答案 3.更糟糕的是，一些游戲充滿暴力，這對(duì)你的心理健康會(huì)造成危害。 (一般句式)The worst thing is that there is much violence in the games and it will be bad for your mental health. (句式升級(jí))

　　，some games full of violence will be harmful to your mental health. Worse still 答案 4.為了有意義的生活，你可以多鍛煉以強(qiáng)身健體，也可多讀些好書或參加一些社會(huì)活動(dòng)來(lái)開闊你的眼界。 (一般表達(dá))In order to live a meaningful life，you can take more exercise to build you up，read more good books or participate in some social activities to broaden your horizons.

　　(句式升級(jí))In order to live a meaningful life，you can broaden your horizons

　　more good books or

　　some social activities as well as build you up

　　more exercise.

　　by reading participating in by taking [連句成篇] Dear Wang Qiang，

　　I felt worried when I heard that you are addicted to computer games.Although it’s generally believed that computer games are interesting and can inspire our imagination，yet if you abuse them，they will be harmful to you in many ways.

　　To begin with，they will waste too much valuable time which should be spent on your study or other beneficial things.In addition，playing games for a long time will do harm to your health，especially to your eyes.Worse still，some games are full of violence，which will be harmful to your mental health.

　　Therefore，I strongly hope that you can break away from them.The earlier，the better.In order to live a meaningful life，you can broaden your horizons by reading more good books or participating in some social activities as well as build you up by taking more exercise.

　　Looking forward to your good news. Yours， Li Ping 返回 Period Three —— 交際導(dǎo)航

　　口語(yǔ)積累運(yùn)用 語(yǔ)法專題

　　過(guò)去分詞作定語(yǔ)和表語(yǔ) 寫作專題

　　英文勸說(shuō)信 欄目索引

　　語(yǔ)法精析 語(yǔ)法專題 一、過(guò)去分詞作定語(yǔ) 1.The recovered animals will be released soon. 痊愈的動(dòng)物將很快被釋放。 2.Paper cuts used for religious purpose are often found in temples. 用于宗教目的的剪紙經(jīng)常在寺院中被發(fā)現(xiàn)。 過(guò)去分詞作定語(yǔ)和表語(yǔ) [觀察體驗(yàn)] 3.They are cleaning the fallen leaves in the yard. 他們正在清掃院子里的落葉。 4.With the government’s aid，those affected by the earthquake have moved to the new settlements. 在政府的幫助下，那些受到地震影響的人已經(jīng)搬到了新的定居點(diǎn)。 5.The student dressed in white is my daughter. ＝The student who is dressed in white is my daughter. 穿白色衣服的學(xué)生是我女兒。 1.單個(gè)的過(guò)去分詞作定語(yǔ)時(shí)，一般放在被修飾詞語(yǔ)之前，也可以放在所修飾詞語(yǔ)的后面。過(guò)去分詞短語(yǔ)作定語(yǔ)時(shí)，須將分詞放在被修飾的詞語(yǔ)之后，功能相當(dāng)于一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句。 2.不及物動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去分詞也可作定語(yǔ)，一般作前置定語(yǔ)，不表示被動(dòng)意義，只強(qiáng)調(diào)動(dòng)作完成。如：fallen leaves落葉；retired workers退休工人；the risen sun升起的太陽(yáng)。 [即時(shí)歸納] 3.如果被修飾的詞是由every/some/any/no＋thing/body/one所構(gòu)成的復(fù)合代詞或指示代詞those或these等時(shí)，即使是單一的過(guò)去分詞作定語(yǔ)，也要放在被修飾詞的后面。如：

