短文改錯系列9

　　一、短文改錯

　　1．此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤。 對標有題號的每一行作出判斷；如無錯誤，在該行右邊橫線上畫一個勾（√）；如有錯誤（每行只有一個錯誤），則按下列情況改正；

　　此行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。

　　此行缺一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。

　　此行錯一個詞：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。

　　注意：原行沒有錯的不要改。

　　of his room into a passage of the hotel and ask

　　the servant to bring her a glass of water. The servant

　　did as he asked. The Englishman returned to his

　　room, and a few minutes later he came into the passage again

　　and once more asked the servant a glass of water.

　　Every a few minutes the Englishman would come out

　　of his room and repeated his request. After half an hour

　　the astonishing servant decided to ask the man what

　　he was doing with the water. “Nothing,” he answered

　　calmly. “It’s simple that the room is on fire.”

　　【答案】

　　【小題1】lately改為late

　　ask 改為 asked

　　her改為 him

　　he 后加was

　　and改為 but

　　servant后加 for

　　去掉 a

　　repeated改為 repeat

　　astonishing改為 astonished

　　對

　　【小題1】late是晚的 lately是最近，近來

　　【小題2】根據came可知，是過去式

　　【小題3】根據上面的her 可知

　　【小題4】被動，他被要求的那樣

　　【小題5】轉折

　　【小題6】ask sb for sth 向某人要6

　　【小題7】few修飾可數名詞，有every了，就不要冠詞

　　【小題8】跟come并列

　　【小題9】astonished意為吃驚的 astonishing意為令人吃驚的

　　【小題10】對

　　短文改錯

　　’t be ill very often. What’s more, I also get myself relaxing in different kinds of sports. Only in this way I do a better job in my study in high spirit. By doing physics exercise, I’m becoming stronger and confident than ever. I do not think that this is necessary for everyone to spend a little time on sports every day because people’s health is the most important one in modern life.

　　【答案】

　　【小題1】第一個and 改為or

　　【小題2】real改為really

　　【小題3】Take改為Taking

　　【小題4】relaxing改為relaxed

　　【小題5】I前加can或will

　　【小題6】spirit改為spirits

　　【小題7】physics改為physical

　　【小題8】confident前加more

　　【小題9】not去掉

　　【小題10】this改為it

　　【解析】

　　【小題1】一小時或者兩小時

　　【小題2】修飾helpful形容詞要用副詞

　　【小題3】此處taking作主語

　　【小題4】sb be relaxed感到放松的

　　【小題5】only放句首要用部分倒裝

　　【小題6】固定短語

　　【小題7】修飾名詞execise用形容詞

　　【小題8】根據后面的 than 可知，此處是比較的意思

　　【小題9】我認為

　　【小題10】此處是形式主語

　　3．此題要求改正所給短文的錯誤。對標有題號的每一行作出判斷：如無錯誤，在該行右邊橫線上劃一個勾（√）；如有錯誤（每行只有一個錯誤），則按下列情況改正：

　　該行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。

　　該行缺一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。

　　該行錯一個詞：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。

　　注意：原行沒有錯的不要改。

　　I firmly believe that everyone in the world loves their mother. So am I. My mother is a ordinary teacher. She always works hard, just as other mothers do every day. In fact, she isn’t good health. She had been suffering from arthritis(關節炎)for many years. Despite of this, she never stops working or giving up hope. I still remember the day when my mother accepted a card of congratulations for Teachers’ Day from her director. The card was read “thank you for your hard works; Happy Teacher’s Day to you!” At that moment, I was so moving that tears came to my eyes. I am proud for my mother.

　　【答案】

　　【小題1】am----do

　　【小題2】 a-----an

　　【小題3】 good 前加 in

　　【小題4】had-----has

　　【小題5】of

　　去掉

　　【小題6】giving-----gives

　　【小題7】accepted—received

　　【小題8】works-----work

　　【小題9】moving----moved

　　【小題10】for------of

　　【解析】

　　【小題1】根據上一句的believe可知

　　【小題2】ordinary是原因開頭

　　【小題3】in good health固定短語

　　【小題4】一般現在時

　　【小題5】despite后面不要of

　　【小題6】give和stops并列

　　【小題7】此處意為收到

　　【小題8】work作工作時是不可數名詞

　　【小題9】moved指感動的

　　【小題10】be proud of 為固定短語

　　4．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線（___），并在該詞下面寫出修改的詞。

　　注意:1．每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞；

　　2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分

　　Dear Editor,

　　My name is Xiao Hai, boy student in Senior Three．Recently,I’ve read in Shanghai Students’ Post what you need some students reporters．I am anxious to be one of them．I very like English．I have been learned it since eight years ago．Now I can talk with foreigners with English．I can read China Daily．I took a first place in an English Composition Contest．Besides, I do well in a computer competition．

