There is always a brilliant image living in my heart. That is my dear father. Seen through the eyes of many other people, father seems to be a very ordinary person. But he is quite extraordinary in my eyes, I have never lost my wonder at his good-personalities such as diligence, devotion, care, optimism ever since my childhood. Being a farmer, father works very hard in the fields all the year round. He works from dawn till dusk every day and even till midnight when it is the harvest season. He seldom enjoys leisure with other farmers even if the farm work is not much. He chooses to live a busy life with reluctance to stop for a while. Father devotes all himself to our family. As we are poor, he always tries his best to support our family and afford the tuitions for my brother and me. For the whole family, for brother and me, he never stops working laboriously in the fields throughout the year. Now he has got a wrinkled face and white hair because of excessive hard work, looking much older and weaker than any other person of his age. In spite of all this, father never complains to us. It is his full devotion that we re living a better life now. It is his full devotion that both my brother and I are able to study at college. Father shows much care to us children and my mother as well. Whenever there is any delicious food on the table, he just leaves it to us while he takes the simple one himself. If my brother and I fall ill, he will not hesitate a moment to get some medicine for us or take us to see the doctor. My mother suffers a bad disease. Father looks after her very carefully. He never lets mother do any heavy work both at home and in the field. Mother appreciates him m much that she often praises him as a model husband before others. Father is a person full of optimism. He never complains about our poor life. He is never frustrated by trouble. He often tells us that everything will be all right if we have enough confidence in life. Due to his optimism, we are all confident to face our life and work. We all think that father is not in the least an ordinary man. He plays an extraordinary role in my family. We can t have anything without him. Now I m pursuing further studies at college far away from father. I miss him very much. And I often see him in my dreams. His great image is deeply carved in my mind. 評(píng)語(yǔ)： 本文作者以樸實(shí)的語(yǔ)言充滿感情地刻畫了父親的不平凡的形象，分別從四個(gè)不同的角度描述了父親的勤勞、奉獻(xiàn)、關(guān)愛和樂觀。內(nèi)容真實(shí)感人，行文簡(jiǎn)潔流暢，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，組織有條有理，首尾呼應(yīng)，給讀者以強(qiáng)烈的感染力。 作者用詞簡(jiǎn)潔精確，并能很好地嘗試一些新學(xué)的詞匯及表達(dá)，使簡(jiǎn)潔的行。文更為生動(dòng)。作者沒有運(yùn)用太多復(fù)雜的句式，但能適當(dāng)運(yùn)用介詞短語(yǔ)、分詞結(jié)構(gòu)、強(qiáng)調(diào)及重復(fù)的手法，恰到好處 地突出了行文句式的變化，使文章更耐讀。

　　There is always a brilliant image living in my heart. That is my dear father. Seen through the eyes of many other people, father seems to be a very ordinary person. But he is quite extraordinary in my eyes, I have never lost my wonder at his good-personalities such as diligence, devotion, care, optimism ever since my childhood. Being a farmer, father works very hard in the fields all the year round. He works from dawn till dusk every day and even till midnight when it is the harvest season. He seldom enjoys leisure with other farmers even if the farm work is not much. He chooses to live a busy life with reluctance to stop for a while. Father devotes all himself to our family. As we are poor, he always tries his best to support our family and afford the tuitions for my brother and me. For the whole family, for brother and me, he never stops working laboriously in the fields throughout the year. Now he has got a wrinkled face and white hair because of excessive hard work, looking much older and weaker than any other person of his age. In spite of all this, father never complains to us. It is his full devotion that we re living a better life now. It is his full devotion that both my brother and I are able to study at college. Father shows much care to us children and my mother as well. Whenever there is any delicious food on the table, he just leaves it to us while he takes the simple one himself. If my brother and I fall ill, he will not hesitate a moment to get some medicine for us or take us to see the doctor. My mother suffers a bad disease. Father looks after her very carefully. He never lets mother do any heavy work both at home and in the field. Mother appreciates him m much that she often praises him as a model husband before others. Father is a person full of optimism. He never complains about our poor life. He is never frustrated by trouble. He often tells us that everything will be all right if we have enough confidence in life. Due to his optimism, we are all confident to face our life and work. We all think that father is not in the least an ordinary man. He plays an extraordinary role in my family. We can t have anything without him. Now I m pursuing further studies at college far away from father. I miss him very much. And I often see him in my dreams. His great image is deeply carved in my mind. 評(píng)語(yǔ)： 本文作者以樸實(shí)的語(yǔ)言充滿感情地刻畫了父親的不平凡的形象，分別從四個(gè)不同的角度描述了父親的勤勞、奉獻(xiàn)、關(guān)愛和樂觀。內(nèi)容真實(shí)感人，行文簡(jiǎn)潔流暢，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，組織有條有理，首尾呼應(yīng)，給讀者以強(qiáng)烈的感染力。 作者用詞簡(jiǎn)潔精確，并能很好地嘗試一些新學(xué)的詞匯及表達(dá)，使簡(jiǎn)潔的行。文更為生動(dòng)。作者沒有運(yùn)用太多復(fù)雜的句式，但能適當(dāng)運(yùn)用介詞短語(yǔ)、分詞結(jié)構(gòu)、強(qiáng)調(diào)及重復(fù)的手法，恰到好處 地突出了行文句式的變化，使文章更耐讀。