六級(jí)沖刺備考的翻譯技巧(22)
53. Fallois proposed that Proust had tried to begin a novel in 1908, abandoned it for what was to be a long demonstration of Saint-Beuves blindness to the real nature of great writing , found the essay giving rise to personal memories and fictional developments ,and allowed these to take over it a steadily developing novel. (5 -)
F認(rèn)為,P在1908年試圖開(kāi)始寫(xiě)一部小說(shuō),又為了寫(xiě)一部批判S-B的 偉大作品的真正本質(zhì)的視而不見(jiàn)的長(zhǎng)篇的證明而放棄了這部小說(shuō),其后又發(fā)現(xiàn)這一論文又勾起了其個(gè)人記憶及小說(shuō)情節(jié)的萌生,使得后者取而代之形成了一部穩(wěn)定展開(kāi)的小說(shuō)。難句類(lèi)型:復(fù)雜修飾、抽象詞
解釋?zhuān)罕揪鋪?lái)自歷來(lái)被GRE考生尊稱(chēng)為有GRE文科文章中難度第一的普魯斯特的追憶似水年華,這篇文章的難度遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)高于現(xiàn)在計(jì)算機(jī)考試的題目。普魯斯特是公認(rèn)的意識(shí)流小說(shuō)的先驅(qū),據(jù)筆者推測(cè),本文的原作者必定是研究普魯斯特的大家,因此其文章必然帶有思維的跳躍,、不連貫性、時(shí)空顛倒等意識(shí)流手法:經(jīng)過(guò)ETS的改編后,雖然可讀性略有嗇,然積重難返、無(wú)法救藥,于是墮落成一篇流水帳文章。從本句的結(jié)構(gòu)來(lái)看,也可以表現(xiàn)作者的這種敘事風(fēng)格:本句從that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句開(kāi)始,實(shí)際上是以普魯斯特的意識(shí)流向?yàn)榫€索,以列舉的方式描述其動(dòng)機(jī)的變化,從一開(kāi)始的寫(xiě)別的小說(shuō),其英文為Prout had tried to, abandoned,found,and allowed..。但是因?yàn)閍bandoned之后的狀語(yǔ)for的結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)雜、用詞抽象,以這個(gè)結(jié)構(gòu)不太容易被看出來(lái)。Blindness在此不是指真盲,而是指缺乏辨認(rèn)能力difficult to discern, make out,or discover,視而不見(jiàn)。Give rise to 這個(gè)詞組的意思是引起,使發(fā)生。
意群訓(xùn)練:Fallois proposed that Proust had tried to begin a novel in 1908, abandoned it for what was to be a long demonstration of Saint-Beuves blindness to the real nature of great writing , found the essay giving rise to personal memories and fictional developments ,and allowed these to take over in a steadily developing novel.
54. The very richness and complexity of the meaningful relationships that kept presenting and rearranging themselves on all levels,from abstract intelligence to profound dreamy feelings, made it difficult for Proust to set them out coherently. (5)
各種有意義的聯(lián)系在有的層次上,自抽象的理性至深刻的夢(mèng)幻般的情感,層出不窮并不斷重新組合排列;正是這些有意義的聯(lián)系的豐富性和復(fù)雜性,致使普魯斯特難于將它們錯(cuò)落有致地安排好。
難句類(lèi)型:復(fù)雜修飾、插入語(yǔ)、抽象詞
解釋?zhuān)赫?qǐng)?jiān)徆P者在此做中文翻譯的艱澀難懂,為了讓讀者能夠更好地理解句子的結(jié)構(gòu),本書(shū)盡量把中文翻譯與英文原文的語(yǔ)序相對(duì)應(yīng),而且盡可能的不用意譯。為了達(dá)到這個(gè)目的,可以說(shuō)絞盡腦汁,但本句之難懂也全非筆者之故,原文作者使用了大量的抽象詞。本句仍然來(lái)自于上面說(shuō)過(guò)的這篇關(guān)于普魯斯特的文章。句中的主語(yǔ)是The very richness and complexity,其后的修飾成分長(zhǎng)達(dá)三行,of the meaningful relationships that kept presenting and rearranging themselves on all levels from abstract intelligence to profound dreamy feelings,其中還夾雜著插入語(yǔ),有效地分開(kāi)了主語(yǔ)和謂語(yǔ)。其實(shí)本句雖然結(jié)構(gòu)也比較復(fù)雜,但是不見(jiàn)得比前面的句子復(fù)雜得多,其真正的難點(diǎn),還在于句子中大量的抽象詞的使用。由于筆者在附錄中提到的原因,抽象詞可以嚴(yán)重地占據(jù)大腦資源,因此帶有大量的抽象詞的結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)雜的句子就更為難懂,比如本句就是一個(gè)很好的例子,復(fù)雜修飾與抽象詞狼狽為奸,句意另人難以理解。
意群訓(xùn)練:The very richness and complexity of the meaningful relationships that kept presenting and rearranging themselves on all levels,from abstract intelligence to profound dreamy feelings, made it difficult for Proust to set them out coherently
