2024高考英語書面表達一輪訓練（1）附參考范文

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　　書面表達的要求是切中題意,語言準確,條理清楚。寫作既可以體現詞匯、句型、語法等的掌握情況,又可以體現一個人的邏輯思維。因此,寫好一篇短文是件不容易的事。

　　高考命題逐漸向開放式的作文過渡,開放式的作文更有利于考生發揮自己的水平,其難度也相應提高了。因此,對于開放式的作文,只要短文寫得流暢,表達得清楚,體裁正確,邏輯合理,就應視為是一篇好作文。請參考下面一篇書面表達:

　　寫作要求:出國留學已成為一種潮流,請你就此問題談一談自己的觀點,簡要論述留學的利與弊。詞數為100左右。

　　范文如下:

　　Nowadays going abroad to study is very popular. Even some primary school students, whose families are well off, are studying abroad, let alone university students and postgraduates. Studying abroad can widen one's view and help learn about the cultures of foreign countries. Of course, it's a good way to learn foreign languages. But studying abroad is not suitable for everyone because of the high cost and fees. If a student's family can't support him and he has to struggle in a foreign country for a living not for his studies, I think he needn't go abroad. He can study well in China and he will be able to become successful.

　　So going abroad to study is one way, but not the only way, to one's education and success.

　　在寫本篇作文時,在表達上應當注意以下幾點:

　　1.由于高考作文一般要求寫一篇100詞左右的作文,篇幅不易太長,不能隨意發揮。題材廣泛,但不能失去控制。

　　2.在寫作中要盡力避免使用一些生詞,如:"潮流"(trend)。遇到需要的詞匯而不會表達時,換種說法表達即可。因此,上文的第一句"Nowadays going abroad for studies is very popular."就是一個很好的轉換表達。

　　3.對于這個題目,短文中應當有留學的"利"與"弊"兩方面的內容,不要只論述單方面的內容。

　　4.學會使用一些連接詞以及一些過渡性的詞匯,使行文自然、流暢。如范文中的nowadays, even, but, of course, if, so, I think等。

　　5.注意文章的開頭與結尾句。第一句的作用是引出下文,而結尾句是"畫龍點睛"。

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　　(2024武漢武昌五月調研)

　　請根據以下提示，結合自己的學習生活，就“如何緩解壓力”這一話題，用英語寫一篇短文，談談自己的建議或做法。

　　Nowadays students study hard and they are always under a lot of pressure.It's necessary for them to have some ways to ease stress and minds.

　　注意：①無須寫標題，不得照抄英語提示語；

　　②除詩歌外，文體不限；

　　③文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱；

　　④詞數為120左右。

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　　參考范文

　　One possible version：

　　Pressure is a common serious problem nowadays.Many students in our class worry about their exams.

　　Much pressure as we have from our studies，we need a relaxation after heavy work to renew our energy.Furthermore，burying ourselves all day under piles of books is not the only way to study.

　　I'm always under pressure，too.My parents expect me to go to a key university.One evening，I had a talk with my mother.I told her I was not lazy and I really felt tired.I needed time to relax.My mother agreed with me at last.

　　So I think a conversation with parents or teachers or good friends is an essential way to solve the problem.Besides，we can listen to music after class or we can even cry or shout in the open in order to refresh ourselves.

　　下面四幅圖描述了格林先生和他的孩子們在周末晚上看電視的情景。盡管他討厭流行歌曲和樂隊隊員，由于孩子們喜歡，他不得不遷就。請用英語寫一篇短文說明兩代人對電視節目的不同喜好。

　　注意：

　　1．短文須包括所有圖畫的內容，根據行文要求可適當增加細節，使短文連貫、通順。

　　2．詞數100左右。

　　1中書上文字：Top of the Pops最新走紅流行歌曲；圖2中電視上文字：the Gorgons一演唱組名） One possible version：

　　Mr. Green and his children usually spend some time watching TV in the evening. But they don't like the same TV program. His children like pop music very much, but Mr. Green hates it .

　　One evening at the weekend, the children wanted to watch Top of the Pops. They told their father it was performed by the Gorgons, a new group. Mr. Green had to give in. The children enjoyed the program very much while Mr. Green thought that the music sounded terrible and the group all looked like wild men. He didn't listen to them.

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　　高考英語書面表達講義：教育校園話題作文

　　例1：你班李明和王英同學在高三階段有不同的學習方法。請描述下列各圖，適當增加細節使文章連貫，并談談你的看法。

　　Li Ming and Wang Ying are two students of Senior Three. They both work hard and but they have different learning methods.

