the books in different bookstores,

　　81.

　　and on the way, I wasted much time, which made me very

　　angry. Finally, to my joy, I found out the books and bought

　　82.

　　it. In the afternoon, I read some books, and when I

　　83.

　　finished reading, I felt tiring. In the evening, I went to

　　84.

　　take a shower and washed my clothes. Washing clothes is a

　　85.

　　little hard for me. However, I think it’s a kind of exercise.

　　【參考答案】2.

　　76. some改為any

　　77. 去掉to

　　78. come改為came

　　79. others改為other

　　80. so改為but

　　81. look 改為 looking

　　82. 去掉out

　　83. it改為them

　　84. tiring 改為tired

　　85. √

　　短文改錯。

　　此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤。對標有題號的每一行做出判斷：如無錯誤，在該行右邊橫線畫一個勾（√）；如有錯誤（每行只有一個錯誤），則按下列情況改正：

　　該行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線（ ）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。

　　該行缺一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧）,在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。

　　該行錯一個詞：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。

　　We received Tom’s letter dating May 20th the day 76. __________

　　before yesterday. All of our family greatly delighted to 77. __________

　　learn how he is getting along very well with his lessons 78. __________

　　Time passes very quick．In

　　a few

　　weeks， he'll finish 79. __________

　　the high school. What pleases us most is that he does 80. __________

　　very well to make up his mind to enter for the college 81. __________

　　entrance examination this summer．What wonderful it is! 82. __________

　　Dad，as well as Mom and I ，is with him．We expected 83. __________

　　him to make better use of his time． The full preparations 84. __________

　　he makes，the surer of successful he’ll certainly be . 85. __________

　　3.

　　76.dated

　　77.greatly前加are

　　78.how→that

　　79.quickly

　　80.去掉the

　　81. √

　　82.What→How

　　83.expected→expect

　　84.full→fuller

　　85. successful--success

　　（全國新課標卷）短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞。

　　2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

　　My summer travel started terribly .I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a

　　buying

　　ticket to Hang Zhou. I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to

　　there

　　Xiamen for∧ long holiday. I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag

　　A

　　and

　　Form the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it. Luckily I had all my

　　money on my pocket, but the only clothes I had was those I had on. It felt very

　　in

　　were

　　strange to travel without any luggages. When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to

　　luggage

　　friend’s

　　me lots of clothes. I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.

　　felt

　　短文改錯(共10小題;每小題1.5分,滿分15分)

　　此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤對標有題號的每一行作出判斷如無錯誤在該行右邊橫線上畫一個勾(√)；如有錯誤(每行只有一個錯誤)，則按下列情況改正：

　　此行多一個詞把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞并也用斜線劃掉。

　　此行缺一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。

　　此行錯一個詞：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。

　　注意：原行沒有錯的不要改。

　　like a desert and the concrete walls like the grey sky in

　　69_________

　　a rainy day. We would be much happier and are able to study

　　70_________

　　better if the walls of the school could be decorated with posters,

　　71_________

　　photos and paintings, that could certainly broaden our horizons

　　72_________

　　and enrich our lives. Original art work are too expensive, but

　　73_________

　　unless we buy art posters, the cost will be low. Using only a

　　74_________

　　little money, it can make our school a nicer place.

　　75_________

　　參考答案、、短文改錯

　　66. happily→happy

　　67. we后加are

　　68. thought→think

　　69. in→on

　　70 去are或are→be

　　71.正確

　　72.that→which

　　73.work→works

　　74. unless→if

　　75. it→we

　　第一節(jié)短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，共10分）

　　以下標有題號的每一行均有一個錯誤，請找出，并按下列情況改正：

　　此行多一詞：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。

　　此行缺一詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（︿），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。

　　此行錯一詞：在錯詞的下面劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。and played his violin with large piece of paper on

　　77._____

　　the ground．Before long , he was surrouning with people, who

　　78._____

　　were all attracted by the word on that paper. It said,“ last night,

　　79______

　　a gentleman put an important thing into my hat by mistaken. Please 80._____

　　come to claim it soon.” Seeing this , people wondered why it could

　　81.____

　　be. After about half an hour, a man came and brought

　　82______

　　back his lottery(彩票)

　　which won a reward of ＄500,000. Later someone asked the violinist:

　　83._____

　　“ Why don’t you take the lottery ticket for yourself? ”He said,

　　84._____

　　“While I don’t have much money, I live happily. However , I lose

　　85._____

　　honesty, I won’t be happy forever.”