　　There is nothing changed here since I left this town. 自從我離開這座城鎮(zhèn)這里沒(méi)有任何變化。 4.過(guò)去分詞短語(yǔ)有時(shí)還可用作非限制性定語(yǔ)，相當(dāng)于一個(gè)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，前后用逗號(hào)分開。如： Some of them，born and brought up in rural villages，had never seen a train. 他們中的一些人，出生并且成長(zhǎng)在農(nóng)村，從來(lái)沒(méi)見過(guò)火車。 現(xiàn)在分詞和過(guò)去分詞都可以作定語(yǔ)修飾名詞，它們的區(qū)別主要表現(xiàn)在語(yǔ)態(tài)和時(shí)間關(guān)系上。 首先，在語(yǔ)態(tài)上不同：現(xiàn)在分詞表示主動(dòng)的意思，而過(guò)去分詞多表示被動(dòng)的意思。請(qǐng)比較： 1.surprising news 使人吃驚的消息 surprised listeners 吃驚的聽眾 2.an exciting movie 令人激動(dòng)的電影 excited children 激動(dòng)的孩子 [疑難辨析] 其次，時(shí)間關(guān)系上不同：一般來(lái)說(shuō)，現(xiàn)在分詞表示的動(dòng)作往往正在進(jìn)行，而過(guò)去分詞所表示的動(dòng)作往往已經(jīng)完成。請(qǐng)比較： 1.the changing world 正在發(fā)生變化的世界 the changed world 已經(jīng)變化了的世界 2.boiling water 正在開的水 boiled water 已經(jīng)煮開過(guò)的水(可能是涼開水) 3.developing countries 發(fā)展中國(guó)家 developed countries 發(fā)達(dá)國(guó)家 即時(shí)跟蹤1　用所給動(dòng)詞的正確形式填空 1.This is the statue of a brave soldier

　　(seat) on a horse，with a gun on his back. 2.Professor Jordan gave us a more

　　(confuse) lecture this afternoon and most of us were confused. 3.He is enthusiastically talking with a man

　　(call) a popular singer. 4.Some of the people

　　(invite) to the party can’t come. 5.The trees

　　(blow) down in the storm have been moved off the road. 答案 seated confusing called invited blown 二、過(guò)去分詞作表語(yǔ) [觀察體驗(yàn)] 1.The street is lined with small shops. 路旁是一排小商店。 2.Tom was astonished to see his father. 湯姆看到他的父親很驚訝。

　　3.You seem frightened. 看樣子你受了驚嚇。 4.They are gone for vacation. 他們?nèi)ザ燃倭恕?[即時(shí)歸納] 作表語(yǔ)的過(guò)去分詞主要來(lái)自及物動(dòng)詞，在主-系-表句型中，說(shuō)明主語(yǔ)所處的一種狀態(tài)。 少數(shù)不及物動(dòng)詞(如go，come，set)的過(guò)去分詞也能作表語(yǔ)，但它們不表示被動(dòng)意義，只是表示動(dòng)作完成。 [疑難辨析] 1.過(guò)去分詞作表語(yǔ)時(shí)與被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)的區(qū)別：過(guò)去分詞作表語(yǔ)，主要表示主語(yǔ)的狀態(tài)和特征，而被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)則表示動(dòng)作。如：

　　The library is now closed. 圖書館現(xiàn)在關(guān)著。(狀態(tài)) The cup was broken by my little sister yesterday. 杯子昨天被我的小妹妹打破了。(動(dòng)作) 2.過(guò)去分詞作表語(yǔ)與動(dòng)詞--ing形式作表語(yǔ)的區(qū)別：過(guò)去分詞作表語(yǔ)表示被動(dòng)或完成；動(dòng)詞--ing形式作表語(yǔ)表示主動(dòng)或進(jìn)行。如： She was embarrassed because she didn’t know the answer. 她很尷尬因?yàn)樗恢来鸢浮?Today’s meeting was boring. 今天的會(huì)很無(wú)聊。 3.有些動(dòng)詞如interest，worry，surprise，frighten等通常用其過(guò)去分詞形式來(lái)說(shuō)明人的情況；用動(dòng)詞--ing形式來(lái)說(shuō)明物的情況。如： The book is interesting and I’m interested in it. 這本書非常有趣，我對(duì)它非常感興趣。 即時(shí)跟蹤2　用所給詞的正確形式填空 1.I was too

