2024屆高考英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)專(zhuān)題技能突破演練：42 寫(xiě)作之應(yīng)用文——建議信（含解析）
專(zhuān)題技能突破(42) 寫(xiě)作之應(yīng)用文——建議信
【技能講解】 建議信是寫(xiě)信人向收信人對(duì)某事提出的建議和忠告。信的內(nèi)容要包括寫(xiě)信的原因、建議的內(nèi)容、提出建議的理由等。一般由三段構(gòu)成：第一段，表明寫(xiě)作意圖。陳述事由，簡(jiǎn)單自我介紹；第二段，首先肯定對(duì)方的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，然后再寫(xiě)需要改進(jìn)的地方或針對(duì)具體情況提出合理建議，一定要注意語(yǔ)氣，要彬彬有禮而不能過(guò)于強(qiáng)硬；第三段，做出總結(jié)，表達(dá)祝愿。[常用表達(dá)方式] I'm writing to express my views concerning...
It couldn't be better if you could...
If I were you, I would...
I think it would be more beneficial if you could...
I will be more than happy to see improvements in...
I hope you can take my advice into account/ consideration.
典例剖析[2024·江西南昌一模]假設(shè)你是英文報(bào)紙Teens的編輯Collins，讀者李華寫(xiě)信告訴你他對(duì)高中學(xué)校生活的壓力和父母整天的嘮叨感到很厭煩，打算輟學(xué)外出打工，到社會(huì)上闖蕩一下。請(qǐng)你用英文給他寫(xiě)一封信勸他放棄這個(gè)念頭并給出自己的建議。
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3.文章的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：闖蕩make a living away from home
Dear Li Hua，
This is Collins from Teens. I'm sorry to hear from you that you planned to drop out and find a job away from your parents.
Yours sincerely，
Collins
[范文]
Dear Li Hua，
This is Collins from Teens. I'm sorry to hear from you that you planned to drop out and find a job away from your parents. It is a very dangerous idea for a teenager like you to intend to make a living away from home.
As a high school student, it is natural for us to meet problems in our school life. Both our teachers and parents show their love to us every day in the form of praise, criticisms or even complaints. We should be aware of it and grateful to it.①
In my opinion, the most important duty for you today is to learn knowledge and learn how to deal with different difficulties at home and at school. To face the unknown world is our next step after graduation.②
I hope my idea will be useful to you.
Yours sincerely，
Collins
[解析] 第二段中，高級(jí)詞匯運(yùn)用很恰當(dāng)。in the form of “以……形式”，praise “表?yè)P(yáng)”，criticism “批評(píng)”，complaint “嘮叨”，be aware of “意識(shí)到”，be grateful to “對(duì)……感激”。
第三段中動(dòng)詞不定式運(yùn)用很得心應(yīng)手。to learn...and learn...作表語(yǔ)，how to deal with...作learn的賓語(yǔ)，to face...作主語(yǔ)。
技能演練[2024·貴州七校聯(lián)考]假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華。最近你在英語(yǔ)課的某個(gè)單元中學(xué)習(xí)了一些關(guān)于急救的知識(shí)，感覺(jué)很有用，想建議學(xué)校提供專(zhuān)門(mén)的急救課程，以便學(xué)生了解更多相關(guān)知識(shí)。于是，你給校長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)了一封信。要點(diǎn)如下：
1.急救課程有用；
2.需要開(kāi)課的原因；
3.你的建議。
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Mr President，
Our class has been studying a unit on first aid.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
One possible version：
Dear Mr President，
Our class has been studying a unit on first aid. It has been very useful because we have learnt about what to do to help someone who has had an accident.
We would like to have a course on first aid, because it would give information about many more situations. It would also give us the chance to practice first-aid treatments.
I suggest that the school should organize a first aid course. We think such a course in the school is a necessary part of our education and will make us more useful members of our society. Perhaps we will even save someone's life one day.
Best regards!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
專(zhuān)題技能突破(42) 寫(xiě)作之應(yīng)用文——建議信
【技能講解】 建議信是寫(xiě)信人向收信人對(duì)某事提出的建議和忠告。信的內(nèi)容要包括寫(xiě)信的原因、建議的內(nèi)容、提出建議的理由等。一般由三段構(gòu)成：第一段，表明寫(xiě)作意圖。陳述事由，簡(jiǎn)單自我介紹；第二段，首先肯定對(duì)方的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，然后再寫(xiě)需要改進(jìn)的地方或針對(duì)具體情況提出合理建議，一定要注意語(yǔ)氣，要彬彬有禮而不能過(guò)于強(qiáng)硬；第三段，做出總結(jié)，表達(dá)祝愿。[常用表達(dá)方式] I'm writing to express my views concerning...
It couldn't be better if you could...
If I were you, I would...
I think it would be more beneficial if you could...
I will be more than happy to see improvements in...
I hope you can take my advice into account/ consideration.
典例剖析[2024·江西南昌一模]假設(shè)你是英文報(bào)紙Teens的編輯Collins，讀者李華寫(xiě)信告訴你他對(duì)高中學(xué)校生活的壓力和父母整天的嘮叨感到很厭煩，打算輟學(xué)外出打工，到社會(huì)上闖蕩一下。請(qǐng)你用英文給他寫(xiě)一封信勸他放棄這個(gè)念頭并給出自己的建議。
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3.文章的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：闖蕩make a living away from home
Dear Li Hua，
This is Collins from Teens. I'm sorry to hear from you that you planned to drop out and find a job away from your parents.
Yours sincerely，
Collins
[范文]
Dear Li Hua，
This is Collins from Teens. I'm sorry to hear from you that you planned to drop out and find a job away from your parents. It is a very dangerous idea for a teenager like you to intend to make a living away from home.
As a high school student, it is natural for us to meet problems in our school life. Both our teachers and parents show their love to us every day in the form of praise, criticisms or even complaints. We should be aware of it and grateful to it.①
In my opinion, the most important duty for you today is to learn knowledge and learn how to deal with different difficulties at home and at school. To face the unknown world is our next step after graduation.②
I hope my idea will be useful to you.
Yours sincerely，
Collins
[解析] 第二段中，高級(jí)詞匯運(yùn)用很恰當(dāng)。in the form of “以……形式”，praise “表?yè)P(yáng)”，criticism “批評(píng)”，complaint “嘮叨”，be aware of “意識(shí)到”，be grateful to “對(duì)……感激”。
第三段中動(dòng)詞不定式運(yùn)用很得心應(yīng)手。to learn...and learn...作表語(yǔ)，how to deal with...作learn的賓語(yǔ)，to face...作主語(yǔ)。
技能演練[2024·貴州七校聯(lián)考]假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華。最近你在英語(yǔ)課的某個(gè)單元中學(xué)習(xí)了一些關(guān)于急救的知識(shí)，感覺(jué)很有用，想建議學(xué)校提供專(zhuān)門(mén)的急救課程，以便學(xué)生了解更多相關(guān)知識(shí)。于是，你給校長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)了一封信。要點(diǎn)如下：
1.急救課程有用；
2.需要開(kāi)課的原因；
3.你的建議。
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Mr President，
Our class has been studying a unit on first aid.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
One possible version：
Dear Mr President，
Our class has been studying a unit on first aid. It has been very useful because we have learnt about what to do to help someone who has had an accident.
We would like to have a course on first aid, because it would give information about many more situations. It would also give us the chance to practice first-aid treatments.
I suggest that the school should organize a first aid course. We think such a course in the school is a necessary part of our education and will make us more useful members of our society. Perhaps we will even save someone's life one day.
Best regards!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
