GRE考試作文的遣詞造句：ETS的6分標準
下面的是ETS對它的評論
This is an outstanding response, even though it is not quite finished. The writers views on the issue are so cogent, well articulated, and well developed that the writer was not penalized for failing to provide a conclusion. What matters is the quality of thinking and writing displayed, not whether an essay is totally finished or has a certain number of words.
這一段對作者的文筆評論的好The writers skill is apparent in the opening lines. The first words, For our grandparents it occurred, immediately spark the readers interest. The quick repetition of sentence structure and, once again, the intentionally vague use of it effectively draw the reader in. By the third sentence, we know that this essay will address the complexity of the issue and that the writer is fully in command of this discussion.
對于歷史的深刻了解~這個是我們很難做到的The rest of the essay addresses the influence of historical events and media on the values of modern society, from the roaring twenties to the sixties and seventies. Insightful analysis accompanies the historical references. For example, the writer persuasively argues that prominent figures advanced their social agendas by capitalizing on the power of the media to change public opinion.
這里也是對于語法句法的評論Throughout the essay, the writer uses language and syntax effectively. Word choice is precise , sentences are structured to communicate ideas clearly , and transitional phrases help move the argument forward
Occasional errors do appear , but they are not intrusive.
Other 6 essays might be more fully developed; indeed, this essay would be stronger if the writer had gone on to discuss the medias role in Nixons Watergate scandal and to bring the argument to its conclusion. However, even in its unfinished state, the essay does present an insightful, well-articulated discussion of the issue.
且不說思想，好的語言，到位的詞匯，豐富的句型和用詞的變幻，精辟的修辭，上對歷史的深刻掌握。
這就是一篇另類的沒有寫完的但是卻能夠拿到六分的文章。
當然，用argument思維考慮，這得不到結論。但是，這難道不提示我們對于文筆的重要性么?
下面的是ETS對它的評論
This is an outstanding response, even though it is not quite finished. The writers views on the issue are so cogent, well articulated, and well developed that the writer was not penalized for failing to provide a conclusion. What matters is the quality of thinking and writing displayed, not whether an essay is totally finished or has a certain number of words.
這一段對作者的文筆評論的好The writers skill is apparent in the opening lines. The first words, For our grandparents it occurred, immediately spark the readers interest. The quick repetition of sentence structure and, once again, the intentionally vague use of it effectively draw the reader in. By the third sentence, we know that this essay will address the complexity of the issue and that the writer is fully in command of this discussion.
對于歷史的深刻了解~這個是我們很難做到的The rest of the essay addresses the influence of historical events and media on the values of modern society, from the roaring twenties to the sixties and seventies. Insightful analysis accompanies the historical references. For example, the writer persuasively argues that prominent figures advanced their social agendas by capitalizing on the power of the media to change public opinion.
這里也是對于語法句法的評論Throughout the essay, the writer uses language and syntax effectively. Word choice is precise , sentences are structured to communicate ideas clearly , and transitional phrases help move the argument forward
Occasional errors do appear , but they are not intrusive.
Other 6 essays might be more fully developed; indeed, this essay would be stronger if the writer had gone on to discuss the medias role in Nixons Watergate scandal and to bring the argument to its conclusion. However, even in its unfinished state, the essay does present an insightful, well-articulated discussion of the issue.
且不說思想，好的語言，到位的詞匯，豐富的句型和用詞的變幻，精辟的修辭，上對歷史的深刻掌握。
這就是一篇另類的沒有寫完的但是卻能夠拿到六分的文章。
當然，用argument思維考慮，這得不到結論。但是，這難道不提示我們對于文筆的重要性么?
