必 修 2

　　寫作進行時——議論文

　　[技巧點撥]

　　.寫作要點

　　要寫好議論文，必須注意以下幾點：

　　1．確定論點，通常在文章的第一段提出。

　　2．要有足夠的論據，可以列舉生活的實例。

　　3．論證要有嚴密的邏輯性，所有事實、原因、理由應緊密地同結論聯系起來。

　　4．層次要清楚。

　　5．態度誠懇、友好，因為議論文重在說理，以理服人。

　　6．論據要充分，欲證明自己的觀點必須有充分的證據。作者可以列舉事實、展示數據、提供事例、借助常識或利用親身經歷。

　　Ⅱ.常用句式

　　1．Opinions vary from individual to individual.

　　2．Others argue/hold the view that...

　　3．What's important is that...

　　4．As far as I'm concerned, I prefer...

　　5．When it comes to failure, different people hold different attitudes towards it.

　　6．There is no denying that students can learn a lot from it.

　　7．It's universally acknowledged that knowledge can change one's fate.

　　8．In conclusion, I think having a very close relationship with a pet is healthy.

　　9．In short, it can be said that health is more important than wealth.

　　10．From what has been said above, we can safely draw a conclusion that attitude determines everything.

　　[習作點評]

　　新學期伊始，關于魯迅的作品《藥》、《阿Q正傳》、《記念劉和珍君》等是否被淘汰出語文課本再次引發全民大討論。教育部近日澄清：新課改教材篇目基本無變化，只有廣東教育出版社進行了微調。請你根據下面的信息以“What should we do with Lu？”為題寫一篇120～150詞的英語短文。

　　贊成刪除 1.魯迅作品的血腥和暴力語句給我們年輕一代帶來不好的影響，與現代社會不合拍。2.魯迅作品風格陳舊，絕大多數在現代社會已無多大意義。 反對刪除 1.年輕人閱讀魯迅作品可以更多地了解舊社會，從而更加熱愛我們的現代生活。2.魯迅作品對社會分析深刻而尖銳，年輕人很有必要學習他的寫作風格和精神實質。

　　What should we do with Lu?

　　There has been a heated debate about the remove of Lu Xun's works from our Chinese textbooks since the beginning of this semester. 【在介詞后應該使用其名詞形式removal。】Towards this, we hold varied opinions. Some think that some of Lu Xun's essays are not suit for our harmonious world because the blood and violent feelings between the lines would have a bad effect on the young generation. 【“適合于……”的正確表達形式為“be

　　suitable for”；表示“血腥的”應該使用“bloody”。】 Lu_Xun's_writings_are_somewhat_old_fashioned_now,_most of them are meaningless in modern society and are hard to understand for the young generations. 【在Lu Xun's...句子前應該添加表示遞進意義的What's worse；此處most of...為非限制性定語從句，them應該為which。】Therefore,_others think that new generations are

　　supposed to know about real story of the old society so that they can more love and treasure the happy life today.【此處應該為語意的轉折，所以使用However。】In addition ，Lu Xun's stories are deep and sharp in languages and thoughts, which we youngsters should study and gain from contact with his spirit.

　　[蹤蹤演練]

　　1．(2011·陜西)

　　假定你是中學生李華。在一位名叫TigerMom的學生家長的博客上，你看到如下內容。請你根據博客內容、寫作要點和要求，給這位家長回復。

　　I'm the mother of a fourteen-year-old. I have a rule for my daughter：be among the top 5 students or get punished in one way or another. She has been doing very well in school, but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her. Am I wrong?

　　寫作要點：

　　1．表明自己的看法；

　　2．陳述自己的理由(可舉例說明)；

　　3．提出至少兩條建議。

　　要求：

　　1．短文須寫在答題卡的指定區域。

　　2．短文詞數不少于100(不含已寫好的部分)。

　　3．內容充實，結構完整，語意連貫。

　　4．書寫須清晰、工整。

　　Hi，TigerMom，

　　What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China. My idea is________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　參考范文：

　　Hi, TigerMom，

　　What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China .My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.

　　Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission, development in wisdom, emotion, health and life attitude should never be ignored.There are many examples around us.Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected .The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities.Furthermore, punishment is by no means

　　a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.

　　So I suggest that you take your friends' advice.More importantly, let her live like a lovely girl; let her have more friends and social activities ；and let her make mistakes of her own as we teenagers often do.

　　2．(2011·四川)

　　最近，某中學生英文報開設了“After-class Activities”的欄目。請你根據以下提示，為該欄目寫一篇英文稿件，并鼓勵同學們積極參加課外活動。

　　1．你校開展課外活動的情況；

　　2．你參加過的課外活動及給你帶來的益處；

　　3．為同學選擇課外活動提出建議；

　　4．為學校開展課外活動提出建議。

　　注意：

　　1．詞數100左右；

　　2．文中不得提及人名、校名及地名；

　　3．稿件的開頭已為你寫好(不計入總詞數)。

　　After-class Activities

　　Nowadays, after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools.___________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　參考范文：

　　After-class Activities

　　Nowadays, after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools.In our school, there are various kinds of activities, such as, arts and sports.We enjoy them very much. Playing football and reading stories are my favorite which do me a lot of good.Besides building my body and enriching my knowledge, they also free me from the heavy work of study.

　　Here I have some suggestions.To students, you'd better choose activities which interest you and others; to schools, they should organize more activities for students and leave students more time for activities by giving them less homework.

　　Dear friends, please actively take part in after-class activities, which will not only make your school life more colourful, but also improve your study.