53. Fallois proposed that Proust had tried to begin a novel in 1908, abandoned it for what was to be a long demonstration of Saint-Beuves blindness to the real nature of great writing , found the essay giving rise to personal memories and fictional developments ,and allowed these to take over it a steadily developing novel. (5 -)
F認(rèn)為,P在1908年試圖開(kāi)始寫(xiě)一部小說(shuō),又為了寫(xiě)一部批判S-B的 偉大作品的真正本質(zhì)的視而不見(jiàn)的長(zhǎng)篇的證明而放棄了這部小說(shuō),其后又發(fā)現(xiàn)這一論文又勾起了其個(gè)人記憶及小說(shuō)情節(jié)的萌生,使得后者取而代之形成了一部穩(wěn)定展開(kāi)的小說(shuō)。難句類(lèi)型:復(fù)雜修飾、抽象詞
解釋?zhuān)罕揪鋪?lái)自歷來(lái)被GRE考生尊稱(chēng)為有GRE文科文章中難度第一的普魯斯特的追憶似水年華,這篇文章的難度遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)高于現(xiàn)在計(jì)算機(jī)考試的題目。普魯斯特是公認(rèn)的意識(shí)流小說(shuō)的先驅(qū),據(jù)筆者推測(cè),本文的原作者必定是研究普魯斯特的大家,因此其文章必然帶有思維的跳躍,、不連貫性、時(shí)空顛倒等意識(shí)流手法:經(jīng)過(guò)ETS的改編后,雖然可讀性略有嗇,然積重難返、無(wú)法救藥,于是墮落成一篇流水帳文章。從本句的結(jié)構(gòu)來(lái)看,也可以表現(xiàn)作者的這種敘事風(fēng)格:本句從that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句開(kāi)始,實(shí)際上是以普魯斯特的意識(shí)流向?yàn)榫€索,以列舉的方式描述其動(dòng)機(jī)的變化,從一開(kāi)始的寫(xiě)別的小說(shuō),其英文為Prout had tried to, abandoned,found,and allowed..。但是因?yàn)閍bandoned之后的狀語(yǔ)for的結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)雜、用詞抽象,以這個(gè)結(jié)構(gòu)不太容易被看出來(lái)。Blindness在此不是指真盲,而是指缺乏辨認(rèn)能力difficult to discern, make out,or discover,視而不見(jiàn)。Give rise to 這個(gè)詞組的意思是引起,使發(fā)生。
意群訓(xùn)練:Fallois proposed that Proust had tried to begin a novel in 1908, abandoned it for what was to be a long demonstration of Saint-Beuves blindness to the real nature of great writing , found the essay giving rise to personal memories and fictional developments ,and allowed these to take over in a steadily developing novel.
54. The very richness and complexity of the meaningful relationships that kept presenting and rearranging themselves on all levels,from abstract intelligence to profound dreamy feelings, made it difficult for Proust to set them out coherently. (5)
各種有意義的聯(lián)系在有的層次上,自抽象的理性至深刻的夢(mèng)幻般的情感,層出不窮并不斷重新組合排列;正是這些有意義的聯(lián)系的豐富性和復(fù)雜性,致使普魯斯特難于將它們錯(cuò)落有致地安排好。
難句類(lèi)型:復(fù)雜修飾、插入語(yǔ)、抽象詞
解釋?zhuān)赫?qǐng)?jiān)徆P者在此做中文翻譯的艱澀難懂,為了讓讀者能夠更好地理解句子的結(jié)構(gòu),本書(shū)盡量把中文翻譯與英文原文的語(yǔ)序相對(duì)應(yīng),而且盡可能的不用意譯。為了達(dá)到這個(gè)目的,可以說(shuō)絞盡腦汁,但本句之難懂也全非筆者之故,原文作者使用了大量的抽象詞。本句仍然來(lái)自于上面說(shuō)過(guò)的這篇關(guān)于普魯斯特的文章。句中的主語(yǔ)是The very richness and complexity,其后的修飾成分長(zhǎng)達(dá)三行,of the meaningful relationships that kept presenting and rearranging themselves on all levels from abstract intelligence to profound dreamy feelings,其中還夾雜著插入語(yǔ),有效地分開(kāi)了主語(yǔ)和謂語(yǔ)。其實(shí)本句雖然結(jié)構(gòu)也比較復(fù)雜,但是不見(jiàn)得比前面的句子復(fù)雜得多,其真正的難點(diǎn),還在于句子中大量的抽象詞的使用。由于筆者在附錄中提到的原因,抽象詞可以嚴(yán)重地占據(jù)大腦資源,因此帶有大量的抽象詞的結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)雜的句子就更為難懂,比如本句就是一個(gè)很好的例子,復(fù)雜修飾與抽象詞狼狽為奸,句意另人難以理解。
意群訓(xùn)練:The very richness and complexity of the meaningful relationships that kept presenting and rearranging themselves on all levels,from abstract intelligence to profound dreamy feelings, made it difficult for Proust to set them out coherently