范文講評：如何利用空余時(shí)間

　　　　「要求」

　　　　題目：你將參加校園英語講演比賽?，F(xiàn)在需要寫出一份簡要的底稿，底稿應(yīng)包含以下基本要點(diǎn)。

　　　　隨著工作時(shí)間的縮短，空余時(shí)間越來越多了。

　　　　如何利用空余時(shí)間。

　　　　利用空余時(shí)間的益處。

　　　　題目自擬。

　　　　「范文」

　　　　Use of Free Time

　　　　Some people may be so busy that they never have a spare moment，but it would be hard to find such people in contemporary times. Working hours are shorter and vacations longer，and there are more and more ways to spend the weekends. Aside from eating and sleeping，what do people do during the many hours when they are not at work or at school？

　　　　Use of free time often discloses much about ones tastes，values，interests and personality. What may be one mans leisure，however，might be another mans work. In leisure hours，some may turn to the humanities：literature，magic，art and here we might also mention movies and television. Others participate in sports，politics，voluntary work or hobbies at home. Still others like parties，travelling，or just loafing.

　　　　Obviously，the use of free time is a good means of relaxation，but its benefits go beyond this. All things people do in leisure hours enable them to gratify their wishes. This can contribute to intellectual growth and promote social activities as well.

　　　　So the good use of free time will make life rich，colorful and rewarding.

　　　　「評語」

　　　　這篇文章寫得很有水平。說理深入淺出，語言豐富曉暢，例證詳實(shí)，句式靈活多變，使得文章生動(dòng)并吸引人。開篇用問句，引出下文；結(jié)尾點(diǎn)題，總結(jié)全文。并且很有文學(xué)性。

　　范文講評：如何利用空余時(shí)間

　　　　「要求」

　　　　題目：你將參加校園英語講演比賽?，F(xiàn)在需要寫出一份簡要的底稿，底稿應(yīng)包含以下基本要點(diǎn)。

　　　　隨著工作時(shí)間的縮短，空余時(shí)間越來越多了。

　　　　如何利用空余時(shí)間。

　　　　利用空余時(shí)間的益處。

　　　　題目自擬。

　　　　「范文」

　　　　Use of Free Time

　　　　Some people may be so busy that they never have a spare moment，but it would be hard to find such people in contemporary times. Working hours are shorter and vacations longer，and there are more and more ways to spend the weekends. Aside from eating and sleeping，what do people do during the many hours when they are not at work or at school？

　　　　Use of free time often discloses much about ones tastes，values，interests and personality. What may be one mans leisure，however，might be another mans work. In leisure hours，some may turn to the humanities：literature，magic，art and here we might also mention movies and television. Others participate in sports，politics，voluntary work or hobbies at home. Still others like parties，travelling，or just loafing.

　　　　Obviously，the use of free time is a good means of relaxation，but its benefits go beyond this. All things people do in leisure hours enable them to gratify their wishes. This can contribute to intellectual growth and promote social activities as well.

　　　　So the good use of free time will make life rich，colorful and rewarding.

　　　　「評語」

　　　　這篇文章寫得很有水平。說理深入淺出，語言豐富曉暢，例證詳實(shí)，句式靈活多變，使得文章生動(dòng)并吸引人。開篇用問句，引出下文；結(jié)尾點(diǎn)題，總結(jié)全文。并且很有文學(xué)性。