　　必 修 2

　　寫作進行時——議論文

　　[技巧點撥]

　　.寫作要點

　　要寫好議論文，必須注意以下幾點：

　　1．確定論點，通常在文章的第一段提出。

　　2．要有足夠的論據，可以列舉生活的實例。

　　3．論證要有嚴密的邏輯性，所有事實、原因、理由應緊密地同結論聯系起來。

　　4．層次要清楚。

　　5．態度誠懇、友好，因為議論文重在說理，以理服人。

　　6．論據要充分，欲證明自己的觀點必須有充分的證據。作者可以列舉事實、展示數據、提供事例、借助常識或利用親身經歷。

　　Ⅱ.常用句式

　　1．Opinions vary from individual to individual.

　　2．Others argue/hold the view that...

　　3．What's important is that...

　　4．As far as I'm concerned, I prefer...

　　5．When it comes to failure, different people hold different attitudes towards it.

　　6．There is no denying that students can learn a lot from it.

　　7．It's universally acknowledged that knowledge can change one's fate.

　　8．In conclusion, I think having a very close relationship with a pet is healthy.

　　9．In short, it can be said that health is more important than wealth.

　　10．From what has been said above, we can safely draw a conclusion that attitude determines everything.

　　[習作點評]

　　新學期伊始，關于魯迅的作品《藥》、《阿Q正傳》、《記念劉和珍君》等是否被淘汰出語文課本再次引發全民大討論。教育部近日澄清：新課改教材篇目基本無變化，只有廣東教育出版社進行了微調。請你根據下面的信息以“What should we do with Lu？”為題寫一篇120～150詞的英語短文。

　　贊成刪除 1.魯迅作品的血腥和暴力語句給我們年輕一代帶來不好的影響，與現代社會不合拍。2.魯迅作品風格陳舊，絕大多數在現代社會已無多大意義。 反對刪除 1.年輕人閱讀魯迅作品可以更多地了解舊社會，從而更加熱愛我們的現代生活。2.魯迅作品對社會分析深刻而尖銳，年輕人很有必要學習他的寫作風格和精神實質。

　　What should we do with Lu?

　　There has been a heated debate about the remove of Lu Xun's works from our Chinese textbooks since the beginning of this semester. 【在介詞后應該使用其名詞形式removal。】Towards this, we hold varied opinions. Some think that some of Lu Xun's essays are not suit for our harmonious world because the blood and violent feelings between the lines would have a bad effect on the young generation. 【“適合于……”的正確表達形式為“be

　　suitable for”；表示“血腥的”應該使用“bloody”。】 Lu_Xun's_writings_are_somewhat_old_fashioned_now,_most of them are meaningless in modern society and are hard to understand for the young generations. 【在Lu Xun's...句子前應該添加表示遞進意義的What's worse；此處most of...為非限制性定語從句，them應該為which。】Therefore,_others think that new generations are

　　supposed to know about real story of the old society so that they can more love and treasure the happy life today.【此處應該為語意的轉折，所以使用However。】In addition ，Lu Xun's stories are deep and sharp in languages and thoughts, which we youngsters should study and gain from contact with his spirit.

　　[蹤蹤演練]

　　1．(2011·陜西)

　　假定你是中學生李華。在一位名叫TigerMom的學生家長的博客上，你看到如下內容。請你根據博客內容、寫作要點和要求，給這位家長回復。

　　I'm the mother of a fourteen-year-old. I have a rule for my daughter：be among the top 5 students or get punished in one way or another. She has been doing very well in school, but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her. Am I wrong?

　　寫作要點：

　　1．表明自己的看法；

　　2．陳述自己的理由(可舉例說明)；

　　3．提出至少兩條建議。

　　要求：

　　1．短文須寫在答題卡的指定區域。

　　2．短文詞數不少于100(不含已寫好的部分)。

　　3．內容充實，結構完整，語意連貫。

　　4．書寫須清晰、工整。

　　Hi，TigerMom，

　　What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China. My idea is________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　參考范文：

　　Hi, TigerMom，

　　What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China .My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.

　　Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission, development in wisdom, emotion, health and life attitude should never be ignored.There are many examples around us.Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected .The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities.Furthermore, punishment is by no means

　　a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.

　　So I suggest that you take your friends' advice.More importantly, let her live like a lovely girl; let her have more friends and social activities ；and let her make mistakes of her own as we teenagers often do.

　　2．(2011·四川)

　　最近，某中學生英文報開設了“After-class Activities”的欄目。請你根據以下提示，為該欄目寫一篇英文稿件，并鼓勵同學們積極參加課外活動。

　　1．你校開展課外活動的情況；

　　2．你參加過的課外活動及給你帶來的益處；

　　3．為同學選擇課外活動提出建議；

　　4．為學校開展課外活動提出建議。

　　注意：

　　1．詞數100左右；

　　2．文中不得提及人名、校名及地名；

　　3．稿件的開頭已為你寫好(不計入總詞數)。

　　After-class Activities

　　Nowadays, after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools.___________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　參考范文：

　　After-class Activities

　　Nowadays, after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools.In our school, there are various kinds of activities, such as, arts and sports.We enjoy them very much. Playing football and reading stories are my favorite which do me a lot of good.Besides building my body and enriching my knowledge, they also free me from the heavy work of study.

　　Here I have some suggestions.To students, you'd better choose activities which interest you and others; to schools, they should organize more activities for students and leave students more time for activities by giving them less homework.

　　Dear friends, please actively take part in after-class activities, which will not only make your school life more colourful, but also improve your study.