揭陽市2024高考英語短文改錯、書面表達一輪訓練（15）附參考范文
揭陽市2024高考英語短文改錯、書面表達一輪訓練（15）附參考范文
短文改錯----（全國II）短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1.5分，滿分15分）
此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤。對標有題號的每一行作出判斷：如無錯誤，在答題卡該行右邊橫線上畫一個勾（J）；如有錯誤（每行只有一個錯誤），則按下列情況改正：
此行多一個詞：在答題卡短文上把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉，在答題卡該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。
此行缺一個詞：在答題卡短文的缺詞處加一個漏字符號（八），并在答題卡該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。
此行錯一個詞：在答題卡短文錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在答題卡該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。注意：原行沒有錯的不要改。
George,
It's been a week after we left your family and we are now
76._______
back home. Thank you very much for showing them around
77. ______
your city and providing us for the wonderful meals. After
78._______
we said goodbye to you, we went to Washington D.C.,
79._______
where we stayed for three days. My brother was so much fond
80._______
of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying
81．________
another couple of day. However, my father had to return to
82.________
work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon. It
83．________
was really a nice experience. If you'd like to make trip to
84._______
our city some day, I will be better than happy to be your guide.
85._______
Yours,
Mike
76.after---since
77.them---us
78.for---with
79.正確
80.去掉much
81.staying---stay
82.day----days
83.fly---flew
84.trip前a
85.better----more
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表格提示類
4. 你校同學進行了一場有關高考英語聽力測試的討論。討論的主題是：高考英語測試中的聽力部分該不該取消？請你根據下表中的提示寫一篇短文，介紹討論的情況。
一些同學認為不應該取消另一些同學認為應該取消 聽是語言的四項基本技能之一，不能忽視
聽是獲取信息的重要途徑之一
國際合作日益增多，聽說能力應加強 考試中各地收聽效果好壞不一、不公平
英語教師和語音設備城鄉差異過大
今后并非人人都要與外國人口頭交流
注意：1．文章的起始句已給出。 2．詞數：100左右（不包括已給的起始句）。
3．參考詞匯：取消—cancel
國際合作—international cooperation The students of our school had a discussion about whether listening test in the National Matriculation English Test should be kept or canceled.
Some students think that listening test should not be canceled. They insist listening is among the four basic skills. We therefore can not ignore it. Besides, listening is one of the important channels for us to get information from the outside world. So it should be strengthened today when international cooperation is becoming more and more frequent.
But others don’t agree. They think not everyone has to communicate with foreigners in the future. Moreover, listening test is unfair to the students in the areas where radio signals cannot be picked up effectively. And for certain reasons, there is a big difference in teachers and equipment between the countryside and the city.
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短文改錯
假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞;
2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
(2024·唐山三模）
Online shopping is increasing popular among people in recent years. Some people liked to buy goods online. And I don’t like it, because online shopping is less reliable than the traditional sale. Firstly, some dishonest merchant offer consumers to false information online. Secondly, consumers can’t feel the items that is usually presented by means of pictures. This means the items delivering may differ from which consumers expect. As a result, they may risk returning the items at our own expense. Thirdly, the items might be damaged during delivery.
In word, online shopping isn’t reliable at all.
揭陽市2024高考英語短文改錯、書面表達一輪訓練（15）附參考范文
短文改錯----（全國II）短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1.5分，滿分15分）
此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤。對標有題號的每一行作出判斷：如無錯誤，在答題卡該行右邊橫線上畫一個勾（J）；如有錯誤（每行只有一個錯誤），則按下列情況改正：
此行多一個詞：在答題卡短文上把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉，在答題卡該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。
此行缺一個詞：在答題卡短文的缺詞處加一個漏字符號（八），并在答題卡該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。
此行錯一個詞：在答題卡短文錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在答題卡該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。注意：原行沒有錯的不要改。
George,
It's been a week after we left your family and we are now
76._______
back home. Thank you very much for showing them around
77. ______
your city and providing us for the wonderful meals. After
78._______
we said goodbye to you, we went to Washington D.C.,
79._______
where we stayed for three days. My brother was so much fond
80._______
of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying
81．________
another couple of day. However, my father had to return to
82.________
work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon. It
83．________
was really a nice experience. If you'd like to make trip to
84._______
our city some day, I will be better than happy to be your guide.
85._______
Yours,
Mike
76.after---since
77.them---us
78.for---with
79.正確
80.去掉much
81.staying---stay
82.day----days
83.fly---flew
84.trip前a
85.better----more
***************************************************************結束
表格提示類
4. 你校同學進行了一場有關高考英語聽力測試的討論。討論的主題是：高考英語測試中的聽力部分該不該取消？請你根據下表中的提示寫一篇短文，介紹討論的情況。
一些同學認為不應該取消另一些同學認為應該取消 聽是語言的四項基本技能之一，不能忽視
聽是獲取信息的重要途徑之一
國際合作日益增多，聽說能力應加強 考試中各地收聽效果好壞不一、不公平
英語教師和語音設備城鄉差異過大
今后并非人人都要與外國人口頭交流
注意：1．文章的起始句已給出。 2．詞數：100左右（不包括已給的起始句）。
3．參考詞匯：取消—cancel
國際合作—international cooperation The students of our school had a discussion about whether listening test in the National Matriculation English Test should be kept or canceled.
Some students think that listening test should not be canceled. They insist listening is among the four basic skills. We therefore can not ignore it. Besides, listening is one of the important channels for us to get information from the outside world. So it should be strengthened today when international cooperation is becoming more and more frequent.
But others don’t agree. They think not everyone has to communicate with foreigners in the future. Moreover, listening test is unfair to the students in the areas where radio signals cannot be picked up effectively. And for certain reasons, there is a big difference in teachers and equipment between the countryside and the city.
***************************************************************結束
短文改錯
假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞;
2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
(2024·唐山三模）
Online shopping is increasing popular among people in recent years. Some people liked to buy goods online. And I don’t like it, because online shopping is less reliable than the traditional sale. Firstly, some dishonest merchant offer consumers to false information online. Secondly, consumers can’t feel the items that is usually presented by means of pictures. This means the items delivering may differ from which consumers expect. As a result, they may risk returning the items at our own expense. Thirdly, the items might be damaged during delivery.
In word, online shopping isn’t reliable at all.
