SAT寫作練習中的重復現象
有些同學在SAT寫作練習中為了湊文章的單詞數總是喜歡把簡單的句式復雜化,把一個本應該簡潔的表達方式寫得很羅嗦,甚至把一個意思用幾個相近的單詞反復說明,我們一定要在SAT寫作練習中避免這些重復。
1. 盡量避免重復使用同樣的詞匯。或者有的時候雖然詞匯沒有重復,但意思卻有重復。這時候可以做一些簡化的工作。例如下面這個例子:
The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size. Large 對一個farm來說就是size方面的large,所以in size可以去掉,改為:The farm my grandfather grew up on was large.
更簡潔的表達方式為:My grandfather grew up on a large farm.
2. 有時一個詞組可以用一個更簡單的單詞來替換,例如: My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents farm.
這里的over and over again就可以改為repeatedly,顯得更為簡潔: My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents farm.
以上提到的問題在很多同學的SAT寫作練習中都有發生,復雜的句式讓人讀起來都覺得很繞口,SAT寫作中我們可以通過多舉例來說明問題,而不應該發生這種重復現象。