應試必備： 英語四級級作文點睛
改詞擴句
不改變原句的意思，僅通過詞匯、語法手段使句子看起來更高級、地道。下面請看例子：
例1
Others think that the utilization of waste products will be eliminated sooner or later with the emergence of hi-te . However, I did not consider that factor carefully. Because I hold the view that waste materials can be made good use of to help reduce the living cost.
原句：I did not consider that factor carefully.
改句：I fail to take that factor into careful consideration.
【解析】
在這個簡單句中，主要做了兩個改變，一是把did not改成fail to, 同樣的意思，可是詞匯應用的靈活度卻大大提高。
二是把considercarefully改成了take sth into careful consideration，在考場作文中，詞組的運用是個亮點，而且英語中靜態居多(名詞用的多)，漢語中動態居多(動詞用的多)，在此把動詞consider變成名詞consideration，頓時使英文更加地道。
例2
原句：
You are enthusiastic and enterprising. And you are one of the most talented and diligent in our department. You have already won 2 awards for good academic results.
改句：
You, enthusiastic and enterprising,are one of the most talented and diligent in our department,already winning 2 awards for outstanding academic results.
【解析】
我們可以看到例句中有3個簡單句，咋看上去給人一種啰嗦、累贅的感覺。但細看之下，不難發現3個句子的主語全部是you，因此我們就該聯想到同位語、插入語的應用。從改句中，我們可以發現謂語從原來的3個變成了1個，頓時使句子顯得高級，精簡很多。其次，還有一個改動之處為good，這個詞是常用詞，口語中用的更頻繁些，我們可以想一些同義詞例如excellent，outstanding等等。
例3
原句：
In order to live a good life, it is becoming more and more important for people to learn knowledge well. Because in this modern world, knowledge is everything.
改句：
In order to live a happy life, it is becoming increasingly important for people to acquire knowledge well, for the reason that knowledge is everything in this modern world.
【解析】
首先我們看到原句中出現了more and more，在四六級作文中，它可算是常客，對閱卷老師而言，不具任何吸引力，而且有落入俗套的危險哦，所以在我們把它用一個簡單的副詞來替代，副詞修飾形容詞，相信會令人感覺眼前一亮。
其次，我們還要注意一個搭配問題，原句中的learn knowledge是明顯的中式英語，很多同學會誤用，正確的搭配應該是acquire knowledge。
最后，我們有余力可以把句子通過從句進行相連，使句子看起來更有結構感。
改詞擴句
不改變原句的意思，僅通過詞匯、語法手段使句子看起來更高級、地道。下面請看例子：
例1
Others think that the utilization of waste products will be eliminated sooner or later with the emergence of hi-te . However, I did not consider that factor carefully. Because I hold the view that waste materials can be made good use of to help reduce the living cost.
原句：I did not consider that factor carefully.
改句：I fail to take that factor into careful consideration.
【解析】
在這個簡單句中，主要做了兩個改變，一是把did not改成fail to, 同樣的意思，可是詞匯應用的靈活度卻大大提高。
二是把considercarefully改成了take sth into careful consideration，在考場作文中，詞組的運用是個亮點，而且英語中靜態居多(名詞用的多)，漢語中動態居多(動詞用的多)，在此把動詞consider變成名詞consideration，頓時使英文更加地道。
例2
原句：
You are enthusiastic and enterprising. And you are one of the most talented and diligent in our department. You have already won 2 awards for good academic results.
改句：
You, enthusiastic and enterprising,are one of the most talented and diligent in our department,already winning 2 awards for outstanding academic results.
【解析】
我們可以看到例句中有3個簡單句，咋看上去給人一種啰嗦、累贅的感覺。但細看之下，不難發現3個句子的主語全部是you，因此我們就該聯想到同位語、插入語的應用。從改句中，我們可以發現謂語從原來的3個變成了1個，頓時使句子顯得高級，精簡很多。其次，還有一個改動之處為good，這個詞是常用詞，口語中用的更頻繁些，我們可以想一些同義詞例如excellent，outstanding等等。
例3
原句：
In order to live a good life, it is becoming more and more important for people to learn knowledge well. Because in this modern world, knowledge is everything.
改句：
In order to live a happy life, it is becoming increasingly important for people to acquire knowledge well, for the reason that knowledge is everything in this modern world.
【解析】
首先我們看到原句中出現了more and more，在四六級作文中，它可算是常客，對閱卷老師而言，不具任何吸引力，而且有落入俗套的危險哦，所以在我們把它用一個簡單的副詞來替代，副詞修飾形容詞，相信會令人感覺眼前一亮。
其次，我們還要注意一個搭配問題，原句中的learn knowledge是明顯的中式英語，很多同學會誤用，正確的搭配應該是acquire knowledge。
最后，我們有余力可以把句子通過從句進行相連，使句子看起來更有結構感。