　　【答案】

　　【解析】

　　【小題1】boy 是可數名詞

　　【小題2】賓語從句中不缺少成分

　　【小題3】student作reporters的定語，不需要復數

　　【小題4】like不能用very修飾，要用very much

　　【小題5】I跟learn之間是主動關系

　　【小題6】用英語，in

　　【小題7】take the first place固定短語，第一名

　　【小題8】該事情已經發生

　　【小題9】接受用accept ，receive是收到

　　【小題10】look forward to 其中to的介詞，后面動詞要用doing的形式

　　5．短文改錯

　　It is five years now since I graduate from No.3 High

　　School．Last Saturday，the class that I was on held a

　　get-together，which took us a long time prepare．It

　　was indeed not easy to get in the touch with everybody

　　and set a well time for all of us．We all enjoyed

　　this precious day greatly，remember the time we spent

　　together and the people they were familiar with．It was

　　a pity which some of us were not present as they had

　　gone abroad for further studies，but they called back

　　or sent greeting card from different places．

　　【小題1】graduate→ graduated

　　【小題2】on→ in

　　【小題3】time后加to

　　去掉the

　　well→ good

　　【小題6】remember→ remembering

　　【小題7】they→ we

　　【小題8】which → that

　　【小題9】√

　　【小題10】card→ cards

　　【解析】

　　【小題1】畢業是一個過去發生的事情，使用過去時。

　　【小題2】在具體的哪個班級使用介詞in.

　　【小題3】固定句型it takes sb some time to do sth.

　　【小題4】固定詞組get in touch with sb.

　　【小題5】time是名詞，應該使用形容詞修飾。

　　【小題6】remember與we構成主動關系，用現在分詞。

　　【小題7】與上文一致，是我們熟悉的人。

　　【小題8】that引導起真正的主語從句。

　　【小題9】√

　　【小題10】根據上下文可知這里應該使用復數形式。

　　6．此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤。對標有題號的每一行做出判斷:如無錯誤，在該行右邊橫線上畫一個勾√）；如有錯誤（每行只有一個錯誤），則按下列情況改正：

　　此行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。此行缺一個詞:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。

　　此行錯一個詞：在錯的詞下劃一橫線。在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。

　　注意：原行沒有錯的不要改。

　　I went to see the film after supper. On my way to the

　　cinema, I met an English woman,

　　lost her way.

　　I gave up the chance see the film and took her to her

　　hotel. While go there, I told her about great changes

　　that had been taken place in the past few years

　　and she had told me something about her country.

　　Although I missed the film, but I still felt very happy, for

　　I not only helped her out of trouble but practiced

　　my spoken English. If I had not worked hard on

　　English, I would not have been able to help him.

　　【答案】

　　【小題1】the改為a

　　【小題2】she 改為who

　　【小題3】see 前加to

　　【小題4】go 改為going

　　【小題5】去掉been

　　【小題6】去掉had

　　【小題7】去掉but

　　【小題8】正確

　　【小題9】on 改為 at

　　【小題10】him改為 her

　　【解析】

　　【小題1】第一次出現的名詞用不定冠詞表示泛指；

　　【小題2】who是定語從句中的關系代詞，在句子中做主語；

　　【小題3】to see the film修飾名詞chances指看電影的機會；

　　【小題4】I與go構成主動關系，所以使用現在分詞；

　　【小題5】take place沒有被動語態；

　　【小題6】本句與89行構成并列關系，都使用過去時；

　　【小題7】although不能與but連用；

　　【小題8】正確

　　【小題9】work at對……下功夫; work on進行…

　　【小題10】根據上文可知是一位English woman。

　　7．假如英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌的以下作文，文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加，刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

　　One cold day, an aged lady was sent for her doctor. When he came, she tells him that her right leg was very sore(酸痛)in the knee. The pain sometimes was bad enough to make it walking difficult. She asked him how the trouble could be because she had never before suffered some similar discomfort. After make a carefully examination, the doctor said, “You are in a very good state of health for a woman of your age. I think the trouble in your right knee is just matter of old age. We get diseases as we get old. The trouble will clear up on spring!” “Nonsense, doctor!” she said, “My left knee is perfect, and it is exactly same age as my right.”

　　【答案】

　　【小題1】去掉was

　　tells→told

　　【小題3】去掉it

　　how--what

　　【小題5】some→any

　　【小題6】make→making

　　【小題7】carefully→?careful

　　【小題8】matter前加a

　　on→in

　　【小題10】same前加the

　　【小題1】send for 是派人去請，為主動用法

　　【小題2】文章全文過去時

　　【小題3】walking就是make的賓語

　　【小題4】她詢問的是她的問題是什么，缺少be的表語

　　【小題5】否定句用any

　　【小題6】after是介詞

　　【小題7】examination是名詞，要用形容詞來修飾名詞

　　【小題8】a matter of ……的問題，固定短語

　　【小題9】在春天用in

　　【小題10】the same age相同的年齡，

　　8．下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。

　　增加：在缺詞處加上一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。

　　注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不計分。

　　It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily I

　　the

　　was completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 pm

　　am

　　in Friday.

　　on

　　I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks before. I have been thinking about the question you ask me. In my opinion, you should come back after finished your studies abroad. For one reason, that you are studying is badly needed nowadays in our country. It will be quite easily for you to find a good job. In fact, I know a few big company in our city hope to hire people like you. For other reason I think it will be too more convenient for you to look after your parents as they are getting old. And this is only my point of view. It is up to you to make right choice.

　　【答案】

　　I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks before. I have been thinking

　　ago

　　about the question you ask me. In my opinion, you should come back after finished your

　　asked

　　finishing

　　studies abroad. For one reason, that you are studying is badly needed nowadays in our

　　what

　　country. It will be quite easily for you to find a good job. In fact, I know a few big company in