雅思寫作參考范文：國際旅游
本命題中含有兩個分論點：A緊張; B否理解
考生可以持有的觀點：
1. A + B非
2. A + B
3. A非 + B
4. A非 + B非
針對部分觀點分析，構(gòu)成四段作文，中間主體分成A和B兩個段落。
關(guān)于tensions 分析
l 環(huán)境交通
l 經(jīng)濟原有原始的經(jīng)濟，農(nóng)業(yè)為主，
l 政治：危機
l 文化中國CBA
另外一種劃分方式是：
l 物質(zhì)緊張
l 精神緊張
寫作三層次：論點 + 論證 + 論據(jù)
國際旅游的確引起了很多方面的緊張。首先，在環(huán)境上，由于汽車，飛機，等交通工具的使用增加，生態(tài)平衡被破壞，物種多樣性降低。其次，它對當(dāng)?shù)氐脑冀?jīng)濟模式產(chǎn)生無法避免的沖擊。中國的九寨溝就是一個例子，這個地方由于國際旅游的沖擊，原始的農(nóng)業(yè)經(jīng)濟正在變遷為旅游為主的經(jīng)濟模式。
International tourism does trigger tensions in a diverse array of fields. To begin with, the increase in the use of such traffic means as airplanes, trains, buses, and the like weakens the fragile balance in an ecosystem. It also ruins the biodiversity in the ecosystem. Next, tensions in economic development are also conspicuous. The primitive economic pattern is inevitably vulnerable to the influences from the tourists who come from different economic systems. Jiuzhaigou, Sichuan, China is a typical case in point, where the local economic pattern has been shifting from the agriculture to tourism.
Despite the tensions, international tourism contributes to the understanding between people from different cultures, religions, races, and political ideas. This is because the tourism per se is more than appreciating the beautiful, brilliant natural landscapes, cultural traditions, or interesting customs. It is a kind of contacts. To contact is to communicate. Communication naturally promotes understandings. For instance, the Americans who traveled to Tibet tend to understand why Chinese governments insist that Tibet be a part of the Chinese territory and it should never be separated from the Chinese sovereignty. In fact, religious understanding serves as another telling example. The Christians who visit an Islamic attraction are more easily to accept that different religious should be able to coexist.
本命題中含有兩個分論點：A緊張; B否理解
考生可以持有的觀點：
1. A + B非
2. A + B
3. A非 + B
4. A非 + B非
針對部分觀點分析，構(gòu)成四段作文，中間主體分成A和B兩個段落。
關(guān)于tensions 分析
l 環(huán)境交通
l 經(jīng)濟原有原始的經(jīng)濟，農(nóng)業(yè)為主，
l 政治：危機
l 文化中國CBA
另外一種劃分方式是：
l 物質(zhì)緊張
l 精神緊張
寫作三層次：論點 + 論證 + 論據(jù)
國際旅游的確引起了很多方面的緊張。首先，在環(huán)境上，由于汽車，飛機，等交通工具的使用增加，生態(tài)平衡被破壞，物種多樣性降低。其次，它對當(dāng)?shù)氐脑冀?jīng)濟模式產(chǎn)生無法避免的沖擊。中國的九寨溝就是一個例子，這個地方由于國際旅游的沖擊，原始的農(nóng)業(yè)經(jīng)濟正在變遷為旅游為主的經(jīng)濟模式。
International tourism does trigger tensions in a diverse array of fields. To begin with, the increase in the use of such traffic means as airplanes, trains, buses, and the like weakens the fragile balance in an ecosystem. It also ruins the biodiversity in the ecosystem. Next, tensions in economic development are also conspicuous. The primitive economic pattern is inevitably vulnerable to the influences from the tourists who come from different economic systems. Jiuzhaigou, Sichuan, China is a typical case in point, where the local economic pattern has been shifting from the agriculture to tourism.
Despite the tensions, international tourism contributes to the understanding between people from different cultures, religions, races, and political ideas. This is because the tourism per se is more than appreciating the beautiful, brilliant natural landscapes, cultural traditions, or interesting customs. It is a kind of contacts. To contact is to communicate. Communication naturally promotes understandings. For instance, the Americans who traveled to Tibet tend to understand why Chinese governments insist that Tibet be a part of the Chinese territory and it should never be separated from the Chinese sovereignty. In fact, religious understanding serves as another telling example. The Christians who visit an Islamic attraction are more easily to accept that different religious should be able to coexist.
