Our school is big and nice．When you come into our school，you can see two tall buildings．In the buildings there are two computer rooms，an art room，a music room a library and many classrooms．I like to go to the library，because I like reading books．My teachers often tell us:“Reading is good for you．”Near the buildings there is a big playground．We can play football，basketball and games on it．We are very happy。There are many trees and flowers in our school．

Thetreesaregreenandtheflowersarelovely．Thebirdscansinginthetrees．Ourschoolisbeautiful，Ilikeitverymuch名師點評：這是一篇英文作文，小作者通過英語的方式描繪了自己的學校。從英語的寫作角度講，語法正確，用詞準確。但是小作者寫標題時拼寫錯誤了哦，以后要仔細。

當然，英語的書寫上，單詞之間要有空格。（學樂中國特聘教師：許奕文老師）2009-1-418:18:00