　　Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listening to the teacher. As a result, he misses lots of points that the teacher makes and it usually takes him more time to finish his homework. So he has to stay up late and doesn't get enough sleep.

　　However, Wang Ying has quite a different way of learning. She listens attentively and tries to catch everything that the teacher says in class. Because of this, she spends less time doing her homework, which makes it possible for her to go to bed early.

　　In my opinion, Wang Ying learns more effectively in class and has more free time to enjoy herself, so I prefer her learning method.

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　　高考英語書面表達講義：教育校園話題作文

　　例2：假設你叫李華，你將作為高三畢業生代表，根據以下要點在畢業晚會上用

　　英文作一簡短的告別演講：

　　1、對三年高中生活的懷念;

　　2、對老師的感謝;

　　3、對母校的祝福。

　　My teachers and fellow students,

　　In a couple of weeks, we'll say goodbye to our mother school. How time flies! Now It's really hard for me to put my feelings into words. The past three years has been really a wonderful journey with you guys, full of laughter and tears.

　　To make the journey safe and fruitful, our great teachers contributed their time, energy, love and the whole heart. Here, we are extremely grateful for all that you, dear teachers, have done for us.

　　It'll soon be the time for us to depart, though unwillingly. But it is not the end. It just means that we're going to begin a new journey.

　　Finally, on behalf of all the graduates present here, let me extend our sincere wishes for our mother school and respectable teachers. Thank you!

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　　5. 以下是一本圖書的基本信息及相關報道基本信息：

　　書名：Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother

　　作者：Amy Chua，美籍華人，耶魯*大學教授

　　出版時間：2010年

　　內容：作者用中國傳統方式教育兩個女兒的故事

　　效應：引發中美教育方式孰優孰劣的討論

　　相關報道：

　　中文版：2011年初開始在中國銷售

　　意外反應：多數中國媽媽不贊同作者的做法

　　最新消息：17歲的大女兒已被哈佛**和耶魯錄取

　　*耶魯：Yale

　　哈佛：Harvard

　　[寫作內容]

　　根據以上信息寫一篇圖書介紹，內容包括：

　　1.圖書的基本信息

　　2.圖書的相關報道

　　[寫作要求]只能用5個句子表達全部內容

　　[評分標準]

　　句子結構準確，信息內容完整，篇章連貫Chinese American and professor in Yale University, was published in 2010. In it, the writer described how she brought up her tow daughters in traditional Chinese ways. The publication of the book caused heated discussion about which educational method is better---the Chinese one or the American one. The Chinese version of the book began to be sold in China at the beginning of 2011. Although the majority of Chinese mothers disapproved of what the writer did, the latest news revealed that the 17-year-old elder daughter was already admitted to Harvard University and Yale University respectively.

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　　2.最近，經常有資訊報道發生在青少年身上的交通事故，其場面令人觸目驚心。因此，你們班同學對于青少年交通事故的原因及后果進行了一次討論。請你根據以下內容提示，給某英語報社寫一封信，描述討論結果并針對如何減少該類型交通事故的發生提出你的建議。

　　原因司機精力不集中，超速行駛

　　酒后駕車

　　青少年不遵守交通規則

　　邊走邊看書、聽音樂

　　后果青少年輕者耽誤學業，重者喪失生命

　　讓父母十分擔心

　　建議（自由發揮，至少兩點）

　　注意：1.詞數：130-170

　　2.可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

　　【參考范文】

　　2.Dear Editor,

　　I’m writing to tell you about a discussion our classmates had about the causes and effects of traffic accidents involving teenagers.

　　There is no doubt that both drivers and teenagers are to blame for such traffic accidents. On the one hand, drivers fail to concentrate on their driving or drive above the speed limit. Some drivers even drive after consuming alcohol. On the other hand, teenagers often disobey traffic rules, such as ignoring traffic lights. Also, many teenagers read books or listen to music while walking, which causes traffic accidents.

　　Some teenagers lose their lives and some are badly hurt and need treatment, which cost them plenty of study time due to traffic accidents. This causes parents to worry.

　　Therefore, in order to reduce traffic accidents, I think the government should force drivers to be more responsible when driving. Furthermore, drivers who break traffic rules should be seriously published. At the same time, teenagers should learn more about road safety and always follow the traffic rules.

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　　2024高考英語書面表達一輪訓練（1）附參考范文

　　寫作要求:出國留學已成為一種潮流,請你就此問題談一談自己的觀點,簡要論述留學的利與弊。詞數為100左右。

　　范文如下:

　　So going abroad to study is one way, but not the only way, to one's education and success.