　　(tire) to walk any further. 2.In the evening he is

　　(bury) in his books. 3.Both he and I are

　　(satisfy) with the result. 4.He was

　　(discourage) from making another attempt. 5.Tom was more

　　(surprise) than

　　(disappoint) at this news. 答案 tired buried satisfied discouraged surprised disappointed Ⅰ.用所給動(dòng)詞的正確形式填空 1.A study of travelers

　　(conduct) by the website TripAdvisor names Yangshuo as one of the top 10 destinations in the world.(2024·全國(guó)Ⅰ) 2.The adobe dwellings(土坯房)

　　(build) by the Pueblo Indians of the American Southwest are admired by even the most modern of architects and engineers.(2024·全國(guó)Ⅱ) 3.While there are

　　(amaze) stories of instant transformation，for most of us the changes are gradual and require a lot of effort and work，like cleaning up a polluted river.(2024·新課標(biāo)全國(guó)Ⅰ) 答案 conducted built amazing

　　高考鏈接 4.The producer comes regularly to collect the cameras

　　(return) to our shop for quality problems.(2024·重慶) 5.While waiting for the opportunity to get

　　(promote)，Henry did his best to perform his duty.(2024·安徽) 6.For those with family members far away，the personal computer and the phone are important in staying

　　(connect).(2024·福建) 7.The witnesses

　　(question) by the police just now gave very different descriptions of the fight.(2024·陜西) 8.In some languages,100 words make up half of all words

　　(use) in daily conversations.(2024·天津） 答案 returned promoted connected questioned used Ⅱ.單句改錯(cuò)(每小題僅有1處錯(cuò)誤) 1.I am awfully tiring，but I know I’ll never fall asleep.(2024·浙江，短文改錯(cuò))

　　2.Gradually，I became interesting in biology and chose to learn biology when I entered into the college.(2024·重慶，短文改錯(cuò))

　　3.I also shared with my friends many photos taking in Beijing.(2024·陜西，短文改錯(cuò))

　　答案 tiring→tired interesting→interested taking→taken 4.Therefore，I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil.(2024·浙江，短文改錯(cuò))

　　5.Third，we should find ways to reuse the water using in washing，especially bath water.(2024·全國(guó)Ⅱ，短文改錯(cuò))

　　6.“I’m pleasing to hear it，” said the boss.(2011·四川，短文改錯(cuò))

　　答案 interested→interesting using→used pleasing→pleased 返回 Talking about scientific jobs &Describing people 1.Questions to talk about scientific jobs： (1)What kind of scientific job do you want to do? (2)What personality will be needed? (3)What work experience would be useful? (4)What education will you need? (5)How long will the training take? (6)How will you prepare for this career? 交際導(dǎo)航 口語(yǔ)積累運(yùn)用 2.Answers to talk about scientific jobs： (1)I always wanted to...because... (2)The experience I will need is... (3)I need to practise... (4)I think I’m good at...so... (5)I will need some training in... (6)I might find it difficult to... (7)My greatest problem will be to... 3.Describing people： (1)I will need to be/become... (2)patient，creative，hard-working，co-operative，confident，brave，positive，pleasant，polite，determined，energetic，strict with，... 即時(shí)跟蹤 1.I

　　because a doctor can save many patients’ life. 我一直想成為一名醫(yī)生，因?yàn)獒t(yī)生可以拯救很多病人的生命。 2.I will need

　　psychological education. 我需要一些在心理教育方面的培訓(xùn)。 3.My

　　will be a lack of confidence. 我最大的問(wèn)題是缺乏自信。 答案 always wanted to be a doctor some training in greatest problem 4.I might

　　to find the cause of the disease. 我發(fā)現(xiàn)找到病因很難。 5.Why are you

　　this job?