　　短文改錯：

　　76.第一個at改為on

　　77.with后加a

　　78.surrouning改為surrounded

　　79.word改為words

　　80.mistaken改為mistake

　　81.why改為what

　　82.brought改為took

　　83.reward改為prize 84.don’t改為didn’t

　　85.if后加I

　　2024廣西柳江縣高考英語(二輪)短文改錯實效訓(xùn)練（5）

　　短文改錯

　　Dear Jim,

　　I was pleased to hear from you and I am written to tell you something about the changes in my school.

　　You are right. Great changes have been taken place in my school. It is not longer what it used to be three years ago, when there were only one teaching building and a playground. I am happy to tell you two new buildings had been built and are on use. One of them is a new classroom building, in it there are rooms for music, arts and computer teaching. The other is a library, where there are all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines. However, my school is good equipped with sports facilities and musical instruments. The number of students has also grown from 1,500 to 2,500. What's more, we had planted a lot of trees and flowers in and around the school.

　　I believe my school become better and better, and I hope you will visit my school again.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　【參考答案】1.

　　Dear Jim,

　　I was pleased to hear from you and I am written to tell you something about the changes in my writing

　　school.

　　You are right. Great changes have been taken place in my school. It is not longer what it used

　　no

　　to be three years ago, when there were only one teaching building and a playground. I am happy to

　　was

　　tell you two new buildings had been built and are on use. One of them is a new classroom building,

　　in

　　in it there are rooms for music, arts and computer teaching. The other is a library, where there are

　　which

　　all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines. However, my school is good equipped with sports

　　Besides

　　well

　　facilities and musical instruments. The number of students has also grown from 1,500 to 2,500. What's more, we had planted a lot of trees and flowers in and around the school.

　　have

　　I believe my school∧ become better and better, and I hope you will visit my school again.

　　will

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　短文改錯。此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤。對標有題號的每一行做出判斷：如無錯誤，在該行右邊橫線上畫一個勾(√)；如有錯誤(每行只有一個錯誤)，則按下列情況改正：

　　此行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線(＼)劃掉。

　　此行缺一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。

　　此行錯一個詞：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。

　　注意：原行沒有錯的不要進行修改，請打（√）表示。

　　Today was like some other day in my life. In the morning,

　　76.

　　the weather was awful, which made me to feel unhappy.

　　77.

　　And I had to go to the bookstore to buy some books. When

　　I come into the bookstore, the shop assistant told me that

　　78.

　　they didn’t have the books. So I had to go to others

　　79.

　　bookstores, so they didn’t have the books, either. I spent

　　80.

　　the whole morning look for the books in different bookstores,

　　81.

　　and on the way, I wasted much time, which made me very

　　angry. Finally, to my joy, I found out the books and bought

　　82.

　　it. In the afternoon, I read some books, and when I

　　83.

　　finished reading, I felt tiring. In the evening, I went to

　　84.

　　take a shower and washed my clothes. Washing clothes is a

　　85.

　　little hard for me. However, I think it’s a kind of exercise.

　　【參考答案】2.

