浙江省2024高考英語二輪復習專題訓練：短文改錯+書面表達（1）下面短文中共有10處錯誤，錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分One day Tom and I were walking down the street while we saw an old man fall off his bike. He was badly hurt. Many people crowded around us. Someone suggested carrying the old man to the roadside, so Tom disagreed. He has learned first aid. He said that they ought to leave him where he was and checked him first. At that time the old man wasn't breathing. Tom asked me to call in the First Aid Center at once and he began to start the old man's breathing, use the mouth-to-mouth way.

　　Within five minute, the old man began to move a little and doctors also arrived. They said that we had done was correct. I have learned from this experience that a knowledge of first aid can make a really difference.

　　第二節：書面表達（滿分30分）

　　某英文報紙就邀請中學生展開討論。請你參考所給要點，寫一篇英語短文。要點：

　　簡要描述這一交通問題分析造成該問題的主要原因注意：詞數100120，文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。In spite of the fast development of transportation in the major cities of China, more and more traffic problems are arising. __________________________________________________________________________________

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　　第一節：短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

　　One day Tom and I were walking down the street while we saw an old man fall off his bike.

　　when

　　He was badly hurt. Many people crowded around us. Someone suggested carrying the old man

　　him

　　to the roadside, so Tom disagreed. He has learned first aid. He said that they ought to leave him

　　but

　　had

　　where he was and checked him first. At that time the old man wasn't breathing. Tom asked me to

　　check

　　call in the First Aid Center at once and he began to start the old man's breathing, use theks**5u

　　刪去

　　using

　　mouth-to-mouth way.

　　Within five minute, the old man began to move a little and doctors also arrived. They said

　　minutes

　　that ∧we had done was correct. I have learned from this experience that a knowledge of first

　　what

　　aid can make a really difference.

　　real

　　第二節：書面表達（滿分30分）

　　One possible version：

　　In spite of the fast development of transportation in the major cities of China, more and more traffic problems are arising. A serious one is heavy traffic. Very often, we see cars in front of us parked on both sides of the street, driving down the street, or stuck in traffic with drivers waiting impatiently. So what on earth causes this problem?

　　In the first place, vast population contributes to heavy traffic and growing numbers of private cars add to the pressure on the severe traffic conditions. What’s worse, some people are unaware of the importance of obeying traffic regulations, so it’s not uncommon to see accidents blocking traffic.

　　Personally, I think that rather than promote private cars, it’s better to improve the public transportation system with scientific road design and proper management. More importantly, never can traffic jams be eased without self-disciplined citizens.

　　(123 words)

　　浙江省2024高考英語二輪復習專題訓練：短文改錯+書面表達（1）下面短文中共有10處錯誤，錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分One day Tom and I were walking down the street while we saw an old man fall off his bike. He was badly hurt. Many people crowded around us. Someone suggested carrying the old man to the roadside, so Tom disagreed. He has learned first aid. He said that they ought to leave him where he was and checked him first. At that time the old man wasn't breathing. Tom asked me to call in the First Aid Center at once and he began to start the old man's breathing, use the mouth-to-mouth way.

　　Within five minute, the old man began to move a little and doctors also arrived. They said that we had done was correct. I have learned from this experience that a knowledge of first aid can make a really difference.

　　第二節：書面表達（滿分30分）

　　某英文報紙就邀請中學生展開討論。請你參考所給要點，寫一篇英語短文。要點：

　　簡要描述這一交通問題分析造成該問題的主要原因注意：詞數100120，文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。In spite of the fast development of transportation in the major cities of China, more and more traffic problems are arising. __________________________________________________________________________________

　　___________________________________________________________________________________________

　　___________________________________________________________________________________________

　　___________________________________________________________________________________________

　　___________________________________________________________________________________________

　　___________________________________________________________________________________________

　　___________________________________________________________________________________________

　　___________________________________________________________________________________________

　　___________________________________________________________________________________________

　　___________________________________________________________________________________________

　　___________________________________________________________________________________________

　　第一節：短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

　　One day Tom and I were walking down the street while we saw an old man fall off his bike.

　　when

　　He was badly hurt. Many people crowded around us. Someone suggested carrying the old man

　　him

　　to the roadside, so Tom disagreed. He has learned first aid. He said that they ought to leave him

　　but

　　had

　　where he was and checked him first. At that time the old man wasn't breathing. Tom asked me to

　　check

　　call in the First Aid Center at once and he began to start the old man's breathing, use theks**5u

　　刪去

　　using

　　mouth-to-mouth way.

　　Within five minute, the old man began to move a little and doctors also arrived. They said

　　minutes

　　that ∧we had done was correct. I have learned from this experience that a knowledge of first

　　what

　　aid can make a really difference.

　　real

　　第二節：書面表達（滿分30分）

　　One possible version：

　　In spite of the fast development of transportation in the major cities of China, more and more traffic problems are arising. A serious one is heavy traffic. Very often, we see cars in front of us parked on both sides of the street, driving down the street, or stuck in traffic with drivers waiting impatiently. So what on earth causes this problem?

　　In the first place, vast population contributes to heavy traffic and growing numbers of private cars add to the pressure on the severe traffic conditions. What’s worse, some people are unaware of the importance of obeying traffic regulations, so it’s not uncommon to see accidents blocking traffic.

　　Personally, I think that rather than promote private cars, it’s better to improve the public transportation system with scientific road design and proper management. More importantly, never can traffic jams be eased without self-disciplined citizens.

　　(123 words)