　　你為什么對(duì)這份工作這么感興趣？ 答案 find it difficult so interested in 返回 [文體指導(dǎo)] 勸說(shuō)性的書信寫作目的是向某個(gè)組織或個(gè)人提出勸說(shuō)性的建議的一種應(yīng)用文體。 勸說(shuō)信的基本結(jié)構(gòu)和內(nèi)容： 首先點(diǎn)明寫信的目的是提勸說(shuō)性的建議，隨后給出充足的理由勸說(shuō)對(duì)方接受你的建議。提出的理由和建議要合情合理，用詞要恰當(dāng)，既要委婉禮貌，又要有說(shuō)服力。最后再一次提出希望，禮貌結(jié)束全文。

　　寫作專題

　　基礎(chǔ)點(diǎn)撥 英語(yǔ)勸說(shuō)信 寫作中要注意下列幾點(diǎn)： 1.話題的提出要開門見山，不要拖泥帶水； 2.觀點(diǎn)必須鮮明，不能模棱兩可； 3.論據(jù)要條理清楚，語(yǔ)言應(yīng)準(zhǔn)確、精煉； 4.主體時(shí)態(tài)多用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)； 5.盡量避免同一單詞、句型的重復(fù)使用，多采用同義詞、相似結(jié)構(gòu)以使表達(dá)多樣化。 [亮點(diǎn)句式] 1.I am writing to express my views concerning... 2.I don’t think it is a very good way to...For example，...Worst of all，... 3.In my opinion，it is wrong to... 4.As far as I am concerned，we should... 5.The main disadvantages of...are as follows.First...Second...Third...Finally... 6.I would very much like to advise you to... [寫作任務(wù)] 假設(shè)你是李萍，你的筆友王強(qiáng)最近沉迷于電腦游戲而不能自拔，嚴(yán)重影響了學(xué)習(xí)和身心健康。請(qǐng)你給他寫一封信勸說(shuō)他戒掉這一不良習(xí)慣，并對(duì)他的學(xué)習(xí)生活給出自己的建議。詞數(shù)100左右。

　　佳作構(gòu)建 答案 [審題謀篇] 第一步　明確要求 該寫作屬于應(yīng)用文類的書信，故要用

　　人稱來(lái)寫；信的主題內(nèi)容是

　　，故用一般將來(lái)時(shí)，同時(shí)兼顧書信的特點(diǎn)，會(huì)用到表達(dá)愿望的情態(tài)動(dòng)詞。 第二步　確定段落 Para.1　

　　Para.2　

　　Para.3　

　　第一 勸說(shuō)王強(qiáng)戒掉網(wǎng)癮 作者首先要陳述自己的擔(dān)憂。 指出沉迷于電腦游戲的危害。 表達(dá)作者的希望并提出建議。

　　答案 第三步　詞匯熱身 1.上癮

　　2.首先

　　3.另外

　　4.暴力

　　5.擺脫

　　6.開闊眼界

　　7.對(duì)……有害

　　be addicted to to begin with/first/first of all in addition/what’s more/besides violence break away from expand/broaden/widen one’s horizons do harm to/be harmful to 答案 第四步　句式升級(jí) 1.雖然人們普遍認(rèn)為電腦游戲有趣而且能激發(fā)我們的想象力，但如果不加以節(jié)制，他們會(huì)在許多方面對(duì)你造成危害。 (一般表達(dá))Many people believe that computer games are interesting and can inspire our imagination，but if you play them freely/uncontrolled，they will do harm to you in many ways. (句式升級(jí))Although

　　computer games are interesting and can inspire our imagination，yet if you

　　them，they will

　　you in many ways.

　　it’s generally believed that abuse be harmful to 答案 2.首先，你應(yīng)該把時(shí)間用在學(xué)習(xí)或一些有益的事情上，而不應(yīng)該浪費(fèi)在游戲上。 (一般表達(dá))First，you should spend your time on your study or other useful things and you shouldn’t waste it on computer games. (句式升級(jí))