　　76. some改為any

　　77. 去掉to

　　78. come改為came

　　79. others改為other

　　80. so改為but

　　81. look 改為 looking

　　82. 去掉out

　　83. it改為them

　　84. tiring 改為tired

　　85. √

　　短文改錯。

　　此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤。對標有題號的每一行做出判斷：如無錯誤，在該行右邊橫線畫一個勾（√）；如有錯誤（每行只有一個錯誤），則按下列情況改正：

　　該行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線（ ）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。

　　該行缺一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧）,在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。

　　該行錯一個詞：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。

　　We received Tom’s letter dating May 20th the day 76. __________

　　before yesterday. All of our family greatly delighted to 77. __________

　　learn how he is getting along very well with his lessons 78. __________

　　Time passes very quick．In

　　a few

　　weeks， he'll finish 79. __________

　　the high school. What pleases us most is that he does 80. __________

　　very well to make up his mind to enter for the college 81. __________

　　entrance examination this summer．What wonderful it is! 82. __________

　　Dad，as well as Mom and I ，is with him．We expected 83. __________

　　him to make better use of his time． The full preparations 84. __________

　　he makes，the surer of successful he’ll certainly be . 85. __________

　　3.

　　76.dated

　　77.greatly前加are

　　78.how→that

　　79.quickly

　　80.去掉the

　　81. √

　　82.What→How

　　83.expected→expect

　　84.full→fuller

　　85. successful--success

　　（全國新課標卷）短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞。

　　2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

　　My summer travel started terribly .I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a

　　buying

　　ticket to Hang Zhou. I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to

　　there

　　Xiamen for∧ long holiday. I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag

　　A

　　and

　　Form the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it. Luckily I had all my

　　money on my pocket, but the only clothes I had was those I had on. It felt very

　　in

　　were

　　strange to travel without any luggages. When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to

　　luggage

　　friend’s

　　me lots of clothes. I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.

　　felt

　　短文改錯(共10小題;每小題1.5分,滿分15分)

　　此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤對標有題號的每一行作出判斷如無錯誤在該行右邊橫線上畫一個勾(√)；如有錯誤(每行只有一個錯誤)，則按下列情況改正：

　　此行多一個詞把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞并也用斜線劃掉。

　　此行缺一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。

　　此行錯一個詞：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。

　　注意：原行沒有錯的不要改。

　　like a desert and the concrete walls like the grey sky in

　　69_________

　　a rainy day. We would be much happier and are able to study

　　70_________

　　better if the walls of the school could be decorated with posters,

　　71_________

　　photos and paintings, that could certainly broaden our horizons

　　72_________

　　and enrich our lives. Original art work are too expensive, but

　　73_________

　　unless we buy art posters, the cost will be low. Using only a

　　74_________

　　little money, it can make our school a nicer place.

　　75_________

　　參考答案、、短文改錯

　　66. happily→happy

　　67. we后加are

　　68. thought→think

　　69. in→on

　　70 去are或are→be

　　71.正確

　　72.that→which

　　73.work→works

　　74. unless→if

　　75. it→we

　　第一節(jié)短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，共10分）

　　以下標有題號的每一行均有一個錯誤，請找出，并按下列情況改正：

　　此行多一詞：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。

　　此行缺一詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（︿），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。

　　此行錯一詞：在錯詞的下面劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。and played his violin with large piece of paper on

　　77._____

　　the ground．Before long , he was surrouning with people, who

　　78._____

　　were all attracted by the word on that paper. It said,“ last night,

　　79______

　　a gentleman put an important thing into my hat by mistaken. Please 80._____

　　come to claim it soon.” Seeing this , people wondered why it could

　　81.____

　　be. After about half an hour, a man came and brought

　　82______

　　back his lottery(彩票)

　　which won a reward of ＄500,000. Later someone asked the violinist:

　　83._____

　　“ Why don’t you take the lottery ticket for yourself? ”He said,

　　84._____

　　“While I don’t have much money, I live happily. However , I lose

　　85._____

　　honesty, I won’t be happy forever.”

　　短文改錯：

　　76.第一個at改為on

　　77.with后加a

　　78.surrouning改為surrounded

　　79.word改為words

　　80.mistaken改為mistake

　　81.why改為what

　　82.brought改為took

　　83.reward改為prize 84.don’t改為didn’t

　　85.if后加I