2004年高考英語滿分作文及名師評析:寫信通知
導語:高考倒計時還有三天了,是否還在為自己不能寫一篇行文流暢,層次分明的文章而苦惱,其實看歷年的高考英語滿分作文是最佳的選擇,看文章的亮點所在,學地道、優雅句子,打開高考英語高分作文之門的金鑰匙。
【全國卷I】
【試題回放】
假設你是李華,你在報上看到北京電視臺今年七月將舉辦外國人學中文,唱中文歌才藝大賽。你的美國朋友Peter正在北京一所大學學中文,你覺得他應去試一試。請按以下要點給他寫信告知此事,并表示可以提供幫助。
比賽時間:7 月18日 。報名時間:截止到6月30日。報名地點:北京電視臺
注意:1.詞數:100左右 2.可適當增加細節,以使行文連貫 3.參考詞匯:才藝大賽talent show
Dear Peter,
I read in a newspaper today that a Learn Chinese, Sing Chinese Songs Foreigners Talent Show will be held in Beijing Television Station on July 18. I know you like singing, and you are in Beijing during that period. I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent, and how well youve learned Chinese. If you would like to try, you have to go to the TV station to sign up before the end of June. If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help.
Yours,
Li Hua
[名師點評]
從整體上說,本文書寫得簡潔明快。語言簡單平實,要點囊括齊全,結構完整。本文的主要特點是讓步狀語從句的使用,最后兩句話,采用了if引導的讓步狀語從句,結合將來時使用。
導語:高考倒計時還有三天了,是否還在為自己不能寫一篇行文流暢,層次分明的文章而苦惱,其實看歷年的高考英語滿分作文是最佳的選擇,看文章的亮點所在,學地道、優雅句子,打開高考英語高分作文之門的金鑰匙。
【全國卷I】
【試題回放】
假設你是李華,你在報上看到北京電視臺今年七月將舉辦外國人學中文,唱中文歌才藝大賽。你的美國朋友Peter正在北京一所大學學中文,你覺得他應去試一試。請按以下要點給他寫信告知此事,并表示可以提供幫助。
比賽時間:7 月18日 。報名時間:截止到6月30日。報名地點:北京電視臺
注意:1.詞數:100左右 2.可適當增加細節,以使行文連貫 3.參考詞匯:才藝大賽talent show
Dear Peter,
I read in a newspaper today that a Learn Chinese, Sing Chinese Songs Foreigners Talent Show will be held in Beijing Television Station on July 18. I know you like singing, and you are in Beijing during that period. I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent, and how well youve learned Chinese. If you would like to try, you have to go to the TV station to sign up before the end of June. If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help.
Yours,
Li Hua
[名師點評]
從整體上說,本文書寫得簡潔明快。語言簡單平實,要點囊括齊全,結構完整。本文的主要特點是讓步狀語從句的使用,最后兩句話,采用了if引導的讓步狀語從句,結合將來時使用。