　　，computer games will waste too much valuable time

　　should be spent on your study or other

　　things. To begin with which beneficial

　　答案 3.更糟糕的是，一些游戲充滿暴力，這對(duì)你的心理健康會(huì)造成危害。 (一般句式)The worst thing is that there is much violence in the games and it will be bad for your mental health. (句式升級(jí))

　　，some games full of violence will be harmful to your mental health. Worse still 答案 4.為了有意義的生活，你可以多鍛煉以強(qiáng)身健體，也可多讀些好書或參加一些社會(huì)活動(dòng)來(lái)開闊你的眼界。 (一般表達(dá))In order to live a meaningful life，you can take more exercise to build you up，read more good books or participate in some social activities to broaden your horizons.

　　(句式升級(jí))In order to live a meaningful life，you can broaden your horizons

　　more good books or

　　some social activities as well as build you up

　　more exercise.

　　by reading participating in by taking [連句成篇] Dear Wang Qiang，

　　I felt worried when I heard that you are addicted to computer games.Although it’s generally believed that computer games are interesting and can inspire our imagination，yet if you abuse them，they will be harmful to you in many ways.

　　To begin with，they will waste too much valuable time which should be spent on your study or other beneficial things.In addition，playing games for a long time will do harm to your health，especially to your eyes.Worse still，some games are full of violence，which will be harmful to your mental health.

　　Therefore，I strongly hope that you can break away from them.The earlier，the better.In order to live a meaningful life，you can broaden your horizons by reading more good books or participating in some social activities as well as build you up by taking more exercise.

　　Looking forward to your good news. Yours， Li Ping 返回 Period Three —— 交際導(dǎo)航

　　口語(yǔ)積累運(yùn)用 語(yǔ)法專題

　　過(guò)去分詞作定語(yǔ)和表語(yǔ) 寫作專題

　　英文勸說(shuō)信 欄目索引

　　語(yǔ)法精析 語(yǔ)法專題 一、過(guò)去分詞作定語(yǔ) 1.The recovered animals will be released soon. 痊愈的動(dòng)物將很快被釋放。 2.Paper cuts used for religious purpose are often found in temples. 用于宗教目的的剪紙經(jīng)常在寺院中被發(fā)現(xiàn)。 過(guò)去分詞作定語(yǔ)和表語(yǔ) [觀察體驗(yàn)] 3.They are cleaning the fallen leaves in the yard. 他們正在清掃院子里的落葉。 4.With the government’s aid，those affected by the earthquake have moved to the new settlements. 在政府的幫助下，那些受到地震影響的人已經(jīng)搬到了新的定居點(diǎn)。 5.The student dressed in white is my daughter. ＝The student who is dressed in white is my daughter. 穿白色衣服的學(xué)生是我女兒。 1.單個(gè)的過(guò)去分詞作定語(yǔ)時(shí)，一般放在被修飾詞語(yǔ)之前，也可以放在所修飾詞語(yǔ)的后面。過(guò)去分詞短語(yǔ)作定語(yǔ)時(shí)，須將分詞放在被修飾的詞語(yǔ)之后，功能相當(dāng)于一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句。 2.不及物動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去分詞也可作定語(yǔ)，一般作前置定語(yǔ)，不表示被動(dòng)意義，只強(qiáng)調(diào)動(dòng)作完成。如：fallen leaves落葉；retired workers退休工人；the risen sun升起的太陽(yáng)。 [即時(shí)歸納] 3.如果被修飾的詞是由every/some/any/no＋thing/body/one所構(gòu)成的復(fù)合代詞或指示代詞those或these等時(shí)，即使是單一的過(guò)去分詞作定語(yǔ)，也要放在被修飾詞的后面。如：

