6類(lèi)SAT寫(xiě)作常見(jiàn)問(wèn)題之四 動(dòng)詞形式
在學(xué)生平時(shí)的SAT寫(xiě)作練習(xí)中，留學(xué)的老師們通過(guò)長(zhǎng)期的觀察與總結(jié)，發(fā)現(xiàn)了6類(lèi)常見(jiàn)的問(wèn)題，這是導(dǎo)致學(xué)生在考試中丟分的原因。在英語(yǔ)中動(dòng)詞形式有多種，考生容易犯的錯(cuò)誤就是對(duì)動(dòng)詞在不同地方使用的形式把握不清，有的應(yīng)該使用動(dòng)名詞的，卻直接用了動(dòng)詞原形，有的應(yīng)該使用過(guò)去分詞的，卻是用了動(dòng)名詞。今天我們就來(lái)看SAT寫(xiě)作6類(lèi)常見(jiàn)問(wèn)題之四：動(dòng)詞形式。
1、Original: So take all the above factors into account，I may not quite agree with the opinion that parents are our best teaches.
Revised：So，taking all of the above factors into account，I do not agree with the opinion that parents are our best teachers.
本段開(kāi)頭的so take all 本應(yīng)該是伴隨狀語(yǔ)成分，但作者直接用了動(dòng)詞原形，這是錯(cuò)誤的，應(yīng)該和主句的主語(yǔ)I保持邏輯一致，是作者把以上的因素考慮在內(nèi)的。除此以外，原句中作者為能明確表明自己的立場(chǎng)，把may not quite agree改為do not agree。
2、Original：We can enjoy the art of cuisine in cooking rather than tolerating the time-consuming preparation.
Revised: We can enjoy the art of cooking rather than simply tolerate the time-consuming preparation.
rather than的前后用此應(yīng)保持一致，此處rather than后的用詞要與其前面的動(dòng)詞原形enjoy保持一致，故將tolerating改為tolerate。原句中還有一個(gè)用此問(wèn)題，cuisine本意為烹飪，與in cooking沖突，故只保留一個(gè)cooking即可。
3、Original：Drink water with hygiene will certainly benefit the local folks a lot.
Revised：Drinking clean water will certainly benefit the local population.
原句動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ)，將drink該為drinking。原句中還有詞匯表達(dá)問(wèn)題：干凈的水用clean water表達(dá)恰當(dāng)，不用water with hygiene。
4、Original：The rapid development of science and technology has lead to an increasing need for more relaxation in off-work time.
Revised：The rapid development of modern economies has led to an increasing need for more relaxation in off-work time.
原句中l(wèi)ead在現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)中應(yīng)該用過(guò)去分詞，應(yīng)該為led。
5、Original：CCTV 10 is such a channel intended to teach people...
Revised：CCTV 10 is a channe that teaches people...
原句中的intend不應(yīng)用過(guò)去分詞的形式。
6、Original：They keep focused on money while friends and families slip away.
Revised：They keep focusing on money while friends and families slip away.
focus此處應(yīng)該用動(dòng)名詞形式，keep doing一直做某事，keep focusing on。
通過(guò)以上的分析，在SAT寫(xiě)作中考生需注意以下幾點(diǎn)：固定搭配中的動(dòng)詞形式；動(dòng)名詞或動(dòng)詞不定式可以作主語(yǔ)；不同時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)中的動(dòng)詞形式。虛擬語(yǔ)氣也是SAT寫(xiě)作中容易出現(xiàn)問(wèn)題的地方，主要是由于考生在寫(xiě)作中沒(méi)有使用虛擬語(yǔ)氣的意識(shí)。所以，在平時(shí)考生應(yīng)該加強(qiáng)對(duì)虛擬語(yǔ)氣的了解，注意虛擬語(yǔ)氣中動(dòng)詞的使用。
在學(xué)生平時(shí)的SAT寫(xiě)作練習(xí)中，留學(xué)的老師們通過(guò)長(zhǎng)期的觀察與總結(jié)，發(fā)現(xiàn)了6類(lèi)常見(jiàn)的問(wèn)題，這是導(dǎo)致學(xué)生在考試中丟分的原因。在英語(yǔ)中動(dòng)詞形式有多種，考生容易犯的錯(cuò)誤就是對(duì)動(dòng)詞在不同地方使用的形式把握不清，有的應(yīng)該使用動(dòng)名詞的，卻直接用了動(dòng)詞原形，有的應(yīng)該使用過(guò)去分詞的，卻是用了動(dòng)名詞。今天我們就來(lái)看SAT寫(xiě)作6類(lèi)常見(jiàn)問(wèn)題之四：動(dòng)詞形式。
1、Original: So take all the above factors into account，I may not quite agree with the opinion that parents are our best teaches.
Revised：So，taking all of the above factors into account，I do not agree with the opinion that parents are our best teachers.
本段開(kāi)頭的so take all 本應(yīng)該是伴隨狀語(yǔ)成分，但作者直接用了動(dòng)詞原形，這是錯(cuò)誤的，應(yīng)該和主句的主語(yǔ)I保持邏輯一致，是作者把以上的因素考慮在內(nèi)的。除此以外，原句中作者為能明確表明自己的立場(chǎng)，把may not quite agree改為do not agree。
2、Original：We can enjoy the art of cuisine in cooking rather than tolerating the time-consuming preparation.
Revised: We can enjoy the art of cooking rather than simply tolerate the time-consuming preparation.
rather than的前后用此應(yīng)保持一致，此處rather than后的用詞要與其前面的動(dòng)詞原形enjoy保持一致，故將tolerating改為tolerate。原句中還有一個(gè)用此問(wèn)題，cuisine本意為烹飪，與in cooking沖突，故只保留一個(gè)cooking即可。
3、Original：Drink water with hygiene will certainly benefit the local folks a lot.
Revised：Drinking clean water will certainly benefit the local population.
原句動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ)，將drink該為drinking。原句中還有詞匯表達(dá)問(wèn)題：干凈的水用clean water表達(dá)恰當(dāng)，不用water with hygiene。
4、Original：The rapid development of science and technology has lead to an increasing need for more relaxation in off-work time.
Revised：The rapid development of modern economies has led to an increasing need for more relaxation in off-work time.
原句中l(wèi)ead在現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)中應(yīng)該用過(guò)去分詞，應(yīng)該為led。
5、Original：CCTV 10 is such a channel intended to teach people...
Revised：CCTV 10 is a channe that teaches people...
原句中的intend不應(yīng)用過(guò)去分詞的形式。
6、Original：They keep focused on money while friends and families slip away.
Revised：They keep focusing on money while friends and families slip away.
focus此處應(yīng)該用動(dòng)名詞形式，keep doing一直做某事，keep focusing on。
通過(guò)以上的分析，在SAT寫(xiě)作中考生需注意以下幾點(diǎn)：固定搭配中的動(dòng)詞形式；動(dòng)名詞或動(dòng)詞不定式可以作主語(yǔ)；不同時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)中的動(dòng)詞形式。虛擬語(yǔ)氣也是SAT寫(xiě)作中容易出現(xiàn)問(wèn)題的地方，主要是由于考生在寫(xiě)作中沒(méi)有使用虛擬語(yǔ)氣的意識(shí)。所以，在平時(shí)考生應(yīng)該加強(qiáng)對(duì)虛擬語(yǔ)氣的了解，注意虛擬語(yǔ)氣中動(dòng)詞的使用。
