武漢：六級作文原題解析及原創范文賞析
本次考試首次采用多題多卷，目前六級的兩個版本寫作真題如下：
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Computer and Man by commenting on the saying, It is not a real danger that the computer thinks like man, but that man thinks like the computer. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Maintaining Trust by commenting on the saying, It takes years to build trust, and a few seconds to destroy it. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
有了去年12月份諺語格言題的撐腰，無論今年手氣如何，兩道類似諺語格言題目都是同學們可以hold住的。鑒于與網絡相關的話題在課堂上作為重點講解過，而且今年6月份也考察的是網絡話題，故筆者在此將重點講解on maintaining trust.
首先是審題問題。我曾經在課上講過，15秒鐘必須進入動筆寫作的狀態，否則時間上來不及!這就需要考察同學們的詞匯量了，有同學不認識maintain，以為是mountain,將之譯為山的信任，結果就會讓人貽笑大方。
其次是開始寫作。根據上課筆記，諺語格言題一定記得多舉例，在第一段引出社會現象后，第二段可以用通俗的總分結構，分析兩點原因，但是最好用到舉例論證，用一個大例子替代其中一點原因，第三段也易如反掌。老規矩，總分總結構，最后一定要喊口號或者展望未來，在課堂上都反復提及，也親自給同學們當場操練過。
最后就是檢查了，作文要拿高分，首先保證正確，記得刻意檢查下單詞拼寫，主謂一致，單復數變化等細節問題，力求完美，做一百分的自己。
除此之外，這次六級考題再次關注了網絡科技相關話題和精神品質類話題，接連兩次考察網絡話題，讓那些認為不會連考類似話題的做僥幸心理的同學措手不及，因此建議各位同學在以后的復習過程中，要做到精益求精，高標準要求自己。
隨附為筆者拙作一篇，還望能各位同學一點點幫助和啟發：
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Maintaining Trust by commenting on the saying, It takes years to build trust, and a few seconds to destroy it. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
The contemporary society has witnessed a worrying phenomenon that trust crisis been a grave problem with which this nation confronted, which has given rise to the prevalent and pervasive situation that maintaining trust has been put on the top of our agenda. Just as the saying goes, It takes years to build trust, and a few seconds to destroy it. which means either a community or a person should mind its or his behavior; otherwise, the hard-gained good reputation will evaporate in a minute.
As a side-effect of the prosperity of the market economy, the absence of trust is partly owing to the dishonesty and moral corruption of some businessmen and manufacturers who manufacture or sale shoddy and unqualified products in the pursuit of a bigger profit, which results in the loss of credibility between. History abounds with examples to testify the truth of this saying. I can think of no better illustration of than what has happened to KFC recently. As one of the most famous fast-food restaurants in the world, it is being doubted in China because of its problematic chicken. Indeed, the company has endeavored very vigorously in the past years to erect a positive image in this country: calling for donations to the underprivileged groups, sponsoring sports events and the like. However, the entire mansion of its reputation collapsed in seconds after the news spread wildly online that its raw materials are doubtable in quality. Were this situation to continue, we human beings would live in a torment, or a cold, dull, meaningless and misery world.
In view of the seriousness of this adverse problem, effective measures must be taken to address this issue. The first and most important one is that powerful laws and regulations should be enacted and enforced to ban various dishonest behaviors. Whats more, in the process of interacting, the public should cultivate the awareness of patience, impartiality, integrity, modesty, willingness, and above all, sincerity to others, which can all contribute greatly to eliminating apathy and coldness. At every step, weigh in mind the significance that our behaviors have to the future. And remember, Rome was not built in a day, but it can be destroyed overnight.
本次考試首次采用多題多卷，目前六級的兩個版本寫作真題如下：
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Computer and Man by commenting on the saying, It is not a real danger that the computer thinks like man, but that man thinks like the computer. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Maintaining Trust by commenting on the saying, It takes years to build trust, and a few seconds to destroy it. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
有了去年12月份諺語格言題的撐腰，無論今年手氣如何，兩道類似諺語格言題目都是同學們可以hold住的。鑒于與網絡相關的話題在課堂上作為重點講解過，而且今年6月份也考察的是網絡話題，故筆者在此將重點講解on maintaining trust.
首先是審題問題。我曾經在課上講過，15秒鐘必須進入動筆寫作的狀態，否則時間上來不及!這就需要考察同學們的詞匯量了，有同學不認識maintain，以為是mountain,將之譯為山的信任，結果就會讓人貽笑大方。
其次是開始寫作。根據上課筆記，諺語格言題一定記得多舉例，在第一段引出社會現象后，第二段可以用通俗的總分結構，分析兩點原因，但是最好用到舉例論證，用一個大例子替代其中一點原因，第三段也易如反掌。老規矩，總分總結構，最后一定要喊口號或者展望未來，在課堂上都反復提及，也親自給同學們當場操練過。
最后就是檢查了，作文要拿高分，首先保證正確，記得刻意檢查下單詞拼寫，主謂一致，單復數變化等細節問題，力求完美，做一百分的自己。
除此之外，這次六級考題再次關注了網絡科技相關話題和精神品質類話題，接連兩次考察網絡話題，讓那些認為不會連考類似話題的做僥幸心理的同學措手不及，因此建議各位同學在以后的復習過程中，要做到精益求精，高標準要求自己。
隨附為筆者拙作一篇，還望能各位同學一點點幫助和啟發：
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Maintaining Trust by commenting on the saying, It takes years to build trust, and a few seconds to destroy it. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
The contemporary society has witnessed a worrying phenomenon that trust crisis been a grave problem with which this nation confronted, which has given rise to the prevalent and pervasive situation that maintaining trust has been put on the top of our agenda. Just as the saying goes, It takes years to build trust, and a few seconds to destroy it. which means either a community or a person should mind its or his behavior; otherwise, the hard-gained good reputation will evaporate in a minute.
As a side-effect of the prosperity of the market economy, the absence of trust is partly owing to the dishonesty and moral corruption of some businessmen and manufacturers who manufacture or sale shoddy and unqualified products in the pursuit of a bigger profit, which results in the loss of credibility between. History abounds with examples to testify the truth of this saying. I can think of no better illustration of than what has happened to KFC recently. As one of the most famous fast-food restaurants in the world, it is being doubted in China because of its problematic chicken. Indeed, the company has endeavored very vigorously in the past years to erect a positive image in this country: calling for donations to the underprivileged groups, sponsoring sports events and the like. However, the entire mansion of its reputation collapsed in seconds after the news spread wildly online that its raw materials are doubtable in quality. Were this situation to continue, we human beings would live in a torment, or a cold, dull, meaningless and misery world.
In view of the seriousness of this adverse problem, effective measures must be taken to address this issue. The first and most important one is that powerful laws and regulations should be enacted and enforced to ban various dishonest behaviors. Whats more, in the process of interacting, the public should cultivate the awareness of patience, impartiality, integrity, modesty, willingness, and above all, sincerity to others, which can all contribute greatly to eliminating apathy and coldness. At every step, weigh in mind the significance that our behaviors have to the future. And remember, Rome was not built in a day, but it can be destroyed overnight.