　　There is nothing changed here since I left this town. 自從我離開這座城鎮(zhèn)這里沒(méi)有任何變化。 4.過(guò)去分詞短語(yǔ)有時(shí)還可用作非限制性定語(yǔ)，相當(dāng)于一個(gè)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，前后用逗號(hào)分開。如： Some of them，born and brought up in rural villages，had never seen a train. 他們中的一些人，出生并且成長(zhǎng)在農(nóng)村，從來(lái)沒(méi)見過(guò)火車。 現(xiàn)在分詞和過(guò)去分詞都可以作定語(yǔ)修飾名詞，它們的區(qū)別主要表現(xiàn)在語(yǔ)態(tài)和時(shí)間關(guān)系上。 首先，在語(yǔ)態(tài)上不同：現(xiàn)在分詞表示主動(dòng)的意思，而過(guò)去分詞多表示被動(dòng)的意思。請(qǐng)比較： 1.surprising news 使人吃驚的消息 surprised listeners 吃驚的聽眾 2.an exciting movie 令人激動(dòng)的電影 excited children 激動(dòng)的孩子 [疑難辨析] 其次，時(shí)間關(guān)系上不同：一般來(lái)說(shuō)，現(xiàn)在分詞表示的動(dòng)作往往正在進(jìn)行，而過(guò)去分詞所表示的動(dòng)作往往已經(jīng)完成。請(qǐng)比較： 1.the changing world 正在發(fā)生變化的世界 the changed world 已經(jīng)變化了的世界 2.boiling water 正在開的水 boiled water 已經(jīng)煮開過(guò)的水(可能是涼開水) 3.developing countries 發(fā)展中國(guó)家 developed countries 發(fā)達(dá)國(guó)家 即時(shí)跟蹤1　用所給動(dòng)詞的正確形式填空 1.This is the statue of a brave soldier

　　(seat) on a horse，with a gun on his back. 2.Professor Jordan gave us a more

　　(confuse) lecture this afternoon and most of us were confused. 3.He is enthusiastically talking with a man

　　(call) a popular singer. 4.Some of the people

　　(invite) to the party can’t come. 5.The trees

　　(blow) down in the storm have been moved off the road. 答案 seated confusing called invited blown 二、過(guò)去分詞作表語(yǔ) [觀察體驗(yàn)] 1.The street is lined with small shops. 路旁是一排小商店。 2.Tom was astonished to see his father. 湯姆看到他的父親很驚訝。

　　3.You seem frightened. 看樣子你受了驚嚇。 4.They are gone for vacation. 他們?nèi)ザ燃倭恕?[即時(shí)歸納] 作表語(yǔ)的過(guò)去分詞主要來(lái)自及物動(dòng)詞，在主-系-表句型中，說(shuō)明主語(yǔ)所處的一種狀態(tài)。 少數(shù)不及物動(dòng)詞(如go，come，set)的過(guò)去分詞也能作表語(yǔ)，但它們不表示被動(dòng)意義，只是表示動(dòng)作完成。 [疑難辨析] 1.過(guò)去分詞作表語(yǔ)時(shí)與被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)的區(qū)別：過(guò)去分詞作表語(yǔ)，主要表示主語(yǔ)的狀態(tài)和特征，而被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)則表示動(dòng)作。如：

　　The library is now closed. 圖書館現(xiàn)在關(guān)著。(狀態(tài)) The cup was broken by my little sister yesterday. 杯子昨天被我的小妹妹打破了。(動(dòng)作) 2.過(guò)去分詞作表語(yǔ)與動(dòng)詞--ing形式作表語(yǔ)的區(qū)別：過(guò)去分詞作表語(yǔ)表示被動(dòng)或完成；動(dòng)詞--ing形式作表語(yǔ)表示主動(dòng)或進(jìn)行。如： She was embarrassed because she didn’t know the answer. 她很尷尬因?yàn)樗恢来鸢浮?Today’s meeting was boring. 今天的會(huì)很無(wú)聊。 3.有些動(dòng)詞如interest，worry，surprise，frighten等通常用其過(guò)去分詞形式來(lái)說(shuō)明人的情況；用動(dòng)詞--ing形式來(lái)說(shuō)明物的情況。如： The book is interesting and I’m interested in it. 這本書非常有趣，我對(duì)它非常感興趣。 即時(shí)跟蹤2　用所給詞的正確形式填空 1.I was too