　　在寫本篇作文時,在表達上應當注意以下幾點:

　　1.由于高考作文一般要求寫一篇100詞左右的作文,篇幅不易太長,不能隨意發揮。題材廣泛,但不能失去控制。

　　3.對于這個題目,短文中應當有留學的"利"與"弊"兩方面的內容,不要只論述單方面的內容。

　　4.學會使用一些連接詞以及一些過渡性的詞匯,使行文自然、流暢。如范文中的nowadays, even, but, of course, if, so, I think等。

　　5.注意文章的開頭與結尾句。第一句的作用是引出下文,而結尾句是"畫龍點睛"。

　　***************************************************************結束

　　(2024武漢武昌五月調研)

　　請根據以下提示，結合自己的學習生活，就“如何緩解壓力”這一話題，用英語寫一篇短文，談談自己的建議或做法。

　　Nowadays students study hard and they are always under a lot of pressure.It's necessary for them to have some ways to ease stress and minds.

　　注意：①無須寫標題，不得照抄英語提示語；

　　②除詩歌外，文體不限；

　　③文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱；

　　④詞數為120左右。

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　參考范文

　　One possible version：

　　Pressure is a common serious problem nowadays.Many students in our class worry about their exams.

　　Much pressure as we have from our studies，we need a relaxation after heavy work to renew our energy.Furthermore，burying ourselves all day under piles of books is not the only way to study.

　　注意：

　　1．短文須包括所有圖畫的內容，根據行文要求可適當增加細節，使短文連貫、通順。

　　2．詞數100左右。

　　1中書上文字：Top of the Pops最新走紅流行歌曲；圖2中電視上文字：the Gorgons一演唱組名） One possible version：

　　Mr. Green and his children usually spend some time watching TV in the evening. But they don't like the same TV program. His children like pop music very much, but Mr. Green hates it .

　　***************************************************結束

　　高考英語書面表達講義：教育校園話題作文

　　例1：你班李明和王英同學在高三階段有不同的學習方法。請描述下列各圖，適當增加細節使文章連貫，并談談你的看法。

　　Li Ming and Wang Ying are two students of Senior Three. They both work hard and but they have different learning methods.

　　In my opinion, Wang Ying learns more effectively in class and has more free time to enjoy herself, so I prefer her learning method.

　　****************************************************結束

　　高考英語書面表達講義：教育校園話題作文

　　例2：假設你叫李華，你將作為高三畢業生代表，根據以下要點在畢業晚會上用

　　英文作一簡短的告別演講：

　　1、對三年高中生活的懷念;

　　2、對老師的感謝;

　　3、對母校的祝福。

　　My teachers and fellow students,

　　To make the journey safe and fruitful, our great teachers contributed their time, energy, love and the whole heart. Here, we are extremely grateful for all that you, dear teachers, have done for us.

　　It'll soon be the time for us to depart, though unwillingly. But it is not the end. It just means that we're going to begin a new journey.

　　Finally, on behalf of all the graduates present here, let me extend our sincere wishes for our mother school and respectable teachers. Thank you!

　　*********************************************************結束

　　5. 以下是一本圖書的基本信息及相關報道基本信息：

　　書名：Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother

　　作者：Amy Chua，美籍華人，耶魯*大學教授

　　出版時間：2010年

　　內容：作者用中國傳統方式教育兩個女兒的故事

　　效應：引發中美教育方式孰優孰劣的討論

　　相關報道：

　　中文版：2011年初開始在中國銷售

　　意外反應：多數中國媽媽不贊同作者的做法

　　最新消息：17歲的大女兒已被哈佛**和耶魯錄取

　　*耶魯：Yale

　　哈佛：Harvard

　　[寫作內容]

　　根據以上信息寫一篇圖書介紹，內容包括：

　　1.圖書的基本信息

　　2.圖書的相關報道

　　[寫作要求]只能用5個句子表達全部內容

　　[評分標準]

　　********************************************************結束

　　原因司機精力不集中，超速行駛

　　酒后駕車

　　青少年不遵守交通規則

　　邊走邊看書、聽音樂

　　后果青少年輕者耽誤學業，重者喪失生命

　　讓父母十分擔心

　　建議（自由發揮，至少兩點）

　　注意：1.詞數：130-170

　　2.可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

　　【參考范文】

　　2.Dear Editor,

　　I’m writing to tell you about a discussion our classmates had about the causes and effects of traffic accidents involving teenagers.

　　Some teenagers lose their lives and some are badly hurt and need treatment, which cost them plenty of study time due to traffic accidents. This causes parents to worry.

　　*********************************************************結束