　　(tire) to walk any further. 2.In the evening he is

　　(bury) in his books. 3.Both he and I are

　　(satisfy) with the result. 4.He was

　　(discourage) from making another attempt. 5.Tom was more

　　(surprise) than

　　(disappoint) at this news. 答案 tired buried satisfied discouraged surprised disappointed Ⅰ.用所給動(dòng)詞的正確形式填空 1.A study of travelers

　　(conduct) by the website TripAdvisor names Yangshuo as one of the top 10 destinations in the world.(2024·全國(guó)Ⅰ) 2.The adobe dwellings(土坯房)

　　(build) by the Pueblo Indians of the American Southwest are admired by even the most modern of architects and engineers.(2024·全國(guó)Ⅱ) 3.While there are

　　(amaze) stories of instant transformation，for most of us the changes are gradual and require a lot of effort and work，like cleaning up a polluted river.(2024·新課標(biāo)全國(guó)Ⅰ) 答案 conducted built amazing

　　高考鏈接 4.The producer comes regularly to collect the cameras

　　(return) to our shop for quality problems.(2024·重慶) 5.While waiting for the opportunity to get

　　(promote)，Henry did his best to perform his duty.(2024·安徽) 6.For those with family members far away，the personal computer and the phone are important in staying

　　(connect).(2024·福建) 7.The witnesses

　　(question) by the police just now gave very different descriptions of the fight.(2024·陜西) 8.In some languages,100 words make up half of all words

　　(use) in daily conversations.(2024·天津） 答案 returned promoted connected questioned used Ⅱ.單句改錯(cuò)(每小題僅有1處錯(cuò)誤) 1.I am awfully tiring，but I know I’ll never fall asleep.(2024·浙江，短文改錯(cuò))

　　2.Gradually，I became interesting in biology and chose to learn biology when I entered into the college.(2024·重慶，短文改錯(cuò))

　　3.I also shared with my friends many photos taking in Beijing.(2024·陜西，短文改錯(cuò))

　　答案 tiring→tired interesting→interested taking→taken 4.Therefore，I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil.(2024·浙江，短文改錯(cuò))

　　5.Third，we should find ways to reuse the water using in washing，especially bath water.(2024·全國(guó)Ⅱ，短文改錯(cuò))

　　6.“I’m pleasing to hear it，” said the boss.(2011·四川，短文改錯(cuò))

　　答案 interested→interesting using→used pleasing→pleased 返回 Talking about scientific jobs &Describing people 1.Questions to talk about scientific jobs： (1)What kind of scientific job do you want to do? (2)What personality will be needed? (3)What work experience would be useful? (4)What education will you need? (5)How long will the training take? (6)How will you prepare for this career? 交際導(dǎo)航 口語(yǔ)積累運(yùn)用 2.Answers to talk about scientific jobs： (1)I always wanted to...because... (2)The experience I will need is... (3)I need to practise... (4)I think I’m good at...so... (5)I will need some training in... (6)I might find it difficult to... (7)My greatest problem will be to... 3.Describing people： (1)I will need to be/become... (2)patient，creative，hard-working，co-operative，confident，brave，positive，pleasant，polite，determined，energetic，strict with，... 即時(shí)跟蹤 1.I

　　because a doctor can save many patients’ life. 我一直想成為一名醫(yī)生，因?yàn)獒t(yī)生可以拯救很多病人的生命。 2.I will need

　　psychological education. 我需要一些在心理教育方面的培訓(xùn)。 3.My

　　will be a lack of confidence. 我最大的問(wèn)題是缺乏自信。 答案 always wanted to be a doctor some training in greatest problem 4.I might

　　to find the cause of the disease. 我發(fā)現(xiàn)找到病因很難。 5.Why are you

　　this job?

　　你為什么對(duì)這份工作這么感興趣？ 答案 find it difficult so interested in 返回 [文體指導(dǎo)] 勸說(shuō)性的書信寫作目的是向某個(gè)組織或個(gè)人提出勸說(shuō)性的建議的一種應(yīng)用文體。 勸說(shuō)信的基本結(jié)構(gòu)和內(nèi)容： 首先點(diǎn)明寫信的目的是提勸說(shuō)性的建議，隨后給出充足的理由勸說(shuō)對(duì)方接受你的建議。提出的理由和建議要合情合理，用詞要恰當(dāng)，既要委婉禮貌，又要有說(shuō)服力。最后再一次提出希望，禮貌結(jié)束全文。

　　寫作專題

　　基礎(chǔ)點(diǎn)撥 英語(yǔ)勸說(shuō)信 寫作中要注意下列幾點(diǎn)： 1.話題的提出要開門見山，不要拖泥帶水； 2.觀點(diǎn)必須鮮明，不能模棱兩可； 3.論據(jù)要條理清楚，語(yǔ)言應(yīng)準(zhǔn)確、精煉； 4.主體時(shí)態(tài)多用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)； 5.盡量避免同一單詞、句型的重復(fù)使用，多采用同義詞、相似結(jié)構(gòu)以使表達(dá)多樣化。 [亮點(diǎn)句式] 1.I am writing to express my views concerning... 2.I don’t think it is a very good way to...For example，...Worst of all，... 3.In my opinion，it is wrong to... 4.As far as I am concerned，we should... 5.The main disadvantages of...are as follows.First...Second...Third...Finally... 6.I would very much like to advise you to... [寫作任務(wù)] 假設(shè)你是李萍，你的筆友王強(qiáng)最近沉迷于電腦游戲而不能自拔，嚴(yán)重影響了學(xué)習(xí)和身心健康。請(qǐng)你給他寫一封信勸說(shuō)他戒掉這一不良習(xí)慣，并對(duì)他的學(xué)習(xí)生活給出自己的建議。詞數(shù)100左右。

　　佳作構(gòu)建 答案 [審題謀篇] 第一步　明確要求 該寫作屬于應(yīng)用文類的書信，故要用

　　人稱來(lái)寫；信的主題內(nèi)容是

　　，故用一般將來(lái)時(shí)，同時(shí)兼顧書信的特點(diǎn)，會(huì)用到表達(dá)愿望的情態(tài)動(dòng)詞。 第二步　確定段落 Para.1　

　　Para.2　

　　Para.3　

　　第一 勸說(shuō)王強(qiáng)戒掉網(wǎng)癮 作者首先要陳述自己的擔(dān)憂。 指出沉迷于電腦游戲的危害。 表達(dá)作者的希望并提出建議。

　　答案 第三步　詞匯熱身 1.上癮

　　2.首先

　　3.另外

　　4.暴力

　　5.擺脫

　　6.開闊眼界

　　7.對(duì)……有害

　　be addicted to to begin with/first/first of all in addition/what’s more/besides violence break away from expand/broaden/widen one’s horizons do harm to/be harmful to 答案 第四步　句式升級(jí) 1.雖然人們普遍認(rèn)為電腦游戲有趣而且能激發(fā)我們的想象力，但如果不加以節(jié)制，他們會(huì)在許多方面對(duì)你造成危害。 (一般表達(dá))Many people believe that computer games are interesting and can inspire our imagination，but if you play them freely/uncontrolled，they will do harm to you in many ways. (句式升級(jí))Although

　　computer games are interesting and can inspire our imagination，yet if you

　　them，they will

　　you in many ways.

　　it’s generally believed that abuse be harmful to 答案 2.首先，你應(yīng)該把時(shí)間用在學(xué)習(xí)或一些有益的事情上，而不應(yīng)該浪費(fèi)在游戲上。 (一般表達(dá))First，you should spend your time on your study or other useful things and you shouldn’t waste it on computer games. (句式升級(jí))

　　，computer games will waste too much valuable time

　　should be spent on your study or other

　　things. To begin with which beneficial